gothpuppy95

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

Durnehviir said
Another thing that caught my eye was:Not so sure about this. I don't recall when this was ever stated in canon, but maybe someone else can vouce for this information? If so then I'd let is slide, however if you were just implying this as to make it sound like your character was looked down upon then you would have to revise your entire bio.

WHen tobi told of madaras history we see uchiha women with the sharingan. It is less common but it is in fact in both male and females.We don't see alot in the canon because there are only three living uchiha and all are male.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

I will be sure to add that to the sheet. I had no intention of anything along the lines of using it as justification. That is simply to make it easier down the road. Alot of the sheet is down the road set up.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

I am sorry. There is not more that i can say beyond that. I did not intend on stepping on toes. Prince as you stated I am not normally like this.

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Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

I am not implying anything. I just happen to not be a keikei genkai member unlike every other character I have seen.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

Perhaps but i didn't build a snowflake. Thank you for telling me marrow. I will fix it if durnevier tells me to.

apart from that my sheet is finishedc

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Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

Also I am open to Jutsu suggestions

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

Durnehviir said
@gothpuppy95,Well, if things are going to get moving along then I'd like to take the initiative, hopefully not against Prince's wishes, I'm going to offer some preliminary advice on your character, Gothpuppy. I would suggest, seeing as you are creating an original clan, that you list, in detail, the specifics of that clan, beyond simply just a few physical traits. Whether you do it in history or misc, offer a little insight on the Yoru clan. Try to flesh them out as well as you can, especially in their history and how others would treat or look at them. (seeing as they most likely stand out). The only other problem I have with this application that is still a work in progress is the Flying Swallow. It is a simplistic and straight forward technique, however I'd like to stress that it requires a great deal of chakra affinity and control to be able to manage the technique, especially to coat an entire katana/scythe. I wouldn't outright say the character couldn't do it, especially if there is a good reason to back it up, however such advanced chakra control is typically too advanced for a Genin to do outright. I'd say it would be more realistic if your character could perform the technique or if they were able to do it around kunai, to a limited length, then it would be more reasonable. Though, such an adept ability isn't an academy level power and I suggest, if you were planning on keeping it, to explain some sort of limitation to the ability.In anycase, I look forward to reading the completed profile.

I intended for him to use the flying swallow on just Kunai until he had trained enough to actually put it on the Scythe which i would have created a variant of the jutsu on the custom section.
Thank you for the advice on the character I will make sure to take it into account as I keep working on it.

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