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Dervish said
Vakte, pretty much what Volty said. We've yet to have someone apply as a werewolf or vampire (or god forbid, the one time somebody was like "A DRAGON/WEREWOLF HYBRID!!!111!") who was able to give a satisfactory explanation of how exactly they were planning on working around the whole "if everyone finds out what I am, they're going to try and kill me" angle. A monster is a monster is a monster. But I'd love to have you in the game! You write beautiful, beautiful character sheets. :DOKAY LET'S GO SEE WHAT GALAXY WROTE AT LONG LAST.Sorry about the wait, bro. So far, so good! Your descriptive writing for his appearance is wonderful, as it makes it very easy to keep an image of him in the mind, and it's refreshing to see somebody take the older, non-remarkable appearance route. This guild is full of teen and 20 something characters that are cover models, and I'm guilty of it myself a few times lol. Point is, diversity rocks.A quick note on the elvish equipment, if there comes a time where your character encounters Dominion soldiers (it's happened a few times in the RP already), he's going to be under suspicion of having killed Thalmor soldiers to get it, which is going to trigger some hostile reactions. Be aware that it's possible to find and purchase other equipment as the RP goes along, so don't be afraid to switch things up when the time comes and that appearances do count in this RP. It's why half of the people in the game are currently running around, dressed like Redguard and not really armed like normal. Under cover matters. ;DThe skills do need to be addressed, like Soul pointed out (I still have a hard time calling him Leidenschaft!), and keep in mind, your major skills are Expert level, so just bear in mind that "One of the best in Tamriel" probably means somewhere around the top 15% or something like that, and it's not uncommon to run into NPCs who are better fighters. Part of the reason for that is we want to prevent people with the solo Rambo mentality from going around, clearing entire forts single-handed with no repercussion.Rest of it looks good so far! Looking forward to the rest!

I had thought as much, but if those Thalmor do suspect anything, I've never anything that can do anything after being run through with a sword.

And of course, I had thought of that, which was why I was going to change it to "one of the better" in Tamriel. And of course, He's not a Rambo or Game PC, and he's VERY used to working with other, experienced soldiers. Legging it as a loner is not something he is going to do. Or for longer than he has already, anyways.

And sooner or later, I will try to acquire Orcish, or maybe Dwemer.
Maybe during the endgame, a glass sword, but thats miles away.

The Elder Scrolls: Vengeance of the Deep

I should put my sheet on a Piratepad or something, so everyone can see and give feedback.

Fallout: Rebirth of the Enclave

Well, I'm losing the spark for this RP. I'm sorry, but I just don't feel it from this anymore, and to lie and continue would just cause my posts to get worse and worse. I'd say its for the RP. You've got the people to replace me! ITs finnnnneeeeeeeee! And I'm not close to being a good RPer here, so no big loss! I'm so sorry though.

Exoria: A Galaxy on the Verge of Corruption

Hello? Anyone?

Shadow over the Skies of Arcadia. (Demontongue and Vash)

Vash, don't kill that man.

Fallout: Rebirth of the Enclave

Pyro V said
I like Wynter.+1 from Pyro.Nothing else to report.

Wynter.

Fallout: Rebirth of the Enclave

My fugging god, I'll write up some random post
Speed it all up

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Leidenschaft said
Just what I saw. But, yea, I could tell its a WIP, so I'll hold off on passing any judgement until its finished.

Alrighty! Well, time to get to work

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Leidenschaft said
I can tell from the empty biography that this sheet is a WIP. Although, I would like you to divide the skills section into the standard categories that you see in the CS example. Also, your pack seems a little light for Aurelius to survive on the road. As far as how bad it is? It's not. I like to judge things that are complete, you know what I mean?

I know, I was going to add a second part to the skills section. And of course, I know. I need food, and a whole bunch of stuff.

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Name: Tiberius Aurelius

Race: Imperial

Family Origins: His family has been in the Imperial City for generations, since before the Oblivion Crisis, through which they have survived with great effort. They had certain Akaviri ancestors from the invasion on the Empire, but that blood has been somewhat diluted over time and interbreeding. But of course, it's effects must have remained, as most members of his family until the end of the Great War have been successful members of the Legion. Tiberius has been the only one since then, and this is only because of his actions that led to his disownment from the family.

Appearance: Tiberius is a densely muscled man of a straight six feet, with a slightly thin frame that gives the idea of being average in terms of strength, which isn't quite true. His muscles are above average, but not excessively, and are densely pack, so they take up lesser space. He has short hair seen in most Legionnaires, which is abyss black in color, but has a tinge of grey, which has come with amount of stress he's had to deal with his entire life. His eyes are black/hazel, which really aren't very special. Most of his height comes from his legs, which are quite long, although not unnaturally so. His defining factors, in terms of appearance are none, which helps him blend in quite easily, aside from in places where snow-white skin is the norm, due to his obviously dark skin color

The Aurelius Man

Age: 31

Equipment: As much as he would have preferred to keep his old Legion gear with him, his requirement for non-recognition have led him to use non-descript armor and weapons. He uses a one handed Elven sword, something he's not proud of, but its the only one he can get easily, by grabbing it off some Thalmor's corpse.

He also wears steel cuirass, with Elven boots and gauntlets, which are quite nondescript, really, and serves its purpose well.

He also carries an Iron dagger, for situations he'd rather not be in.

Miscellanea:
-Two steel ingots
-Aldo wine
-Nord mead
- Three pieces of smoked salmon
-4 minor healing potions
-A sackpack made of leather
-A repair hammer
-A slightly smaller than usual pickaxe

Favored Skills: His skills at one handed are quite literally one of the best in Tamriel, while also being a brilliant smith, which is something he does as a hobby, to calm himself.

He is also quite capable of using Heavy armor, and Light Armor to an extent.

His weakest skill is that of Destruction, which is something he picked up over time, but couldn't quite grasp, due to the short amount of time he spent on learning it. He can barely cast Firebolt, and its quite possible that even that will fail on usage. Aside from Firebolt, he can cast Flames, which he is also very bad at casting.

Background and a "brief" history:

Fighting Style: Tiberius doesn't quite fight with any proper "style", as he fights with the most pragmatic attacks that suit him best. They are usually underhanded and fluid, and are best suited to getting a fight with a similar humanoid over, as fast as possible.

He never dual wields, and concentrates on the enemy's weak points. Nor does he have a stance, as he is usually constantly moving, which tires him out. He's not the fastest fighter, or the most heavy handed, but he'll get the job done.

Personality: Tiberius is a slightly serious chap, someone that you could possibly get along with, with some effort. He is also quite pragmatic, taking whatever steps he has to, to achieve his goals. He has a rather small sense of humor, and his jokes are quite dark, often involving sarcastic remarks, or political comments to elaborate on the current situation, which usually gets on everyone's nerves.

He isn't much of a speaker, and this has become quite evident over time, due to his inability to bring others to his one-man war, and his incapability to argue.

He also has anger issues when it comes to the Thalmor, whom he blames for the loss of his reputation, his disgrace, and his disownment, while also blaming them for the fall of the Empire he so thoroughly loves. Dealing with Elves will never be his strong suit, but he can be persuaded to at least talk with them.

But one of his many faults is his inability to change. He stays in the past, with his heart constantly mourning what he has lost, and refuses to contemplate his emotions and self-conscious.

Font Colour: None, I'm not fond of doing that.

Very much a work in progress, but give me an idea of how bad is it?