Red GypsySkrik has quite a ways to go as well.
I'm just a compulsive world builder... heh.
I'm just a compulsive world builder... heh.
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STATUS: Pirates, monsters, magic, islands and no civilization to steal from. Hmm. 3 yrs agoStatus
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Pirates, monsters, magic, islands and no civilization to steal from. Hmm.
5 yrs ago
Now, what happens when you have a bunch of monsters that were living in a forest and they get transmigrated into a futuristic urban setting?
6 yrs ago
I know that few, if any, people on this site would be interested in it... but... I just got an idea for a SAO/GGO/XCOM/UFO crossover... fun tingles...
6 yrs ago
Life has never given mankind sufficient time... nor sleep... nor comprehension. If it had, we would have stopped trying.
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6 yrs ago
It can be greatly refreshing to return to a thing that one has long loved.
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@Jangel13 ... ... Don't worry?
Don't worry!?
WHAT ELSE CAN I DO BUT WORRY!!! IT'S MY LIFE'S WORK!!!
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Joking by the way. *snicker*
I am somewhat encouraged that you haven't already pointed out any critical flaws in it. Although, I know that might just be because you haven't had the time to go through it in detail. Anyway... as you are, no doubt, well aware... I will welcome any thoughts on the subject at all, even if my idea is still too far off base.
Don't worry!?
WHAT ELSE CAN I DO BUT WORRY!!! IT'S MY LIFE'S WORK!!!
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Joking by the way. *snicker*
I am somewhat encouraged that you haven't already pointed out any critical flaws in it. Although, I know that might just be because you haven't had the time to go through it in detail. Anyway... as you are, no doubt, well aware... I will welcome any thoughts on the subject at all, even if my idea is still too far off base.
@Jangel13 Have you had a chance to read the proposal I sent you? It was ten days ago, if your inbox is that busy.
First shipping then chipping.
@Kuroyomihime. Thank you. I am going to sleep my headache away... or at least try to get it to stop being a migraine.
@Kuroyomihime
You're right. I re-read it and re-wrote it. There were entire layers of meaning that hadn't made it from my head to my fingers. I hope the updated version is alright. Sorry for the trouble. This headache is killing me. I'm going home to take a nap...
Oh, carp... I still have to go to the store. Well, at least this headache isn't a migraine yet. That's the last thing I need.
That said... if there are any other suggestions or alterations that you have/want done just let me know. I have no problem using the edit button. ;)
You're right. I re-read it and re-wrote it. There were entire layers of meaning that hadn't made it from my head to my fingers. I hope the updated version is alright. Sorry for the trouble. This headache is killing me. I'm going home to take a nap...
Oh, carp... I still have to go to the store. Well, at least this headache isn't a migraine yet. That's the last thing I need.
That said... if there are any other suggestions or alterations that you have/want done just let me know. I have no problem using the edit button. ;)
@Haeo
I'm sorry, but I'll have to ask you to rework your post a bit for two reasons:
- Your character wasn't even shaken by a stun grenade detonating close to him since your post doesn't have a mention to dizziness, disorientation, or sluggish reactions of any kind.
- And you basically auto-hit an attacker while I avoided to do so even thought the ambusher had the advantage in that situation. I can allow for auto-hits in situations where it makes sense, but in a fight like that, not.
Ah, sorry. I'm trying to post through a nasty headache and I knew I was forgetting something. I will make adjustments for the concussion wave.
As for the melee portion, I was trying to express the pattern of movements that he would use if the first strike landed as intended. Given the actual speed of melee combat I was trying to show the behavior that Grave Trench had already trained himself to follow. Again, sorry. No auto-hit was intended. I will... think of something else or try to fix it.
@Kuroyomihime But, if a grenade is detected then an opponent in a crouching or prone position is far more likely to try to go forward and finishing Grave Trench off with a lethal blade strike would allow the potential for a surprise attack on Kiss Shot. At least, that's what I was thinking. With all the grenades going off and the confusion involved in this battle, one more grenade wouldn't draw much attention.
However, if you would like me to adjust this post... or any post for that matter, simply let me know and I will do so. Then again, this post might work with either version of events. It just ends up with them in the space where Kiss Shot was standing whether or not the SHOUSUKE starts there.
However, if you would like me to adjust this post... or any post for that matter, simply let me know and I will do so. Then again, this post might work with either version of events. It just ends up with them in the space where Kiss Shot was standing whether or not the SHOUSUKE starts there.
Grave Trench
@Kuroyomihime
Grave Trench watched as the target he marked was finished off with grand flare by his team leader a moment after a flurry of explosions and gunfire announced that another member of their team had arrived in style. It seemed that he was the only one interested in trying to keep a low profile... or at least a lower one. As flashy as the show was, he turned his eyes away from the blasts and fought to not pay attention to the concussion or the resonating echoes off the machinery. This was the only reason why he saw the movement of the incoming grenade. It was painfully obvious that there were multiple teams involved in this fight. Though, Grave Trench didn't have such polite and complex thoughts as he coiled his body and kicked off the conveyor's support in a rolling forward slide that carried him out of the full intensity radius of the blast. Still, he had been more than close enough for the shock to leave his ears ringing and the area spinning around him. That grenade was aimed for him.
He didn't have time to recover. He hadn't remembered to pull grenades from his inventory.
The sheen of an incoming blade gave him a moment of clarity, something to focus on. He dove toward the attacker, but lower, swinging the stock blade of his rifle in an attempt to catch the middle of his opponent's body. If he failed, he would be turned around by momentum and land on his back where he could hopefully pull his rifle into line for a shot.
@Kuroyomihime
Grave Trench watched as the target he marked was finished off with grand flare by his team leader a moment after a flurry of explosions and gunfire announced that another member of their team had arrived in style. It seemed that he was the only one interested in trying to keep a low profile... or at least a lower one. As flashy as the show was, he turned his eyes away from the blasts and fought to not pay attention to the concussion or the resonating echoes off the machinery. This was the only reason why he saw the movement of the incoming grenade. It was painfully obvious that there were multiple teams involved in this fight. Though, Grave Trench didn't have such polite and complex thoughts as he coiled his body and kicked off the conveyor's support in a rolling forward slide that carried him out of the full intensity radius of the blast. Still, he had been more than close enough for the shock to leave his ears ringing and the area spinning around him. That grenade was aimed for him.
He didn't have time to recover. He hadn't remembered to pull grenades from his inventory.
The sheen of an incoming blade gave him a moment of clarity, something to focus on. He dove toward the attacker, but lower, swinging the stock blade of his rifle in an attempt to catch the middle of his opponent's body. If he failed, he would be turned around by momentum and land on his back where he could hopefully pull his rifle into line for a shot.
@Kuroyomihime Thank you. It's time to demonstrate what all the sharp and pointy bits on the "Graham's Longinus" are for. The direction has more to do with what melee options make the best sense. And, for the purposes of relative positioning, I'm going to assume that the attacker is approaching from the same side of the line that Kiss Shot was standing on. This would place him in her rear arc.
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