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I have some ideas that I've been running through my brain for the actual prison, I can't figure out what is best. I want it to be marginally realistic, but cool of course. I want it to be difficult too, that way we aren't busting out after only a page of posting. I plan for us to RP our life in the prison a bit, if you desire to have your character know someone or have become friends with them now or even prior to getting locked up, just discuss it and agree on it and that's fine. We are gonna just deal with the daily routine, deal with drama and terror that comes with being in a prison, the big bad jerks that want to run shit, we gotta deal with that. Also there will be hazing by the guards. All stuff to honestly prolong the RP and prevent it from ending after only 3 pages of posting lol. Once all of us are somewhat familiarized with each other, perhaps even friendly. We will start working on the escape and see where that takes us.
Shadowcatcher said
im going to do a "the next day" post, give Milo and Jack their Jaegers finally and i'll come back to Joshua


Sounds good. On the note of the military, you should stick with your plan, that's a life setting plan. Mine wasn't so well thought out. I'm out here going on convoy's outside the wire every other day, some times every day. I either drive or am in the turret. That's no way to make a career, no way to set up my life outside the military. You're doing it so smart and I wish I had the patience to do what you did. You got a plan girl, stick with it and make a hell of a life for yourself.
DaDrummer, that clears it up perfectly, just don't go killing folks just yet lol. I actually really like that power, it's cool.

PoisonLillies, I like your uniform appearance but just wanted to remind you that they are in fact white with gray trim, not orange. I only said they are pretty much exactly like the standard orange two piece outfits you see in today's prisons.

Little Ninja, I see you wanna rock sleeveless outfit like me, great minds think alike lol. For altering, I just didn't want your description of your power to appear so powerful. You used the phrase "making the person a vegetable that is free to control whenever he pleases. " That one line makes you sound like a complete god lol. I suppose you don't have to dumb down your description, it was just what I thought you should do in that instant, so long as you don't/can't do that right off the bat, it should be good. also, now that you cleared that up about the names, I understand completely and agree completely. I want a quick and witty, single word is possible, name for us to be called on the fly such as mutant, or mutey, or supe, or whatever but not those of course. All while keeping the scientific nomenclature as Homo Evoludas is good.
Shadowcatcher said
@Garrisoni knew your day job was awesome. im in college to be a Nurse. one day i want to work in the air force :3about Phloem, he is in a different timezone but i'll give him a chance. he's active, just not as much as everyone else.@Pheonixits no biggie. it was at a point where we could still continue so its not a problem. That and Milo got what he deserved for it.edit: @Garrison i read your post, its good. i'll wait for at least Pheo and Avan


You should definitely do that, you'll come in as an officer and make bank. I'm in the Army, I should have went Air Force :(
As Sean revealed the hidden agenda, Josh was relieved. Mostly because it didn't appear to be some sinister plan to get them all killed or arrested but in fact, a legit operation that if they failed, would support far more devious acts. All Josh wanted to do was make sure they weren't walking into a trap, as so many people tend to hire Merc's for jobs that are intended to fail and get them busted or turned to ash. "So you want to snatch up this Titan Air-Carrier, well that's something I can get behind." he said, unfolding his arms and taking a closer look at the 3d model. He wasn't all that familiar with them but if they could do what Sean claimed, than it really was important that they get their hands on it, or at least keep it out of the Vultures. "So, when do we start?" he asked inquisitively.
You don't have to make it like an RPG video game or like DnD, you don't have a number of spells per day lol. Just be mindful of what you're doing, how you do it, and how often. We'll keep it simple for as long as simple works.
I posted pretty much from my last point so I'm good there. I have a dark feeling Phloem isn't going to be active, just given off the activity so far and his lack of activity. I also don't even recall who Pheonix is lol, so there's that. I'm pretty much caught up. I skimmed over the recovery stuff but got the gist of it all. Also, my day job is a 24 hour job. I'm a soldier deployed in Afghanistan, hence the sweat from being on mission. I was gunning in a MAXPRO most of the day.
OOC: Hopefully I didn't over look someone talking to my character beyond where he was shown to his room. If I need to edit, just let me know.

Josh naturally followed them as they all ran down the hall to watch as the senior pilots headed off to combat the threat. He stood the furthest away from everyone else. Partly because he was the new guy, unfamiliar to these people. This was also the first time he'd been in a control room before and it scared him, all the memories of his parents flooded back to him. He had to shake them of course, he refused to look weak in front of these guys. He scanned the room, the monitors, the chatter over the radio and absorbed it all. Getting accustomed to this life as quickly as possible was his goal. All his concentration broke though, once it looked bad for Iris and Leo. His heart sank, he was reliving his parents death all over again. He looked away, then to the floor. Clenching his fist. He kept his composure and remained silent. This wasn't the kind of first day he expected.

He waited it out, up until he was taken to his room. There wasn't anything for him to do at the moment so he unpacked and tried to take his mind off what just happened. Josh finished some time later and sat on his bed, staring at the photo from his pocket. He knew in his heart that being a pilot was his destiny but his start to destiny was so discouraging. "Life's a bitch, isn't it?" he said out loud to the picture of his parents. He swallowed the lump in his throat and decided to wait until he was called upon.
Ok, so a lot of stuff to cover here. Do you want good news or bad news first....Doesn't matter, you get what you get muwhahaha. Alright, I'm done.

I would like to remind everyone for their appearance section to include how you wear your prison outfit, it's for variety among players.
Also, I don't care that most of us are 23, I picked it cause I'm 23.

So let's start with FireHeartWolf since you're on this page. I think your character is really cool, your power concerns me a little but not to the point where you need to edit it. Just be cognizant that it is very easy for that to be OP. You can cripple any one person or possibly even more if left unchecked so you have to remember that the bracelet is severely hindering your power. So an example would be that you wish a guard is on fire, what he might feel is an itchy sensation, something uncomfortable but not necessarily painful. It needs to be like this, at least for a little while then you can progressively amp up. You have a really dangerous power is all I'm saying, it goes without saying that you can't be OP. Any questions? So long as you keep your power in check, you're good and ACCEPTED.

Next is PoisonLilies, your character is awesome because you're not OP in the general sense but your so critical to an escape. I like that. No need for a long story here, you're ACCEPTED.

Now for Questionmark. I desperately need you to clean up your CS, fix all the spacing and make it nice and neat so it can be read through. Other than that, I like your power, I like what your character is about. ACCEPTED.

Second to last, Little_Ninja. I like your skills, very helpful for the escape process. Your history is crazy long, which I suppose isn't a problem, just seems unnecessary. On the note of history and such, I don't like you running for a state governor, that's really unrealistic and just crazy. You couldn't possibly brain wash enough people in order for that to be feasible. Just scratch that and act like it never happened and then that's fine. Your power is even scarier than FireHeartWolf's. You have an extremely OP ability. You have to be extremely limited because the crippling and destructive potential that power has, makes you a huge threat. With that being said, I appreciate you recognizing that the bracelets will limit you but I'd still like you to tweak your description to not come off as so powerful. More importantly, you are going to have to operate at like 5-10% capacity so as to not be OP. So just don't use it in an OP way and we should be good, you are ACCEPTED.

Lastly, DaDrummer. Your tweak on Adenosine Triphosphate is incredibly genius. I like it so much because it has a science to back it up. Nothing is more cool or threatening to me than when you can explain how or why your body can do this super human act other than just saying you're a Homo Evoludas and you can shoot lasers from your eyes because you can. I am going to ask that you break your ability down Barney style though, what exactly do you mean by concussive and destructive force. As for the part where you can Hulk out, does that just make you big and strong or does it do anything for your resiliency? The final word is...dramatic music please. ACCEPTED.

Unless anyone has any better ideas, when we are referred to as a species, Homo Evoludas sounds fine. I was hoping for something short and easy to roll of the tongue though.

I do have a friend whom I already RP with who is interested, I know I stopped accepting applications but she gets a seat cause I'm mad with power as GM muwahhaha.....Anyway, she'll include her CS when she can. It's unfinished but I do know she want's to have Pyrokinesis.

I think I covered everything, if not, please drop a complaint in the trash can and suck it up...or just post your question on here, that probably will get you further.
I'm not a girl so no, I don't know what it feels like to take off my bra but I literally just peeled my body armor off and my combat shirt off me that was really sweaty cause I just returned from mission. I'm gonna do my best to get caught up and get a post in here soon.
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