Franxx

Myriad Reality

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A tempting offer, but I think I’d rather have an ally today.

@Fractured

Sound like your nervous, scared that I might hurt you?

*I mused with a smirk on my lips, smug as I lock eyes with the adventurer*

Myriad Reality

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*looks at you and stares*

Name's Aerith... Has a bird friend... Probably knows magic... Is this what they call alternate versions of one's self?

@Vacare

I dont see what do you mean, what we must do now is focus on the objective at hand.

*I kept re-adjusting my hands, eager to fight despite of my stoic expression as I tapped the sharp blade onto my leather-covered shoulder.*

Myriad Reality

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*Simultaneously with Lily*
Who are you?

@Fractured

A friend, A foe...that's for you to decide.

*My golden ember eyes flickered back to the three, keeping my breath still from my lips as I softly spoke.*

But you may call me Aerith...

Myriad Reality

I REPLIED TOO QUICKLY AHHHH

Myriad Reality

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*I flinch and look up*

There's someone else here... Their aura... It's blue to me, she's friendly? Usually new people show up as yellow in my vision.

@Vacare

*As the depths of reality hit me again, I open my eyes in mirth, open to the essence of the unwanted red hue taking over my eyes, blinking with a small huff, caution and expressionless, I gripped onto the leather handle of my sword and jumped down. Landing softly as I balanced myself on the uneven terrain, I looked back at the three, a small smile gracing on my lips before looking forward, standing in a defensive stance.*

You seem like you need a hand. Mind if I join in the fray?

Myriad Reality

One last thing @Franxx, nice first post! A couple of tricks to make it easier is that we usually use first person present tense for actions, which we’ve found helps keeps the flow going. So something like

Hey, who are all of you??
*The girl with auburn hair said to the strangers in front of her*

would end up feeling more real and impactful if written like

Hey, who are all of you??
*Brushes my auburn hair behind my ear, wariness scribbled across my face*

The second example ends up bringing the character to life, and feels like we’re personally interacting with them rather than reading about what they did.


Again though, nice job hopping in!

@Fractured

Ah thanks! Sorry I got so used to writing it like a book! I mostly do it before i interact fully with anyone so dont worry! Thank you for letting me in aha!

Myriad Reality

*with a stride and confidence, the traveller had ran through the forest, light on her feet as a small gentle echoes through the trees, sliding and passing through the shrubbery and grass, the small gust of wind danced through her each step as she quietly landed onto the ground gentle like the breeze, immediately she used her eyes of god to search for the red hue in a flicker and continue off.*

There you are...

*She hopped to a high vantage point, the small click of her heels hitting the stone walls as she stood up with balance, now watching as she looked up to see Cersei fly around the field.*

...

Myriad Reality

*As wind blows and beckon, the soaring wind grew strong. There stood a girl who watches the vast land as the loud calls of the falcon has echoed through the sky, defying fate as it grappled and perched onto her arm*

It looks like fate has led me here today

*the girl spoke, looking off to the mountain, closing her eyes to see through the world as she felt herself aim wanderless like she has always done before, watching souls move and flicker, an array of life flowing through as her eyes scanned around, she had taken interested at the bright red, hues glistening in interest, blinking to see the bright colours of the world, eyes trained onto the red soul as it slowly diminishes to a dull gray slime*

Cersei, keep your eyes on the perimeter and hold onto the Mana infused gems, throw it when the situation calls for it.

*She passed it onto her friend, raising her arm to make Cersei fly sky high as her other hand took her sword and rest it onto her shoulder, jumping off to investigate the anomaly.*

Myriad Reality

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Hmm, I'm not opposed, but we'd need to get engaged with it first so I'll just say heads up to @Fractured

@Vacare

Hey I'm pretty good! Just waiting on your command! Can't wait to talk to you all!

Myriad Reality

Oooh how is my idea? I basically make an introduction helping you guys within the dungeon, Cersei flying overnight swooping down to blind the current opponent and Aerith hops down in a land and smile. "Looks like you need help, mind if I join in?"