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"Hey brat! I saw you fighting with that thing, I must say that I'm quite impressed" said Gentaro with a stern tone that matched his serious looking face.
He raised his cellphone and showed him the pic of his Cortensia app and the Angel within it.

"Which leads me to ask, had you been through this shit before? and do you have any idea of what's this thing?" Asked in a way that almost seemed to be a threat.

I'm probably wasting my time, this brat seems to be scared to the core... Thought while furrowing his brow even more.
Heh, good that you asked.

Gentaro is totally Law aligned. I can see them fighting in the future xD
Are you in high school or college?
Hikaru watched with a smile and an almost dumb expression.

"Dragon girl fighting, deja vu feeling again..." said to herself
I proclaim with red truth
That was a nice post

Also the idea of coloring characters is not bad.
Have fun writing, that's what is it for no? Don't worry 'bout the number of characters.

I kinda splitted my intro into two post, wasn't sure to use the Angel at the beginning, but seems there is no problem.
"Give me a break" said Gentaro as the creature showed in front of him.

It was a humanoid being of a slender figure and black strips of what seemed to be leather crossing its body, still it seemed to be almost naked. Its eyes were covered by the same black leather and it had a long golden hair, yet its more promiment feature were the wings.

"What's this supposed to be?, an angel? Is it even female or some weird boy?" mumbled to himself.

"I see..." said the winged being with a solemn tone which surprised Gentaro.

"I'm bound to thee until I finish thy life, so be it, in the lord's name I shall smite thee." stated as it raised his right hand.

"Wait, hold on....!" exclaimed Gentaro yet he didn't had time as the being pressed its palm against his body and although slender, it held enough strenght to push him.

"Gaaah!..." Screamed.
In demon's standards the winged being's attack was considerable weak, yet in human's standards even that weakness was strong enough that Gentaro felt as if he was being crushed.

Yet even with that he stood, hardly but he stood.

"Interesting, humans are far more resilient that I thought..." said the angelic being as it raised its hand again, this time however Gentaro didn't wait.

He quickly produced a gun and shot at the being not once, neither two but he emptied the whole cartridge on it, its wings pierced by the bullets, the creature felt while screaming in pain.

Yet Gentaro didn't rest, he rushed against it and without thinking twice smashed the gun on his head. The man was breathing heavily yet he didn't lowered his guard, because the angel had raised once again.

How is that thing alive... and... didn't I shot it? How is it healed again? Thought the man

The angel this time smiled though.

"I see I have no choice to be bound to thee, let's make of this a holy contract then, my services are yours now Master." stated

"Huh? What are you blabbering 'bout?" said the man.

"I've seen through thy heart, thy determination suits me fine, let's see, I shall take rest upon that Comp of thee" said

"Comp?" mumbled Gentaro confused but before he could say more the creature vanished and now its figure popped on his cellphone.

Gentaro still breathing heavily mumbled to himself... "Exactly what's going on here?"

He looked again at the boy that conquered the creature, he walked towards him hoping he may understand something, a hope he felt too slight to be trusted.
Well in my case is not to creep, though I have creeped. Is more because they're simply interesting.
But I've tried different kinds, just as a totally disturbed character I had also written which I claim is the most innocent character ever and it was also fun to do that.
Well I've made several disturbing characters in the past, it's funny sometimes.
Does Oswald collect his own fingernails and dates ripped woman's hands?
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