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Sew of the Soul [Sci-Fi]

That would be fine

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Dead.
All the Kate haven't been on in weeks, GM vanished, and plot progression has stopped.
Need like a time skip for the remaining players.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Gothpuppy can post first.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

Firstly, nice bio and I really do like the Jibun no Shindo. I particularly like how it is translated. Vibration of Oneself. Sounds really cool. Empaths are typically fun to play too and I enjoyed the background and dynamic of the ability as a whole. It was well written and pretty nicely thought out. But! The only thing that I personally thought about it was that I felt that it had far too many different applications. It seems to me like it stretches into extremes. I feel like a few of the abilities didn't entirely fit the theme of an emphatically inclined ability. It felt like Mind's Eye of the Kagura with the ability to assimilate matter into ones body, manipulate the emotions of others, and psychometry all at once. I feel like empathy would be focused on a mental, neural, or emotional genetic ability, however a few of the applications seem like they'd honestly stem from more biological/physiological/elemental genetic abilities instead. Almost seems a little awkward at an attempt for versatility. I also feel like you didn't elaborate on just why this is a Kekkei Genkai enough. Like what are the physical, mental, and emotional adaptions that make the Akizakura so different from normal people? From what I read, I almost felt like you could simply things and make it a Hiden instead of an outright Kekkei Genkai. Maybe a little more buff and fluff to make Jibun no Shindo more of a Kekkei Genkai and not just a clan specialization technique.

I also think the assimilation technique should be a fairly high level technique. That coupled with the mystical palm technique which is also exceptionally high for a Genin to freely use. Both of which without any mentioned formal training by anyone (at least in reference to the bio).

I also think that a Medic Genin and a Swordsmen Genin and a Sensor/Scout Genin and a Chakra-control genius Genin are all very different emphasis for this character. They seem highly versatile for just a Genin fresh out of the academy.

Nice character overall though.
I enjoyed the bio. Though, the image is a little mature for a young 12 year old. haha.

I would suggest not making any changes yet until Prince or Beta have a chance to look over the character as well.

The God Complex

Oh man. I missed an Icc Rp.
Maybe I'll catch the next one. haha

Sew of the Soul [Sci-Fi]

I wouldn't use the word supercharge in that case, unless you were planning on making your own head explode or make it more rigid or strong. (physiologically)
I would like each character to have a very specific ability. If you have the power to supercharge things then that would be the full scope of your ability, though you could be versatile in it's execution. Like supercharging walls to make them explode or stimulating molecules to cause elemental change in the environment or replenishing something that ran out of energy.

However, I would allow Hyper Intuition. The ability to manipulate neural electricity to stimulate brain capacity, activity, and processing. That is a perfectly alright ability. Though it wouldn't be a subset of supercharging so much as it would be a specific skill all its own.

Sew of the Soul [Sci-Fi]

Absolutely.
You could also be human and trying to hinder the superhumans. :0

Sew of the Soul [Sci-Fi]

Yes. Everything will be electric based.
But I will allow plenty of creativity in power creation still. Just keep in mind, however, at the start everyone would be just starting to really develop their powers. I'd like to present many opportunities for character power development. :0

Sew of the Soul [Sci-Fi]

Nice. Thanks.

I actually have quite a few ideas already in mind which are a great deal more technical than those abilities.
I'll also see about getting an OOC up this weekened.

Sew of the Soul [Sci-Fi]

I'll see about getting an OOC up this weekened :0