Gowi said
If anybody has thoughts/peer review or general conversation of the character sheet, that'd be helpful if consensus thinks I should touch it up or whatever. If it's fine as is, I'll try shotgunning plot ideas once tabletop night ends.
So now we have a Blackwater prince and princess. Peachy~
Indeed, I have one or two things to say, but they are on the same topic as my last post.
You have stated that your character is currently eighteen years old and that she was at the age of six when her guardian, Edwic Devian, helped her escape the manhunt of the Briars. Unfortunately, Gowi, that would be impossible, judging from the information Brand has provided us.
Eighteen years ago the world was still at war with Malfear.
Twelve years ago, when your character is six years old, the war with Malfear ends.
When Arthur Blackwater marched his armies against Malfear and his brother-in-law made the coup d'etat it was "during the war with Malfear". I can not imagine the king of a country suddenly remembering "Oh, right, it's been ten years already. Maybe it's high time to get out of my swamp and go to war?" at the very end. It is more likely if it happened in the first few years of the war, when Gorgon helped Valeal push away the invaders.
If you insist on your character being eighteen years old ( and having a twenty seven year gap with her eldest brother), she would have to be a baby, yet I still do not see it working out for you. Perhaps you should increase her age slightly, say, make her twenty and make her guardian set off on the road with her while she's a baby or even in her mother's womb, but her mother dies during childbirth (for the sake of drama).