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Oohh excellent post! How long should it actually take Raquelle to get back? The soldiers marched for a whole day to get to Jolly's farm, but maybe the forest would be helping her along?

Also, do you want to play the sister? I don't even have a name or anything, so if you do it's totally your character. If you want, that is. :3
Hmm, as for Dorothea's curse, she's actually just starting to learn to not be a spoiled brat. In the beginning she'd yell and hiss and put people down when she doesn't get her way -- she's starting to think things through and act more mature. So I'm thinking maybe she shouldn't be human again til near the end, and she should break the curse herself. Maybe it's her childishness that's keeping her a cat. :3
Aw man, awesomer and awesomer! You're hot tonight! xD Go go go!
Ooohhh I like the alliance idea! All the nasty baddies! Brilliant! :3 Also Orin, yes. He should be able to drive August crazy too, given he can see through his eye.

Yea I've just completely ruined a painting I've been working on for a couple months (by getting way too cocky), so I've put it away in disgust so hopefully my art teacher will have an idea next class. Boo. So. Mood ruined. :<

Also, I had a vague idea that's probably way too late in the game. Basically, that Narissa has August's little sister. My thought was that maybe the sister was already cursed with something horrible since early childhood, and Narissa initially got August to help her by promising to cure her. Only, Narissa kept asking him to do worse and worse things, until she started threatening the girl and August had no choice but to keep going. I just think that August's reasons otherwise for doing awful things are kinda flimsy for such an upstanding guy.
Ok, edited! Hopefully a bit better now.
As always, no sweat! Good luck!

I've actually been considering adding to my post -- it's not fair that I keep forcing your characters to explain things to my characters. x3
Without a word, August removed the scabbard from his belt and presented it, sword and all, to Will. His eyes were stony as ever. He wasn't looking for forgiveness, and he wasn't apologizing. He would do whatever was necessary to see Narissa destroyed and the kingdom safe -- to ensure that Dorothea and Liam and Sam made it out of this alive. He had traded two guardsmen's lives for Dorothea's continued existence, and he didn't regret it.

Dorothea's heart swelled ten sizes, and she placed a delicate kiss on Liam's cheek. "I love you, my darling Liam," she purred happily.

"What is this, an inn?" roared a voice on the stairs. Prince Bryn of Verinia stomped regally down the stairs, barefoot and in silken pajamas. His blond hair was disoriented and his eyes were blearily livid. "Jolly! What are all these men doing here?" He stopped at the banister and squinted at an insignia on one soldier's sleeve. "What are all these Eldonian soldiers doing here? Were they invited? Are we under siege? Jolly!"

He rounded the doorway and stopped immediately upon seeing Liam canoodling with a cat. "And the prince of Itelia!" he sighed, raising his arm in exasperation. "Would someone tell me what is going on! Shall I prepare my gauntlets?" he added sarcastically.

August turned only enough to see the source of the brassy voice, and he clenched his jaw. His experience with the prince of Verinia had always been tiresome at best. Bryn was on an ever-growing list of people he'd like to curse with everlasting silence.

The giant, sitting in a corner with the dog in his lap, only stared morosely at the prince, without any effort to respond to such accusations.

Dorothea raised her head, looking squarely at Bryn. "Your aunt, the Queen Narissa, has turned me into a cat, grossly manipulated King Tommen, and tricked Prince Liam into very nearly waging war on Verinia, in her own bid for power. This is as far as these soldiers go. We march at dawn back to Eldonia, now that the truth is known."

Bryn stared at the talking cat for a long, silent moment.

"Well." He went quiet awhile longer, glancing around to be sure everyone else had, indeed, just heard the cat speak. "Princess Dorothea, I presume." At her acknowledgment he cleared his throat. "I was just on my way to offer your father my assistance in your recovery. I see you're .. still in one piece. Good. As for my dear aunt Narissa," he addressed Liam and Will, "I can't say I'm surprised. She is ... a black sheep, to put it mildly. Witchcraft, narcissism, a laugh that would make babies cry. I'm surprised it's taken you all this long to realize what a snake she is." His smug grin was very short-lived. He cleared his throat and squared his shoulders.

"Princess Dorothea of Eldonia. Prince Liam of Itelia. I offer my sword to your cause. I've already come this far for the purpose of assisting the Eldonian royal family. Allow me to accompany you the rest of the way." The request was only for formalities: of course he was coming with them. But after a moment his expression faltered curiously. "Prince Liam, may I say you look rather ill, are you all right?"
So heeyy I had a weird idea. What if I introduced a contestant for Sam's attention? A prince of Verinia perhaps? That way she'd get to interact with somebody who's not the Marshal, now that Dorothea and Liam are glued together. x3
Rulan trudged along beside the angry prince with a dull look on his face. His mouth twitched.

"So you're telling me," he began slowly, with a slight growl of disbelief, "that a noble son spends his life growing up in a bubble of high walls and tipped rapiers, never exposed to the outside world. And to make up for the complete lack of life experience he's shoved into a lion pit with a stick and a pair of fancy shoes and told not to come out til he's pulled all their teeth." What kind of bizarre, pompous assholes were these people who ran the world now? What happened to logic and discipline and princes who knew the difference between life and death? "These quests you're on are what we call hazing. It doesn't mean shit about your character or your worth, they're just a test of how gullible you are." His own family would roll over in their graves if they heard this was the sort of thing that proved the worth of a king. He set his jaw and glared into the darkness ahead.

"As long as you think you're obligated to carry out these useless kiddie-dares, I'm obviously obligated to go with you. And as long as I'm around there'll be no more toothpicks or fancy shoes. You'll handle these things the way I tell you. The right way."
"You're fine," he drawled without one iota of concern, too busy examining the shine of sunlight on his Hello Kitty lighter. He was out of smokes, though. The gum was all right. He liked it stiff and ten years old.

He could feel her aura jittering beside him, though. He didn't like the word aura, and he made a face the moment he thought it -- too hippie for his taste -- but another word didn't come to mind.

"Chill out." He sighed and flicked the lighter a few times, watching the fire spark and disappear. "Ya don't breathe right and ya talk too fast. Ya let somethin get in your head and run it like a freight train off a cliff." The flame flicked and went out.

After awhile he finally looked at her with his usual dull gaze. "You're fine," he repeated with more conviction, and he raised his eyebrows at her meaningfully. He saw, very clearly in the corner of his eye, how hard her hands were shaking, but it didn't phase him.

"I don't even know that you're actually infected with anything at all, probably just your own body getting used to that power surging your muscles and straining your bones. Somethin's woke up in your core, it'll take an adjust." The lighter flicked to life. "But hey, if you really think you're actually poisoned, all right I'll believe you, but you won't like the cure. So I suggest you use that power of yours and get rid of it yourself."
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