@WilsonTurner, I very well appreciate your throughness, and thank you for not holding grudges and/or angry responses toward us other RPers (especially me ^^). I totally understand your view point and how you would like any fellow players to acknowledge your suggestions and critism. I personally believe critism and other forms of interpersonal correction is healthy for any group. Now that this seems to be sorted out, I'm gonna go sit in my corner with my potato chips...
@GodOfWar, you say flamewar, but I am not flaming. I am not intending to be disrespectful or rude. I am intending to correct what is, in my opinion, because that is all one can ever go on with fiction, illegitimate and unrealistic problems or characteristics.
I apologize, I had no intentions of accusing you of flame war, and I hope it didn't come across too strongly if it seemed I did. I was only trying to add a little humor to the current friendly argument. Again, I apologize for my wrong-timed meme. No hard feelings?
Here's an attempt at a character for you, let me here some thoughts. And yes, I know it's long-winded, and very much so.
Full Name: Erik Tan Alias: Erik Rank: Sergeant Major Occupation: Raider/Security Guard (General Infantryman) Prior Service: G.I. in the Federation Army (Deserted) Age: 42 Credentials: -Federation Colonial Marines -13th Siberian Front, 4th Division, 32nd Platoon -Sergeant Major leading Kiro Squad -Received the Insignia of Valor for saving 32nd Platoon in a fierce siege using cunning ruse. -One count of Desertion, punishment when detained: death. -Bounty: 150,000 Credits Alive; 10,000 Confirmed Dead
Federal Armed Forces Analysis Agency records on Sgt.Maj. Erik Tan: -Name: Erik Tan -Age: 39 -Rank: First Sergeant -13th Siberian Front, 4th Division, 32nd Platoon, Kiro Squad -Loyalty: Concerning -Physical Condition: Above Optimal -Mental State: Sub-Optimal -Tactical Ability: Optimal -Accuracy rating (Assault Rifle): 100%-30m, 96%-100m, 84%-500m -Reaction Time: 0.342 seconds -Max. Carrying Capacity: 210 lbs. -Max. Sprinting Speed: 1.4 mph -Soldier Efficiency: 92% Comments: The Sergeant is in grand condition, though possesses a wavering care for the Federation and its war efforts. Army Code 158, Protocol L-13 will be enacted. The sergeant will be stationed at Kislo while receiving Pseudo-Stress Pills for his "issues."
Comment:
4 weeks into being stationed at Kislo, the Rebellion launched a full scale siege on the outer mining colony in attempts to secure a F.O.B. in the sector. The rebellion would bombard the Federal colony hoping to hit a refinery or fuel store and destroy use the explosion to cause collateral damage to the colonial defenses. On the 9th day of the siege, the rebels were landed on the ground with scouts. First Sergeant Erik Tan would lead Kiro Squad out of the Kislo colony behind enemy lines to ambush a rebel fireteam, steal their uniforms, secure their scout fighter, and fly it back to the Rebel Cruiser "Halin's Liberty" and overload its reactor, destroying the command ship of the Rebel ships sent to carry out the siege. The siege would be lifted, and Kislo would be safely under Federal monitoring once again. First Sergeant Erik Tan would receive a Federal Insignia of Valor for his grand example of strength and power along with the promotion from First Sergeant to Sergeant Major.
ERMAHGAWD. You used imperial guardsman pics in your CS! :D
