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HounderHowl said
Unlike the pirates or nasqa (don't remember haz's peoples name..)


Naqar/Naqah. How could you forget..?
;-)
Niraph


The Elder shook visibly, and not just from the cold. The demon in front of him was huge, at least twice the size of himself. He could crush him like a beetle if he wanted to.
The Fomorii went for its blade, and every Naqar who could see gasped, except the Elder. He merely waited. He had lived a good life - his town had prospered, he had witnessed the birth of the current, and one of the greatest, leader of Naqah. He had repulsed Wildling after Wildling. It would be a fitting and noble death to die at the hands of a warrior.
But, instead of cutting the comparitively minute elf down, the Demon's leader simply studied the walls.

Was he looking for something? Prying for weakness? Not likely. A creature of his size and strength could level or scale the wall with ease, regardless of its weak and strong points. Was he judging it? Maybe.
Then, laughter. A low chuckle at first, slowly rising to a hearty laugh. Some of the soldiers behind the big one started to laugh too.
The Elder was insulted. Were they laughing at his village? The same village that had sheltered him since birth, the village his great-great whatever grandfather had helped build, the village that had kept... most of its residents safe. He shuddered. Could it really have been sixteen years since the raid? It seemed like it was only a couple of months ago.

Anyway, the monsters seemed visiblly more relaxed and less angry. It could be a good sign, that they thought the town wasn't worth their time. Or, it could mean they thought they could take it with ease and didn't need to look so intimidating. Which, in fairness, they could.

The foriegner spoke his alien language. It was strange. Whilst some words sounded familiar - he definately heard what sounded like "old man" with an accent - but some parts were completely different. One word sounded like "apples" - what relevance would that have to anything?

Many of the guards started to look a little antsy. Some lowered their bows, others took the arrow out. One even lost his grip and fired an arrow into the dirt in front of the gates - far away enough to look like a misfire, surely.

And, of course, the beast's voice was petrifying. It was like a giant shaved bear that hates people mixed with rabid tiger with a thing for torture. There were gentle hints to the voice, but it was terrifying nonetheless.

As the creature - the Elder was now certain it was a General or Captain or some similiar rank - issued orders to its followers, the Elder felt he should do the same. He raised a flat, upwards palm in the air, holding it for a few seconds, then lowered all fingers but the ring - an impossible feat for many other races - which meant "stand down". At this, the guards relaxed. Some laughed. Others began crying with relief. Soon, they were herding the civillians back into their homes, or returning to the barracks, until only a few remained.

Oddly, the Captain and his unit then bowed. It was a strange sight - here, bows were reserved for only the most important people, and even High Lord Lyrus had gone on record to say he felt silly when people bowed to him.

The Elder began to return the favour, but stopped. Presumably, these were expierienced, well trained soldiers who had seen many battles. They deserved more than a copy of what they were doing.
Instead, the Elder put his right fist over his heart and made a a shallow bow. It was barely even a bow, more a slight dip of the upper back, but it was the highest complement one could give a warrior in Naqah culture.

Whatever the Captain wanted wasn't present, it seemed, so some of the soldiers left, presumably to fetch it. The big one said something that sounded like an apology, though for what the Elder was unsure.

No-one said anything for a while. The old elf thought about inviting them in, but that was asking for trouble. The few guards that were watching lost interest, leaving to go do their other duties. The Elder was on his own, bar the Chosen, who remained at the wall.

When the Demons came back, they brought a new one with them. Unlike he others, he was fully clothed in an old-style chiton, one of the ones with sleeves. He looked like... he couldn't have been...
He was! The doctor had been right! The creature was some mix of Naqar and Fomorii!
The look in his eyes confirmed it - it was the look of a man who was finally returning home. Whilst he looked similiar to one of the Fomorii, there were distinct differances between the two, most notably the paler skin and tapered ears. But it was impossible!
But it wasn't impossible, because it was standing right in front of him. Suddenly, the old elf was a lot more scared of these creatures.
The Elder was in so much shock, he missed the talk between the Captain and the Naqorii - he lacked the right word for it - but heard the translation. It was hardly modern syntax, but it would do.

"My greetings, Nemrod." he spluttered, holding back a smile that played on his lips when the Naqorii called Nemrod "the big demonic one". Three hundred years and the language was still interchangable. It was almost like mispronouncing modern Naqah, with a few grammatical errors. Of course, it helped that the education system was so simplistic - learn to understand words, use them. It meant no-one had the linguistic know-how to make major changes.

The Elder sighed, knowing that the boat would be top priority, but he could hardly tell them that there were only three left. Maybe they would understand. Or maybe they'd raze the town to the ground in fury.
They couldn't walk, he remembered the healer had said, so they would have to come inside. It wasn't optimum, but... no, there was nothing else to it. It was bad either way, but this was worse. He might smash a few pots, break some bottles or even kill the healer.
"General, I have some bad news. If you would care to come inside, there is something I need to show you..."
The Elder stopped and smacked his head. Of course, Nemrod wouldn't fit through the relitavely small doors, heck, he'd struggle to get through the gate.
"Perhaps" he said, after some consideration "You would be best sending in someone you trust. I don't think you'd fit through the doors."
Niraph, Healer's office

"Just try to relax." The doctor finished off, stood up and mumbled. "Call me if you need anything."
Suddenly, he left the bedside to sit at a desk opposite the beds. He started playing with some plants and chemicals, trying different formulas and ingredients. He worked in total silence.
It was a sudden and abrupt change in the man who was normally so friendly and reassuring. He usually stayed at the bedside until he thought the Demonrexa were asleep.

There was an detectable sense of secrecy in the air, like the healer knew something that would affect the Succubus wildly. It wasn't that she was dying - the old doctor had made comments on her remarkable recovery speed previously, and had told her and the others that the wounds were far from fatal. Regardless, the mood suddenly turned anti-social and dark. The normally spacious medic's officefelt cramped, the typically loose blankets began to feel tight and the temprature seemed to drop a few degrees.
Roll call!
Who's still with us?
Niraph, Town Walls

The forests and darkness made visibility poor, but even the darkest night could not mask the threat nearby. Many guards at the walls nocked their bows, but they knew it was futile - there were maybe thirty guards and an undetermined number of the enemy. The best they could do was look intimidating, but if it came to blows, they were bound to fail.
"Fomorii!" one of the guards called "Someone ring the bell!"
But no-one did. No-one dared move fron their spot, lest the enemy think they were running away. Some did want to run away, others offered up silent prayers to their gods and some just tried to hold back tears.
It wasn't just guards who heard the cry. Soon everyone in town was out in the streets, quietly panicking. Niraph was a relatively poor town - there had only been one major House in the past fifty years, and they'd all moved on. High Lord Lyrus had been born here, delivered by the same kindly healer that still resided there. They were subject to Wildling attacks, low harvests, bad weather, but they never thought this was how it would end. Death at the hands of an army of maurading demons was not the dignifyed, quiet end the civillians wanted.
The village Elder and the Chosen quickly pushed their way to the front. There was a general mumble, not loud but enough to instill an atmosphere of fear.
The two Council members went up on the gates, looking at the unit of Demonrexa. It was hard to tell their numbers, but it was a lot, not to mention the big ones, who counted for three at least. Niraph had stone and wood walls, they had a horde of soldiers and ballistas. It was an easy fight.
At this point, the Elder turned to the crowds. He didn't shout, but his voice was clear and loud and it silenced the crowds. "Niraph. I have been Elder in times good and times bad. I have never given up faith in this town, or its people. But if it comes to blows tonight, I want you to run. Leave everything behind and run. Head to the forests and hide. And don't return here either. We are strong, intelligent people - one of the other towns will accept us. I will attempt to communicate with the Fomorii, but if it goes badly, remember what I have said."
The town was stunned. They had never heard such negativity come from the Elder. True, they had suffered a lot under his care, but he had always reassured them that they could get through it. Here, he may well have said "We're doomed". Many townspeople burst into tears.

The Elder turned and looked out at the Demon army. Then, without warning, he lowered himself off the wall, hitting the ground with a grimace. He slowly walked closer to the Demonrexa, stopping about halfway between them and the town.
"Good evening, gentlemen" he said, trying and failing to keep the fear out his voice "Why have you come here? And why do you come brandishing swords and ballistas?"

Healer's office

"Hold on." the Healer began rooting about in the bedside cupboard "Might-of-nine... Gunus Depoisoner... Ah, here it is."
He stood up, brandishing a small, red bottle.
"Drink. Drink the whole bottle. It tastes awful, but it will help. The pain and the coughing will go away for a while. I'll get you cleaned up."
He gave the Succubus the bottle, pulled the covers back a little so she didn't feel so confined and grabbed a cloth. After soaking it in water, he cleaned the phlegm off her face. He got a new cloth and soaked it, this time rubbing her entire body - she needed to be kept clean, and if you can't move, that gets a bit difficult.
"Sorry" he mumbled, as he went around her legs and chest - he didn't care how immodest one was, some things just didn't feel right.
The muffled cries got through the walls, but the healer didn't respond at first. Then, a slow smile came across his face.
"Shenda, did you hear that? I think you're going home soon..."

Drakar, Crowthorne Keep

"Lyrus, wake up!"
The familiar voice brought the High Lord back into the land of the living. He sat up in bed to see a face standing over him. For a split-second, he thought it was the girl from his nightmare. Then his eyes focussed and revealed an equally terrifying, yet far friendlier sight.
"Luna! I... it... there was..."
Luna sat down on the bed "You were having nightmares again." she said in her soft, reassuring voice.
"Yes. H-how did you know?"
The Lady smiled oh-so-subtly "It's becoming a habit. Every night for the past four months you've woken up, scared out your wits. These things become predictable. What's going on?"
Lyrus took a deep breath, about to tell her everyhing - the Wildlings, the slavers, Niraph and all the other things...
And then he stopped. He sighed and muttered "Nothing. Just bad dreams"
The look on Luna's face told him she wasn't buying it.
"If you want to play it like that, fine. But you need to tell someone. Will you need any help getting back to sleep?"
"N-no, no, I'll be fine. I just need a minute or two" Luna had asked him that every time he woke up from a nightmare. He had always refused, partly out of politeness and partly out of fear - he had no idea how she was supposed to help him get to sleep, and he didn't really want to find out
"Alright then. Goodnight, lunacio (Little one)"
"Night"
And at that, the Lady turned and left the room, leaving Lyrus to a fitful, unpleasant sleep, filled with monsters, Wildlings... and demons.
At night, most Naqah prefer to be in bed.
Also, the sheer darkness of the surrounding forests would likely stop anyone from seeing much further than the walls.
The problem with forests is that they make enemy movement nearly undetectable, but it's also good for our lightly armoured units to take on heavier foes, who will get caught in the branches.

Yes, it's got a wall on all sides and two gates.
I thought your nation was more focused on attack and dodging, rather than defense, so I said it had more attack power than resistance. It can slash through things no problem, but can't hits very well. I can edit it if you want but I thought this was more balanced.

I was planning on adding more, but I had to go. I'll edit it
Niraph, Village Hall


The moon was high over Naqah when the Village Council convened. Many of Niraph's important figures were there - The Elder, the Guard Captain, the Chosen, the Healer and a few others. Normally, these meetings happened during the day, but the Healer couldn't turn up until the three Demonrexa were asleep.
The Elder cleared his throat before starting.
"Ladies and gentlemen, I think we all know why we are here - we need to discuss these Fomorii."
A general mutter went through the gathered group before the Elder signalled for silence. He went on
"Obviously, the continual safety of Niraph, and Naqah as a whole, is our most important issue, but I am loathe to harm these creatures before we learn their intention. This council is called to decide our next move"
The Chosen was the first to speak "I believe we should send a messenger to Drakar at once. Perhaps they could send a detachment of Imperials, maybe a few more of Luna's Chosen -"
"Why are you always crying to Drakar for help?" the Guard Captain interrupted "We have a baracks and guards, don't we? We don't need to involve that tyrant Luna and her fottiti (Plaything, slave) Lyrus."
The room went deadly quiet at the treasonous comment. The Chosen bristled, but after a momrnt or two, she replied calmly
"What are you implying, Captain?"
"I'm not implying anything. I'm saying it plainly - Tailin is a coward, Pinkara is a simpleton, Lyrus is nightmare-driven and Luna is a Wildling in disguise. The only sane member of Crowthorne House is Aelia."
"I'm going to give you ten seconds to apoligise for your comment" the Chosen said, fury making her shake but her voice staying calm "Or I'll have you hung for treason."
The captain merely chuckled "Of course, Lyrus has an excuse. He's a fair, just ruler. Anyone would have nightmares if they'd been through what he'd been through. If your precious Luna stopped using the poor stronzo (Sod, fool) to satisfy her -"
The blacksmith was the one who interrupted "One, there is no evidence that Lyrus has been abused by anyone in the House. Two, whether he has or not is not relevant to the issue at hand. May we please get back on topic?"
"Wise words" the Elder said "If anyone else wishes to bicker, they may leave this meeting to discuss their stupidity further. My good smith, have you analysed the weapons and armour taken from the ship?"
The smith frowned "The metal they use is strange. It is strong, and slow to blunt, but fragile. One hard strike and it cracks. A few hard strikes and it shatters completely, but it can cleave through just about anything without damage. It's almost like they want to kill their foes before they have a chance to fight back."
"I agree" the Healer muttered "The three I have seem to care little for clothing, whether it is cosmetic or defensive. The female, for example, seems to dislike having the blankets on the bed around her. They are also remarkably warm - I'm not sure if that affects the weapons and armour, but I'm sure it will have something to do with their lack of clothes."
"Interesting" the Elder mumbled "Have you uncovered anything else"
"Yes, of course. The small one and the female have remarkable agility - the sinews and muscle structure shows that. The big one seems to have a thick hide that almost negates the need for armour, but that may just be proportional to our own. Either way, it seems one would have a hard time hurting one without specialised equipment or being in a crowded area. They also seem to turn those nearby into one of them, but slowly. I performed an experiment-"
"Hold up. Are you saying that me and my men are going to turn into Fomorii?" the Captain was furious, but even he couldn't keep the scared tone out of his voice
"Not quite. The process takes time. As I was saying, I performed an experiment. After the first couple of nights, I noticed the bedside plants were exhibiting strange properties - giving off heat, for example. It was irregular and hardly noticable, but it was happening. So, I moved one of the plants away and the left the other where it was. The results were staggering. The plant beside the Fomorii is exhibiting more unusual properties more regularly, whilst the other seems to have reverted back to normal."
"What about you?" the Chosen said in a curious tone.
"I think that I, too, may be turning into a Fomorii. I have already noticed radical differences in my body temprature and pallour. If I cannot discharge these demons soon..."
There was no need to finish. Everyone in the room knew that the kindly old healer would not stop until his patients had recovered fully, regardless of the consequences. He would not leave them just so he wouldn't turn.
"In short, we need to contact them." the Elder mused "Find out what medicines work best and what will slow their healing. I won't stand idly by and watch my healer become a Fomorii."
"It wouldn't be so bad if I could say the effect wouldn't spread" the healer said quietly "But I can't garuntee it. If I turn, I may have to give up healing."
The Elder thought about it for a minute, then nodded "One more day. Chances are, the others have noticed the ship is missing. If they don't show up by this time tomorrow, or the Fomorii haven't recovered, you take a five-day break and we reconvene to decide our course of action. Dismissed"

Niraph Healer's

The Healer returned to his office slightly irked. One day! One day of waiting for more of the Demonrexa, and if they didn't show up, it was game over. He had so many questions! And the demons had started to recover! How was he meant to wait for five days to restart the healing process? Five days and they'd be dead.
May as well check up on them, he thought, as he entered the room. He was reassured by the gentle snoring - if they were asleep, they couldn't ask for more medicines.
There was something wrong with the female, though. He couldn't be sure, but it looked like she was crying.
"Is everything alright, Shenda?" he asked softly - he had long since learned his charges names.
Yes! A nation of slaves and their masters encountering those whose worst enemies are slavers...
This can only end well
Sorry about my glitched post. It was about one in the morning when I put it up.
Hopefully, I'll bump into a few more nations soon.
Niraph

The town was in a state of shock. Production had slowed, guard shifts had doubled and the local healer was now unavailable. Not to mention the new, fleshy banners that adorned the town walls.
It had been a few days since the local Royal Regiment had brought back the Fomorii. They were badly hurt and needed immediate medical assistance. The healer had his hands full looking after them.
The bodies and ship had been burned, but not before a few of the pirate corpses had been used to make a few new anti-piracy warnings. The things on the ship could be found at te guards baracks, having been "put under protection" until the original owners could reclaim it. Anything that wasn't nailed down had been taken foe safety's sake.
And, of course, the population were suspicious. A strange new creature appears, having engaged in a fight against pirates, threatens their guards and distracts their healer. Thankfully, the Naqar were accepting people, happy to share. They just hoped that the Demons didn't take too long to heal.

???


Lyrus walked softly through the forest, scared his footsteps might alert anything nearby to his presence. He was hardly prepared for company, hostile or friendly.
Not that he was likely to find a friend in this damn place. The trees grew thick and tall, their lower branches raking the exposed flesh on the young man's arm. Even during the day, Lyrus doubted there would be much light. At midnight, he could barely see the hand in front of his face. It was hardly the place one would find faeries and unicorns.
He had no idea how long he had been walking. Minutes? Hours? Days? Did time even exist in a place like this? Or was he doomed to wander forever, trapped in an unending maze?
A low branch snags the White Elf's feet, sending him sprawling head-first into the mud. Dirt and bits of bark go flying everywhere. Twigs bite into the exposed flesh of the elf's arm.
Scowling, Lyrus picks himself up and brushes himself down. As he starts to pick the splinters out of his arm, a voice calls
"Is that you I hear?"
Lyrus looks left and right, but there is nothing but darkness at his flanks. It was probably just his imagination. He takes a few tentative steps forwards, ready to keep walking.
Then, shuffling. It sounds distant at first, but it's definetly headed this way. If Lyrus doesn't move fast, he could end up in a heap of trouble. But, for some strange reason, he can't. A stange mix of fear and curiosity keeps him rooted to the ground. Part of him wants to see what the thing that spoke looks like, another part wants him to sprint as far away from it as possible.
Curiosity wins. The shuffling is really close now, barely 20 paces away. Pesumably, the creature can't see through the dark either, or else it would have...
"Is that you, my love? You came for me!"
As it happens, the being was much closer than originally thought. In fact, it's barely 5 paces away, to Lyrus' left.
It's a girl, but she isn't your typical girl. For a start, she's splattered with blood. Her hair is long and matted and her nails are long and sharp. She's conpletely naked, bar a collar around her throat, decorated with vicious-looking spikes. But easily, her most striking feature was her eyes. They were pitch black and unblinking. Blood trckled from them like tears, dribbling into her smiling mouth.
"I missed you so much. Why did you leave me?" she gurgled sadly.
That was it for Lyrus. He wanted to break away fron this nutcase, to run away and leave this damn forest behind. But he couldn't. Something wouldn't let him, not until he knew what the girl was going to do.
"I knew you'd come back. I knew you wouldn't leave me"

Note: WIP. I'll tidy it later
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