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Developing our nation, is it right?
Meeky said
The best way to improve your writing abilities is to keep writing. Emulate others, draw upon what you like from their techniques, and you'll improve over time, likely developing your own style. Just keep writing and you'll be fine.

The one thing I'd watch for is your grammar and such. Also, always keep in mind what the limitations of the era are. Battlefield communications in the days of yore, especially the medieval era, were pretty awful; you didn't have radios, and you couldn't just yell across the battlefield to a subordinate. Thus, most orders were short and simple, and the tactics you use walking into a battle are usually going to be pretty straightforward. (I.E.: a general may tell his officers to "charge the enemy at the signal" or "move to their flank and attack" and leave the rest to their discretion, because you can't predict everything the enemy will do.)

In an upcoming battle Erimir will be in, I'll be trying to give a good idea of what sort of chaos the medieval battlefield may have had.


thanks for the feedback, i knew that i'm always bad at grammar,
i wonder is warcraft universe is counted as medieval, excluding magic and stuff though...
haha, im no such people,
i wonder, is my RP good enough for you guys?
because, for real, i have never write so much in my life, :D

Panda-Man said
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Thanks :D, it will do so much help for me.
can someone give me a link to good random name generator, i need that for some kind of purpose, any one?
Kingdom of Torfas


The Aftermath
Right Arm Fort

When midday come, General Laugon is walking around the fort when one of his captain come with an elf approaching him, "who are this elf captain?" he said, "he is an elven messenger sir, he have a message from their High command" the captain replied, "come with me" Laugon said to the messenger as he walk into the fort.

"Our Leaders have a message for you," the elven said to Laugon, he then took the letter from the elf, and begin reading it



The moment Laugon finished reading the letter, he ask the messenger "Is this message are sent to all of our generals?" "yes, me and three of my friend is dispatched from Moonshade to each of our invaded settlement and fort." he replied, after hearing the answer he hurried to the place where his army is resting and shouted, "Prepare your belonging, We will march to Moonshade earlier" "You will lead us to your leader now to discuss the matter" Laugon said to the messenger.

Crescent Settlement

As the word spreads, Gruul Flameroar, the leader of Crescent Settlement raid is waiting on his tent at the Moonshade plain when the captain is entering the tent, "Elven Messenger sir" as he bring an elf in, "what is your bussines here?" ask Gruul, "Letter from our Leaders" he said as he give Gruul the letter.

"Hmm, the others might be know how to react, Captain, cancel the siege tower and ram building, we march to Moonshade when the sun is high," he said to the captain as he walk out from the tent. "Captain, Collect all the informations, books, parchments and letters from the Crescent settlement and take it to the ship, after that inform the other fleet to stop the blockade and port near this plain," he said to the captain.

The sun is high, and all of High Orc army is surrounding Moonshade, the gate to the city is opened, while four High Orc general with their black shining armor, accompanied by eight captains, enter the city while being led by four elven messenger, to the place of their leader, the other army is waiting outside the wall, ready to fight but they have been told to just stand ground.

The meeting end quicker than imagined, their representative is coming out while accompanied by the four generals, as they walk out from the city Gruul shout to the whole army "War is Over, now we will march to the Elven capital and make the final decision with them and the Bahaporean generals"

And then the generals, elven representative and all of Torfas army sail and march toward the Elthana Capital to settle the Elthanian Surrender.
Senor Herp said
Sheet fiddling continues. The history is rough, I feel, and too vague, and I am not certain the manpower is reasonable for too much or too little. Initially mistook the manpower for an abstract rather than one-to-one manpower to man. Feel less like standing armies proper and more the scale of house guard, not that that wasn't a significant portion of professional troops in the era besides men-at-arms, mind. What do you think, Syrian? And others, if they care to comment.


Good enough for me, lets see other opinion.
Titan, see PM
SyrianHamster said
IF they start their campaign, they're probably gonna be none-too happy about ex-Imperial provinces not rejoining with the fold, but we'll see. It's all numbers, who needs an established plot when you have a bucket of old dice.


haha, i see, i agree, let god of random show us the way
SyrianHamster said
If anything does happen, it wont be for a while. Need to roll dice to determine their agenda first. Was just drawing people's attention to the potential issue of them existing.


so, if the bohaddon empire start their campaign i bet vanguar, hlondeth, and jouria is their first target after the rebels of course
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