tenebrae16 said
Umm, sorry, but I don't think there is a spot for you. Thank you for showing interest all the same.Aw, thanks for showing interest anyway. Have a good day.
Well at least I had fun making the app anyway.... May I ask what I did wrong?
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Well at least I had fun making the app anyway.... May I ask what I did wrong?
(These came from an Rp I was doing on the minecraft forums it was a bioshock Rp I took to different post since most of mine were kinda short since the Rp was on the brig of dying at the time. Hopes this helps.)
1.)Riku appeared where Krystal tossed the bag of chips and caught them. He then opened them and started to eat them one by one "thanks" he said with chips in his mouth. After eating half the bag Riku teleported beside Krystal "Oh I just remembered something I wanted to ask a while ago."
2.)Riku then was wondering "Do I need to start taking these EVE things? Also how come I haven't needed them. My plasmid power seems alright and I haven't taken one of them." Riku told Krystal he then thought tried not to think about it, so he tried to think about his memories about him and his parents. Nothing came up he then tried harder, but nothing is still coming up he then started to tear up because of this.
1.)Riku appeared where Krystal tossed the bag of chips and caught them. He then opened them and started to eat them one by one "thanks" he said with chips in his mouth. After eating half the bag Riku teleported beside Krystal "Oh I just remembered something I wanted to ask a while ago."
2.)Riku then was wondering "Do I need to start taking these EVE things? Also how come I haven't needed them. My plasmid power seems alright and I haven't taken one of them." Riku told Krystal he then thought tried not to think about it, so he tried to think about his memories about him and his parents. Nothing came up he then tried harder, but nothing is still coming up he then started to tear up because of this.
(These came from an Rp I was doing on the minecraft forums it was a bioshock Rp I took to different post since most of mine were kinda short since the Rp was on the brig of dying at the time. Hopes this helps.)
1.)Riku appeared where Krystal tossed the bag of chips and caught them. He then opened them and started to eat them one by one "thanks" he said with chips in his mouth. After eating half the bag Riku teleported beside Krystal "Oh I just remembered something I wanted to ask a while ago."
2.)Riku then was wondering "Do I need to start taking these EVE things? Also how come I haven't needed them. My plasmid power seems alright and I haven't taken one of them." Riku told Krystal he then thought tried not to think about it, so he tried to think about his memories about him and his parents. Nothing came up he then tried harder, but nothing is still coming up he then started to tear up because of this.
1.)Riku appeared where Krystal tossed the bag of chips and caught them. He then opened them and started to eat them one by one "thanks" he said with chips in his mouth. After eating half the bag Riku teleported beside Krystal "Oh I just remembered something I wanted to ask a while ago."
2.)Riku then was wondering "Do I need to start taking these EVE things? Also how come I haven't needed them. My plasmid power seems alright and I haven't taken one of them." Riku told Krystal he then thought tried not to think about it, so he tried to think about his memories about him and his parents. Nothing came up he then tried harder, but nothing is still coming up he then started to tear up because of this.
tenebrae16 said
@gamer5910I'm having a few problems with your post. Is it alright if you type up a paragraph of your role playing style. It can be about anything.
Can I just get an example of my style from a roleplay I was in?
Experiment:
Name: Flippy (it's not his real name, but it's the only one people call him.)
Age: 16
Appearance:
Personality (optional): Flippy can keep calm but can snap easily, and through in some emotional dis-functions and you got a train wreck with two legs.
History a.k.a insanity; Flippy when growing up was quite a violent child. When he was six he cause chaos in the classroom it started out small but grew and grew through out his life. His violent side subsided when he was nine, but he then need to get glasses he was then picked on in school for wearing glasses and always staying silent. Flippy was also diagnosed (but not fully confirmed) with multiple personality disorder it was due to the fact he would be normal one second then the next a complete monster example he was in class one day reading a book, but he than slammed the book down and started losing control of himself. Flippy at age ten was also diagnosed with a emotional disorder which most therapists believed to aid his multiple personality disorder. Flippy would always deny the fact there was more than one person inside his head (which was true) but everyone was convinced he had more than one in his head. At age twelve Flippy was finally moved to his first asylum only for close eyeing on what makes him lose control weeks after he was put in the asylum he tried to break out, but he was stopped and contained when he reached the court yard. Age fourteen Flippy now has been to more than ten different mental institutes/asylums his life has changed over that time period he hit breaking point when he was found on the brig of almost killing one of the nurses at his tenth asylum. the nurse was bringing him his dinner when Flippy was able to break out of his room and hold her hostage not wanting any of the doctors to keep him from escaping, after the nurse tried to escape Flippy caught her a second time and almost chocked her to death but stop before she lost her last breath. Flippy let her go and collapsed to the floor thinking about what he almost had done. Age sixteen Flippy was no where near better he was moved to one last place many doctors hope that it would be the place where he would finally be cured of his problem.
Power: Blood manipulation (Flippy is able to manipulate his own blood to form a solid object of his choice, he can also launch it at others than turn it into like a spike or something, he can also say if he has a puddle his own blood can use it as well.)
Weakness: Even though his ability can do a lot it also has a major weakness. First this ability only applies to his blood no one else's so it can be quite painful getting the blood out he can force it through his skin which you would imagine being quite painful, or he has to be bleeding somehow. Second he also could die from blood lost if he over does it like he can't just magically take all his blood out of him and still be able to move. Third he most of the times loses control of his emotions which apply a lot to his power, and also remember about his bad temper.
Random fact: He is mostly clam and under control when listening to music out of his headphones, and also loves to read books/anything to pass time.
Name: Flippy (it's not his real name, but it's the only one people call him.)
Age: 16
Appearance:
Personality (optional): Flippy can keep calm but can snap easily, and through in some emotional dis-functions and you got a train wreck with two legs.
History a.k.a insanity; Flippy when growing up was quite a violent child. When he was six he cause chaos in the classroom it started out small but grew and grew through out his life. His violent side subsided when he was nine, but he then need to get glasses he was then picked on in school for wearing glasses and always staying silent. Flippy was also diagnosed (but not fully confirmed) with multiple personality disorder it was due to the fact he would be normal one second then the next a complete monster example he was in class one day reading a book, but he than slammed the book down and started losing control of himself. Flippy at age ten was also diagnosed with a emotional disorder which most therapists believed to aid his multiple personality disorder. Flippy would always deny the fact there was more than one person inside his head (which was true) but everyone was convinced he had more than one in his head. At age twelve Flippy was finally moved to his first asylum only for close eyeing on what makes him lose control weeks after he was put in the asylum he tried to break out, but he was stopped and contained when he reached the court yard. Age fourteen Flippy now has been to more than ten different mental institutes/asylums his life has changed over that time period he hit breaking point when he was found on the brig of almost killing one of the nurses at his tenth asylum. the nurse was bringing him his dinner when Flippy was able to break out of his room and hold her hostage not wanting any of the doctors to keep him from escaping, after the nurse tried to escape Flippy caught her a second time and almost chocked her to death but stop before she lost her last breath. Flippy let her go and collapsed to the floor thinking about what he almost had done. Age sixteen Flippy was no where near better he was moved to one last place many doctors hope that it would be the place where he would finally be cured of his problem.
Power: Blood manipulation (Flippy is able to manipulate his own blood to form a solid object of his choice, he can also launch it at others than turn it into like a spike or something, he can also say if he has a puddle his own blood can use it as well.)
Weakness: Even though his ability can do a lot it also has a major weakness. First this ability only applies to his blood no one else's so it can be quite painful getting the blood out he can force it through his skin which you would imagine being quite painful, or he has to be bleeding somehow. Second he also could die from blood lost if he over does it like he can't just magically take all his blood out of him and still be able to move. Third he most of the times loses control of his emotions which apply a lot to his power, and also remember about his bad temper.
Random fact: He is mostly clam and under control when listening to music out of his headphones, and also loves to read books/anything to pass time.
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Teknonick said
OMG, I've just noticed. Gamer, I thought you were someone else I knew. I don't exactly remember you... so can you please refresh my mind?
I'm the same gamer from the minecraft fourms remember the code lyoko Rp.
Teknonick said
Yes, you can claim Bravery. Apps are ready, so you can make them now!As for Gamer, I'm not surevI know what you mean. Are you Collin? If so, then yeah, that will be fine in this RP. I wont be as strict in this one as I am in the other.And eveyone! I plan on starting this roleplay late Sunday, or possibly Monday. If y'all have your apps finished by then, we'll have no problems and will be able to start without a hitch!EDIT: Oh flip, you are him! Wow, I didn't realize you had joined. lol.
So did I do good on my app or not?...
Username: gamer5910
Pure Name: Kindness
Nickname: Riku
Personality: Kind, keeps to self, silent, friendly.
Example Post: (I assume this is the part I post an example of me rping, but since Tek you already know my rping skills.)
Pure Name: Kindness
Nickname: Riku
Personality: Kind, keeps to self, silent, friendly.
Example Post: (I assume this is the part I post an example of me rping, but since Tek you already know my rping skills.)
I don't get the personality part of the app?
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