Gummy1295

Persona in Wonderland: A Persona RP.

Melody Rhodes

Name: Melody Rhodes

Age: 17

Gender: Female
Appearance:

Attire: Melody's favorite color is black, so she's often seen wearing her clothes in black and white from head to toe, including short skirts and matching black T-shirts as casual attire, and black boots usually monopolize every other piece of footwear in her closet, unless the situation demands for heels or sneakers, in the case of her workout routine.

Arcana: I ~ The Magician

Weapon: Staff

Personality: Melody can be a bit of a witch when she's in conversation with someone, particularly if the gap between her intelligence and that of the other person is large. She's not afraid to berate, insult, or patronize anyone she deems not worthy, but when she's confronted with a figure of authority or someone who's proven to be overall smarter than her, she's very submissive and begs for mercy the instant she notices that loss is imminent. She acts tough when others are watching, but some of her fellow students have claimed to have spotted her in full cosplay attire during a J-Pop idol's performance. She probably has each of these students blackmailed, though...

Backstory: Melody is a very avid reader, with a near-perfect memory, to boot. When she was young, she was praised as an intellectual prodigy by doctors, parents, and teachers alive, and was even on the local news for a while. Eventually, the young girl got sick of all the attention thrown her way, and planted all of her hopes and wishes on a star, hoping she'll wake up the next day as a superhero, or more specifically, a defender of justice. While she didn't receive any kind of power afterwards, Persona or otherwise, the event gave her the ability to break out of the chains that prevented her from summoning up the willpower to take matters into her own hands and study (something she never thought she'd need to go) in the hopes of studying Physics at her dream college, London University. Ever since she had this revelation that took place sometime around 1996, she's put on a brave face that easily passes off as obnoxious or haughty to her peers, in an attempt to reject all the attention aimed in her direction.

Theme Song: What Doesn't Kill You (Stronger) ~ Kelly Clarkson

Cleopatra

Persona Name: Cleopatra
Persona Appearance:
Persona Skills: Eiha, Tarukaja, Marin Karin
Character Relevance: The last of the Pharaohs portrays Melody as she represents not only Melody's lust for power and her underhanded methods to control her image portrayed to her "loyal subjects". (Read: Fellow Students) Her superiority complex matches with that of the original Cleopatra, since all Pharaohs are exalted and considered as direct descendants of the Gods. Her girly appearance with blonde hair and flimsy skirt, however, stem from the idea of innocence and curiosity that Melody hides within the deepest recesses of her heart... It's also reminiscent of the Japanese Teen Idol craze that almost ruined Melody's reputation. (See: Backstory)

Shadow Melody

Name: Shadow Melody
Gender: Female
Appearance:


Arcana: Magician
Power: Eigaon, Maeigaon, Marin Karin, Concentrate (Magic Forme)
Power: Brave Blade, Charge, Marin Karin, Vorpal Blade (Knight Forme)
Weapons: Wand, Sword
Theme song: The Battle is to the Strong ~ Yuki Kajiura

I apologize for the size of the photos; I'll resize them as soon as I can. Just wanted to see if anything is out of order before submitting the sheet. Cheers.

A Persona Adventure in Wonderland- Interest Check

I'm thinking of making my character under the Magician Arcana.

Pokémon Ranger!

Midori

_{M I D O R I B O U Q U E T / / T H I R T E E N}

_{" How about you go away before I take matters into my own hands?"}

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Partner Pokémon: TBA

Home Region: Kanto

Height: 1.81m

Weight: 57 kg

Hair Color: Green

Eye Color: Green

Complexion: Clear

Body Composition: Tall and lanky, with a relatively small chest.

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Loyal • Proper • Strong-willed • Devoted • Bossy

"This should be enough," said the tall young lady, once she was done working on her 29th consecutive sweeping session. She looked out the window, and the sky had already begun to shine a bright pink. She stood still for a second to marvel at the beautiful sight of the sun setting. A passing thought started ringing as she lost herself in the clouds. "I wish she were here to watch it with me..." With that said, she remembered that an urgent matter had to be dealt with quickly. "I have to get home before the leftovers run out!"

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Character Name Midori was born to a pair of adventurous researchers and conceived prematurely in a dense forest. Unable to find proper medical assistance that deep within, her mother passed away before she could make it out, and Midori blames herself for her father's deep depression. When she was in elementary school, her father would never go to her school plays and ballet recitals, and this constant shunning against her forced her into assuming a psychological outer shell that rejects any type of interaction not relevant to whatever mission she has in mind at the moment.

Midori decided to ditch regular school and study in the Rangers School shortly after her graduation from elementary school. Her intentions are simple: she intends to continue the research that her parents left behind when she was born, in hopes of proving her worth to her father and hopefully motivate him to continue researching Pokemon.

_{[ ❇ ] F A M I L Y}[.hr]

Diana Bouquet: Mother — 32 years old (upon death) — Deceased

Henry Bouquet: Father — 45 years old — Alive

Pokémon Ranger!

Seeing as it is nearing 12AM CST (in a few hours, that is), I might as well get these out of the way.

@Raddum Issues we spoke of have already been addressed.

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@ALonelyParrot
1) I need you to choose a color for your sheet, unless you intend to stick with white. Crimson and Aqua are already chosen colors. If you do choose white (or any color, that is), I will need to differentiate between text and dialogue to establish what is what.
2) Age issue. While I'm fine with someone playing a younger character than the rest of the cast, I do need to say that the age needs to be bumped up. Perhaps two years, leaving Cinder as a 12 year old.
3) When I meant remove the periods from the [.hr], I meant just the period rather than the code itself.
4) Number of typos were spotted through out the sheet, so these will have to be addressed.

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@Gummy1295
1) I need you to choose a color for your sheet, unless you intend to stick with white. Crimson and Aqua are already chosen colors. If you do choose white (or any color, that is), I will need to differentiate between text and dialogue to establish what is what.
2) Please change it to where it says thirteen rather than "13 Years Old" (in the same spaced out manner).
3) Typo issues here and there that need to be fixed.
4) While I'm often lax on a short personality and biography, I do feel like you could expand more with both of them. Also, I might just be somewhat paranoid, but I feel like your character personality traits are awfully similar to the faceclaim's personality traits.
5) Technically a typo issue, but I think it warrants its own point. The reason why I labeled Character Name was so it would go, for instance, like "Character Name" was born as/to and so on.
6) Similar issue to #5. Relative #1, Relative #2 is where you should put Father, Mother, etc. Relative Name is where you should put the full name of said person.
7) More so a question rather than an issue. What is with the quote down at the bottom?

@Poi

Understood. Arrangements will begin immediately.

Pokémon Ranger!

I want in! I'll whip up a sheet right away!

Stella Bouquet

_{S T E L L A B O U Q U E T / / 13 Y E A R S O L D}

_{"Do not worry, my dear Magikarp. You are, as the Youngsters say, "Top Percentage." "}

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Partner Pokémon: TBA

Home Region: Kalos

Height: 160 cm

Weight: 45.4 kg

Hair Color: Blonde

Eye Color: Gray

Complexion: Pristine

Body Composition: Slightly Underweight for her height.

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Kind • Naive • Courteous • Humble • Spacey

You remember in Kanto, where the bike salesman in Cerulean City charges one million PokeDollars for a bicycle? Stella has the tendency and the funds to binge-buy the bike if she wanted to. Daughter and sole heiress to a prestigious company based in Lumiose City, this little princess has grown rather sheltered and only knows about Pokémon based on stories and articles that she studies.

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Stella Bouquet Stella's parents own a million PokeDollar company. When Stella was born, the two were so enraptured by her appearance, and she was locked up in a small cottage at the top of an office building until they deemed her "beautiful enough" to let her free into the world of Pokémon.

As soon as she stepped out the front door, Stella fell in love with any and every Pokémon she encountered on the streets of Lumiose, which seemed okay at first, but she eventually tried to hug a Cacturne and pet a Muk on the same day. Her parents almost suffered a heart attack when she first expressed her interest in the Rangers, but they reluctantly settled to send her to Ranger School after her tutors intervened. When she was asked if she wanted to become a Trainer instead and win Gym Badges, she fervently shook her head, exclaiming that she vowed to never put any Pokemon of any size or shape under unnecessary pain. She has the spirit, but having absolutely no experience in handling Pokemon is an issue that she knows she has to get over.

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Relative #1: Mrs. Bouquet Relative Name: Mother — 42 years old — Alive

Relative #2: Mr. Bouquet Relative Name: Father — 45 years old — Alive

@Poi
Quote: "I implore you to cease and desist your operations, otherwise I will be forced to strike you down!"

EDIT: Lemme know if I'm missing anything. :)

A Persona Adventure in Wonderland- Interest Check

I'd love to join if there's room for me .-.

Persona: Forget the Night

Gotcha. I posted, but I couldn't do THAT much because I was busy trying not to control anyone else's characters.

EDIT: Added one or two additional paragraphs to inch it closer to anything presentable.

Persona: Forget the Night

Jeff Pierce

Jeff's heart was certainly about to blow itself to bits. The girl who had just been snatched up by that hideous claw thing was now dangling less than a meter away from her captor's venomous maw. Jeff knew that by himself, there was no way to save the girl's life, and he highly doubted any of his classmates could do any more for her.

You sure you don't wanna play the hero right now? I'm sure you'd give them at most half a second's worth of distraction if you were to jump inside instead.

"Shut up!" Jeff barked at the empty night sky. It looks like the effects of Jeff's pills had just worn out, releasing a much more dangerous side to its awkward, well-meaning, and clumsy counterpart. "I don't get you! You show up just to mess with my mind during a life or death situation like this one! You know that if I die because of your ox dung, you're not leaving without me."

Everyone was too spooked solid to notice as each passenger was busy trying to look away from the upcoming gruesome display of their classmate's guts...

Everyone except for Jeff, of course. He was busy watching the end all go down. Wow, looks like this'll be quite the bloodbath--

"ADAM!"

Suddenly, the whole train starts to shake, almost knocking Jeff down, and where the monster was supposed to be standing and leering menacingly at its enemies while chewing on the little nugget's freshly cut head... A giant icicle... "An iceberg?" regular Jeff says, awestruck. It is then that the creature born from Eden's heart made itself manifest, much to the shock of both personalities of Jeff. This new combatant, apparently as human as the animated females from those "octopus documentaries" that Jeff enjoys, suddenly grabs the poor girl's body in its hands and places them in the arms of that one Japanese kid who scoffed at him earlier.

"I would kill to see this douche flat on the floor, dying from his injuries or whatever. I'd make sure the last thing he hears is my whispers, telling him..."

"You tried."

Jeff could barely notice the purple haired girl as she rushed empty-handed in a crash course towards the spear-wielding bugger monster. "Hey, little lady; did you not just see me attempt that same maneuver?" Just as she sprinted past Jeff, she yelled at him in distress. "Help me out!"

"That's the first time anyone relies on me in a good while..." He thought out loud, gripping the bloody handkerchief that he'd received from the little cooking girl. "And this time, there's no way I'm letting this girl down!" At this point, the young lady in question was tugging at the monster's spear, trying to wrestle the weapon away from it. "This girl must be out of her mind... There's no way she's snatching the weapon from that thing on her own."

Jeff noticed that the monster was fighting with a handicap. He's holding the spear upside down! Recognizing his opponent's incompetence, as well as his inability to operate its weapon, he decided that his best shot at tipping the scales in his direction were to do what everyone knows he does best...

Before his body could begin sprinting in the enemy's direction, though, his mind urged him to stop and consider the situation he'd been thrust into. "Maybe I'm better off aiming for a weak spot or something..." His eyes immediately fixed on his opponent's huge, bug-like peeper on the left side of his face. "If I were to smash my knuckles against that eye, I could at the very least cripple his vision..."

He charged at the monster at full speed, yelling "This is how we do it in Brooklyn!" For once, he was trembling... not out of fear this time around, but with excitement. If he keeps going down this path, risking his well-being on a whim to ensure the survival of all the Pillars of Hope, he knew that he'll be able to change the world himself... That girl's awakening means that he's definitely on the right path to achieving his goal. Jeff arrived at an appropriate range to strike, and with little to no remorse in his face, and a single obnoxious chuckle, he swung a left hook with as much motivation as possible, aiming straight for the monster's eye. "Say hi to my buddy Beelzebub for me, will ya?"

Persona: Forget the Night

@Fury Panda Whatever you say, GM-san. I might be a little later because I'm working on a phone keyboard, but I'll have it done within the next few hours.

Persona: Forget the Night

BTW, @Dogematix, if by any chance Sam manages to land the blow, I invite him to pull off an All-Out Attack with Jeff and Dakota. That should finish it off.