@Sarcelle Renard Their we go, his ability and personality have DRASTICALLY changed. Kind of happy as i'll be able write better with this way of thinking but i was trying to go for something a lil' different
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@Sarcelle Renard He'll be 14
@Sarcelle Renard As i just mentioned i will replace his ability with the one above, and the other changes will be made
As i am doing a test, i will alter his magic soon, i completely forgot about the Ability that i actually wanted to use in the first place, and it is Shock Wave, the ability to send a pulse into the ground to come up at another point, often used to pin a target to a certain spot, but can also be used to send a shock wave of disorientation through his weapon. A progressive state could be that of an earthquake
@Xiro Zean Ahaha, nah it's all good, criticism is what helps make good characters, great characters. Thanks for all your help though :P
@Xiro Zean As i did mention, its not his main attack and his primarily used for defense, their are a lot of drawbacks that i forgot to add.
Name: Salik "Cure"
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance:
Salik's number is on the back of his left hand. Through his genetic code, his eyes, while conscious, glow white. His eyes glowing does not affect his sight, however his eyes do show in the dark.
Number: 14th (XIV)
Rank: B
Personality: Salik wants nothing more than to fill his role, his whole reason for existing. He wants to smite the 'Gods' from the earth and create a world capable of both Humans and God Slayers to exist. He values every single life of that follows true, going from his brothers and sisters to the humans that still reside on the earth. His tactical thinking makes him ideal in most situations, always following orders to successfully complete a mission, however, will never do any action that will directly affect those close to him.
Likes -
Dislikes -
Enhancement(s): Salik has had two enhancements. His perception skills have been altered to allow him to read any situation faster then any human or Slayer. He is able to see any given situation faster and be able to react faster then others. This allows him to see an attack and potentially dodge it, he can change his attack in mid swing and change it, allowing to be more diverse while attack, but also, will allow him time to think in the most heated of battles. His second enhancement is to pair with his new found perception skills, his legs. His legs have been altered allowing him to move almost 10 times faster if needed, allowing him to be the perfect striker.
Weapon(s): Salik uses a Scythe. However he has an alteration. His has drilled a chain into his right forearm, the chain can extend up to 5 meters, he connects the chain to the bottom of his weapon, allowing him to be a close and medium range fighter, also without losing his weapon.
Ability: Salik has the ability to create Shock Waves, allowing him to send a pulse into the ground to come up at another point, often used to pin a target to a certain spot, but can also be used to send a shock wave of disorientation through his weapon. His shock waves shift the ground below, softening the ground and pinning the target to the ground. However, the further the target is, the more energy required, as well as how big the target is.
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance:
"Gods are an Infection on humankind, and we're the Cure."
Salik's number is on the back of his left hand. Through his genetic code, his eyes, while conscious, glow white. His eyes glowing does not affect his sight, however his eyes do show in the dark.
Number: 14th (XIV)
Rank: B
Personality: Salik wants nothing more than to fill his role, his whole reason for existing. He wants to smite the 'Gods' from the earth and create a world capable of both Humans and God Slayers to exist. He values every single life of that follows true, going from his brothers and sisters to the humans that still reside on the earth. His tactical thinking makes him ideal in most situations, always following orders to successfully complete a mission, however, will never do any action that will directly affect those close to him.
Likes -
- Protecting others
- Chess
- Problem Solving
Dislikes -
- Those around him getting hurt
- Cowards
- Failing those close to him
Enhancement(s): Salik has had two enhancements. His perception skills have been altered to allow him to read any situation faster then any human or Slayer. He is able to see any given situation faster and be able to react faster then others. This allows him to see an attack and potentially dodge it, he can change his attack in mid swing and change it, allowing to be more diverse while attack, but also, will allow him time to think in the most heated of battles. His second enhancement is to pair with his new found perception skills, his legs. His legs have been altered allowing him to move almost 10 times faster if needed, allowing him to be the perfect striker.
Weapon(s): Salik uses a Scythe. However he has an alteration. His has drilled a chain into his right forearm, the chain can extend up to 5 meters, he connects the chain to the bottom of his weapon, allowing him to be a close and medium range fighter, also without losing his weapon.
Ability: Salik has the ability to create Shock Waves, allowing him to send a pulse into the ground to come up at another point, often used to pin a target to a certain spot, but can also be used to send a shock wave of disorientation through his weapon. His shock waves shift the ground below, softening the ground and pinning the target to the ground. However, the further the target is, the more energy required, as well as how big the target is.
Noah Salik || Mess Hall
For: @TheHangedMan
The pain was intense in Noah's head, he walked with visible signs of distress. His face squished, his vision was all but a blur, he moved through The Mess Hall, guided only by confusion, something drew him here. In his blur, something stood out, strawberry red hair. He shifted through the crowd, the more he focused on the strawberry hair, the more his vision became clear. He was next to her, a voice, distant but ever booming echoed throughout his head.
"Gold..."
Noah spoke, his voice of confusion, but he had to know, what was happening to him?
"Gold...?"
Britney Chambers || Mess Hall
Britney had entered The Mess Hall, a bit battered and sore from her previous fight. A massive uproar was booming throughout the Hall, a fight between Dragon Gods and Archtypes. Britney wasn't going to egg this on, they shouldn't fight because of peer preasure, they should fight to prove who's got the will to win. Britney walked through the Hall and shift through the people, she was always watching. She saw her old friend Noah stumble through the crowd, but she chose not to focus too much on him, too much bad blood. She could see all the new comers, so many. She smiled to herself, oh how fun it is going to be this year, but... The gravity was tense in here, someone has so much power. Only someone who can feel the gravity could tell, but it felt... evil.
Noah Salik || Mess Hall
Noah flew in from above, he was just a spec to those below, but to Noah, the school was so big that it didn't even look the size had changed. Noah was above the Mess Hall now. He lowered his arms, his blood wings folded, dropping Noah at blinding speeds. The Mess Hall grew in size as he gradually sped towards the ground. People became identifiable, growing. Before he squished into the ground, he opened his arms, the blood wings took form and caught him. Noah landed on the ground safely and with grace. Why am I here... What's drawn me here...?
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