Ok, so a lot of stuff to cover here. Do you want good news or bad news first....Doesn't matter, you get what you get muwhahaha. Alright, I'm done.
I would like to remind everyone for their appearance section to include how you wear your prison outfit, it's for variety among players.
Also, I don't care that most of us are 23, I picked it cause I'm 23.
So let's start with FireHeartWolf since you're on this page. I think your character is really cool, your power concerns me a little but not to the point where you need to edit it. Just be cognizant that it is very easy for that to be OP. You can cripple any one person or possibly even more if left unchecked so you have to remember that the bracelet is severely hindering your power. So an example would be that you wish a guard is on fire, what he might feel is an itchy sensation, something uncomfortable but not necessarily painful. It needs to be like this, at least for a little while then you can progressively amp up. You have a really dangerous power is all I'm saying, it goes without saying that you can't be OP. Any questions? So long as you keep your power in check, you're good and ACCEPTED.
Next is PoisonLilies, your character is awesome because you're not OP in the general sense but your so critical to an escape. I like that. No need for a long story here, you're ACCEPTED.
Now for Questionmark. I desperately need you to clean up your CS, fix all the spacing and make it nice and neat so it can be read through. Other than that, I like your power, I like what your character is about. ACCEPTED.
Second to last, Little_Ninja. I like your skills, very helpful for the escape process. Your history is crazy long, which I suppose isn't a problem, just seems unnecessary. On the note of history and such, I don't like you running for a state governor, that's really unrealistic and just crazy. You couldn't possibly brain wash enough people in order for that to be feasible. Just scratch that and act like it never happened and then that's fine. Your power is even scarier than FireHeartWolf's. You have an extremely OP ability. You have to be extremely limited because the crippling and destructive potential that power has, makes you a huge threat. With that being said, I appreciate you recognizing that the bracelets will limit you but I'd still like you to tweak your description to not come off as so powerful. More importantly, you are going to have to operate at like 5-10% capacity so as to not be OP. So just don't use it in an OP way and we should be good, you are ACCEPTED.
Lastly, DaDrummer. Your tweak on Adenosine Triphosphate is incredibly genius. I like it so much because it has a science to back it up. Nothing is more cool or threatening to me than when you can explain how or why your body can do this super human act other than just saying you're a Homo Evoludas and you can shoot lasers from your eyes because you can. I am going to ask that you break your ability down Barney style though, what exactly do you mean by concussive and destructive force. As for the part where you can Hulk out, does that just make you big and strong or does it do anything for your resiliency? The final word is...dramatic music please. ACCEPTED.
Unless anyone has any better ideas, when we are referred to as a species, Homo Evoludas sounds fine. I was hoping for something short and easy to roll of the tongue though.
I do have a friend whom I already RP with who is interested, I know I stopped accepting applications but she gets a seat cause I'm mad with power as GM muwahhaha.....Anyway, she'll include her CS when she can. It's unfinished but I do know she want's to have Pyrokinesis.
I think I covered everything, if not, please drop a complaint in the trash can and suck it up...or just post your question on here, that probably will get you further.