MULTI_MEDIA_MAN said
Beowulf's change is counting the mad enhancement. I'll put pin the non-enhanced stats as well. As for self-reinforcement, that makes sense. No self-reinforcement then. Not really a huge hit to any plans, was just wondering mostly.As for the fall of the Attwater family, the head of the family was planning to intentionally reveal magic to the world. He wanted to force the Association to help the people of the world. Also, the 30 generations aren't like Archibald or Tohsaka family generations, where each head of the family dedicates their life to studying magecraft. Only about seven or eight generations have really followed the pursuit of magecraft, with the generations in between just passing down the crest out of tradition. The family was never friendly with the Association, which is why Dalton's decision to obey them was so noteworthy. I mean, the family's real history before the fall isn't a huge deal. If you'd prefer I have it just be a few generations before or after, that's cool. I kinda just went with the first number that came to mind. I never really intended for the family to be this huge thing o.oAnd crest passing on bit should now finally be fixed.
Alright then. It's not a huge thing from an apping standpoint, so I won't be super-uptight about it, so that ought to be fine. At least his family being disgraced is a viable reason why he's been forced to go to this backwater ritual in the first place, so that's fine.
Just one thing, the family head at the time of the fall would have been really, really, really stupid. I mean, you can keep that, but yeah.
See, magecraft is all about mystery. The more people who know about it, whether they're normal people, other magi, or even you, the weaker magecraft gets. Most magi actually don't really use magecraft save for a couple times in their whole life, because just using it in front of yourself weakens it to an extent. That's why magi keep all their stuff super secret, they're not evil monopolizers like the True Magicians who could give their snowflake powers to everyone and help humanity. They keep it secret because magecraft will literally cease to exist otherwise. And even then, magecraft sucks a lot in the modern day, cause anything done with magecraft can be done with science by now, and in most respects science has made magecraft obsolete. Magecraft's just getting weaker and weaker, making it totally public would be the complete death of magecraft, so the idea "make everyone know about magecraft so we can help people with it" fails when doing that means there's no magecraft anymore.
You don't need to change that, that's just so you know how bad of a plan that family head had.
Anyway, Dalton's approved.
On Beo:
During his charge, Beowulf's Endurance is buffed to A (A+ under Mad Enhancement),
So, A+ isn't the next step up from A. A is 50, A+ is 100, so if it's buffing his END to A then under mad enhancement it'd be a hypothetical rank above A with a value of 60.
Just replace the "A+" with a "?". Everything else looks fine.
Though keep in mind using that NP with his E(D) rank MAN is going to make him really close to fading away from prana loss, so it's a very high risk strategy to take. If you're okay with that, then just change what I said above and you'll be good.