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Crimson Butterfly

YAY!! Looking forward to getting this running :)

@WanderBug

Same here. This is going to be a huge test for me because I need to work on adding detail to my writing. This'll be a great way to improve that.

Crimson Butterfly

Alright guys, I am waiting on kitten's character's background. Then I'll get the OOC up. No rush kitten we can wait a little while.

Crimson Butterfly

Name: Hideki Kita Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: Hideki is about 5'7" and weighs 150. His hair, while long, is tamed to stay out of his eyes through years of styling it away. While not visible unless he takes his shirt off, he has a scar the runs diagonally across the left side of his chest. Personality: Hideki is the kind of person who is extremely friendly to everyone he meets. He enjoys making friends and being around people. He is loud and in many people's eyes can be quite obnoxious. He is loyal to a fault though. Once you are his friend, you could punch him as hard as you could and he would still try to find the good in you and everything you do. He considers his friends to be more like his family. Unfortunately, he can also be hotheaded and never backs down from a challenge. Physical Traits: Hideki moves very quickly and was on the track team. He is not known for his clumsiness, however he is clumsier than most of his peers. While fast, he is anything but strong. In fact, people often make fun of him for how weak he is. Mental Traits: Hideki's mind goes a mile a minute. He can hear one thing in a conversation and it will lead him to a whole new topic. Some call it ADD, he considers it to be normal in his own mind. However, he always gets excellent grades and has made the honor roll quite often to the point where many consider him a genius. However he is not good with processing other people's emotions. They actually frighten him sometimes. Color: #228b22 How they died: Never one to back down from a challenge, Hideki and one of his classmates were racing around the school to the rooftop, the other kid was a gymnastics team member and had known Hideki for a while. As they entered the school, Hideki saw an opportunity for an advantage and decided to use the very rarely used, emergency staircase. He ran up the stairs as fast as his legs would carry him. When he finally reached the fourth floor, he turned hard to go up the final set of stairs grabbing the railing. The next thing he knew, he heard a snap, and he was seeing the first floor rushing up to greet him. He final thought was 'I can't believe I'm about to lose'. Clues Discovered:

@Taro

Aw poor baby didn't even see it coming. Man you guys are giving the Crimson Man good reasons to save your characters. Accepted and don't forget to get me that detailed background. Once all backgrounds have been obtained I'll get the OOC up.

Crimson Butterfly

@FantasyDreams Woops, sorry about that. WIP finished.

@WanderBug

Much better, thank you. Accepted! Don't forget to get me that detailed background soon! I only have Hebi's so far.

Crimson Butterfly

Speaking, I will be getting up a character sheet for Crimson Man. It'll be mostly blank for the time being, but as the RP goes and you learn more about him I'll be adding to it. The clues discovered section will be filled as the teenagers find clues about him in part two.

Crimson Butterfly

Do you still have room ?

@Akurai

Nope, sorry man. If we lose somebody I'll PM you though. I have the feeling at least one person is going to bail.

Crimson Butterfly

My character is going to be male, just out of curiosity what level of accidental are you looking for? For example could it be accidental, but still be his fault? Or would you prefer a complete accident?

@Taro

It could be either one. Let's say he was doing some stupid stunt or something and made a mistake. Yeah he made a mistake, but it wasn't like he chose to die. So as long as he didn't chose to die it wouldn't count as a suicide.

Crimson Butterfly

I'd like to reserve the accidental spot because the crimson man is a crimson butterfly. Is that acceptable?

@Taro

Absolutely. You know what gender your character is going to be yet?

Name: Erin Iwasaki Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance: 5’ 7’’ & 145lb & picture above Personality: Erin is an extremely energetic and outgoing girl, having been surrounded by a loving family and various friends most of her life. She’s not afraid to take risks and is characterized by her zeal for anything athletic. Her life has been dedicated to sports, and it shows in her headstrong desire to always be better. Because of how she grew up, Erin doesn’t have a lot of street smarts or self preservation, but is physically and mentally resilient. At the early stages of the disease, she goes through a dramatic change and becomes much more stoic, almost listless. As time passes, she becomes more introspective and regains the life and energy she had before, albeit more subdued. Physical Traits: The form of a star athlete. She’s fast, strong, and resilient. Mental Traits: Incredibly strong willed and has an natural aptitude for empathy and communication. Color: Orange How They Died: Contracted ALS as high schooler and died within a year. (Much, much more explained through PM)

@WanderBug

Couple little things I'd like you to fix. First things first, I need more detail in the appearance section, way to do the bare minimum. Because the picture you chose doesn't exactly have much to go off of. What color are her eyes? How about her skin? Next, the physical and mental traits are just down right lazy. What kind of athlete is she? Different types will give you different forms of in shape. For example, dancing with give you a lean kind of strength, flexibility, grace, balance, body control. While football would give you muscle strength, speed, the ability to take a hit, etc. At her age she can't be a well rounded athlete, because she hasn't been on the earth long enough. Especially accounting she got ALS and couldn't have continued to be an athlete during that. As for the mental traits, strong willed is fine but that's about it. Why does she have a natural aptitude for empathy? What parts of communication is she good at, public speaking, getting the words from her brain out of her mouth? Now for the color, you blatantly ignored the instructions I put in the character sheet here. What's the code for your color? There are probably a hundred different shades of orange I could use in BBcode and I'm not going to listen to you complain because I chose the wrong one. Your character is not accepted until you fix what I've told you to.

Crimson Butterfly

<Snipped quote by FantasyDreams> After doing that how she died and trying to find a fucking good song for an hour, hell yes I did! And still.... The song could've been better! xP

@kittenlover

Now don't forget about sending me a detailed background as soon as you get the chance. Hopefully Wanderbug will actually get a sheet up and somebody else will take that last spot soon.

Crimson Butterfly

Accepted kitten! Though I'm sure you already knew that.