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5 yrs ago
Desktop profile login won't work. Coincidence that Windows 7 is no longer supported on same day? Consider me doubtful.
5 yrs ago
I wonder why I have no notifications, then I realize I forgot to sub to my own threads. Whoops!
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6 yrs ago
I'm having way too much fun with my Legend of Zelda Encylopedia. This is the game that got me into roleplaying so have a lot invested in it's lore and stories. Too bad can't have all the games too.
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6 yrs ago
It's begining to look a lot like Christmas...too bad it was already looking this way back in October...
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6 yrs ago
Whew, looks like only 5 days, stupid thing showed me six just to try and scare my pants off...

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The universe is a lawless place, full of tyrants, villains, and disasters waiting to be unleashed on the masses. No mortal organization has the power to police and bring order to such a place, though they certainly try. Only the strongest, the bravest, the most experienced, and the most cunning have what it takes to survive in such a place. So what about those who have no way to defend themselves from the evil out there? They must rely on mercenaries to fight for them.

There is one particular band of mercenaries that thrive on combat and will accept nearly any assignment with the appropriate incentives are given. No matter where in the Universe the Planet Breakers are able to answer the call thanks to the network of Yardrat instant transmission users employed by the group. As long as the appropriate Ki beacon is set, members of the Planet Breakers are able to quickly arrive at the location of employment.

Members of the Planet Breakers may accept or deny any offer given to them, on any basis; however, if they accept an assignment they are honor bound to complete it or die trying. If a client is unable to fulfill their end of the bargain after the completion of a job, the client will be subject to whatever punishment the mercenaries see fit and the contract will be considered breached. If the employer survives, they will be blacklisted and be unable to procure Planet Breaker services ever again.




So as you can tell by the title, this is a Dragon Ball role play, but in the format of something like a guild with missions to choose from. I decided on this format as I can limit how many people are in a single instance so it will be less likely for people to get lost or left behind. The limit would probably be around 4 players per mission, though could vary depending on the mission and amount of players.

The roleplay would be set in its own universe, where most of the known planets in dragon ball canon would still exist and have their cultures intact in some form or another. Essentially, think of this as an alternate reality, though certain elements would be the same like Super's world building. As such, pretty much any known race will be available for grabs and original races could be submitted as well, but would have to go through a check first.

As this is a Universe spanning playground, character power levels can start rather high, say around early Freiza Saga levels. Because we will start rather high in power, initial transformations levels of around Super Saiyan will be available shortly after or even during your first mission potentially. After each mission is completed you will be able to use your acquired experience to learn new techniques and gain the power ups of your choice. There will not be a hard system in place but you will have to decide what route you want to take with your character development.

Battle ~Flow~ System

In order to help you create more intuitive fighting scenes I will be using what I have dubbed the Battle ~Flow~ System. When a battle commences I will give information which will help you write battle scenes. Usually I'll try to put up the combatants, particular skills of the enemy you need to know they can use, and the difficulty of a fight. If it is a bunch of weaklings I might designate them fodder and just allow you guys to wreck them, but maybe there is a strong enemy among them that is an actual challenge, so I'll designate them as such, and you'll need to create an engaging fight with those opponents.

There are two main criteria that will dictate how a fight should go, the difficulty of the opponent, and the 'phase' of a fight. Sometimes the phases will be put together, especially if they are fairly weak opponents. For example, if only Fodder class are in the area, Beginning and Climax phases might be smashed together, obliterating the need for a Middle fight phase.

Opponent Difficulty:
Fodder - Enemies that will take hardly any effort to defeat, might drain some stamina though if there are a lot of them.
Challenge - Opponents that can put up a decent fight and you'll actually have to work to defeat and be careful around. I will direct them as the story dictates but in general you will be in control of their fights.
Deadly Monster - These high level threats usually have some nasty skills that could easily kill you if you are not careful, you will have to fight for your lives to just survive and hopefully prevail. With these characters I will be more personally involved with their fights to better control the narrative.
God Level - These cheap devils have myself directing most of their moves and can cause havoc with devastating skills and at times can be downright unkillable if certain conditions haven't been met. Very rarely will these types appear, and usually more for narrative purposes than anything else.

Fight Phases:
Beginning - The fight has just started, here you get a feel for how the fight will go, follow the opponent levels for clarification. Fodder class is completely fair game at all stages of a fight.
Middle - The fight is getting quite intense, blows are going back and forth and the tide is turning in one direction or the other. The threat level is usually the highest at this point in the fight and the writing should reflect that.
Climax - The end of the fight is nigh, perhaps there was a massive upset, maybe the opponent managed to sneak away, or perhaps the final strike is ready to destroy your foe. Whatever the case, try to figure out who gets to finish the fight or I'll just choose depending on how the fight went, this way nobody feels cheated by how a fight ends.




Well, let's see how much interest there is in this set up before I put any more work into it.
As per the usual, Talim was spying through his telescope from the roof of the Chateau. Talim certainly enjoyed a rather interesting position within the Chateau's ranks, as his quarters were positioned above everyone else. Of course the position of his room didn't actually mean anything but it was still kind of fun to be 'above' even the supreme beings. He hadn't seen much action as of yet, mostly because of his ability to spot things before most of the Chateau, so he had mostly been stuck on watch tower duty with a few local visits to locations here and there.

Talim had been the first to spot the defeated ESPER, but considering its speed, there had been no point in warning the Chateau before hand as it would be quicker for it to give its message in person, if it had one. Of course this turn of events was of great interest to the incubus as while the antics of the Chateau's staff was always amusing to spy on, considering most of the interesting bits happened indoors it made it somewhat hard to keep up on everything, especially when he was up on the roof.

"Time for a peek!" Talim quickly started to scan the ground in front of the Chateau as the alarm was raised about the incoming guest. It did not take too long to find Butterfly confronting the powerful being with Bone Daddy close by. Using his telescope, Talim was very quickly able to analysis the intruder, but the information he could glean was, minimal at best. It was easy enough to identify the creature as a Gorgon, no more likely a top class Medusa due to the coloring and form. Whatever it was, the Medusa was very high level which meant any real information gathering could not be accomplished at such a long range unfortunately. On the plus size, as long as Talim was far away and only observing the creature through the spyglass, there was virtually no way he could be affected by its eye skills.

"Oh what to do, what to do?" Talim pretended to complain even though nobody could hear him. Despite the obvious danger of the situation, Talim could feel his body tingle in anticipation, it wasn't quite as satisfying as spying on an enemy from inside their lines but it was enough to give him a little thrill. Now technically with the alarm raised Talim was supposed to go to the Climax Hour with everyone, but that really didn't seem like a good idea, better for Talim to stay on the roof for now to continue to observe the situation, plus as one of the better flyers in the Chateau, it was better for him to be on the outside anyway.

"What entertainment will you provide me with today?" Talim grinned as he watched events unfold, his sleek tail with its dangerous barb twitching in anticipation.





As soon as the alarm was sounded Violet quickly rushed to the Climax Hour, her small, armored body thumped through the Chateau. An alarm meant that they needed to be prepared for battle, as one of the NPCs with the highest defensive rating in the Chateau, it would Violet's job to tank for the rest. As soon as Violet made it to the area, she skidded to a halt and started to do controlled breathes to get herself into as calm a state of mind as possible. If it came to fighting this would be her first real battle in this strange land so she needed to be the best bodyguard she could be.

"Ok Violet, you can do this. Let's make sure I have everything I need." Violet meticulously went over every piece of equipment she had to make sure she was prepared for any scenario. "Full set of Guardian Angel Armor, check. Thundernyan check. Tower Shield of Spell Reflection check. Stock of healing potions, check. Ring of Size Reduction, check...I hope I don't have to take it off but I will if it means protecting everyone!"

Violet puffed some air out of her nostrils to try and put on her tough face. It mostly just made Violet looks like she was a little kid trying too hard. Still, one could not help but notice her resolve as her armored hands gripped her Thundernyan as tight as possible. She would give her life to protect the Chateau if needed.
Flan had decided she needed a little me time, away from the kitchens, away from service, just some alone time to recharge. So what exactly was the best way to spend that alone time? Why, with a bath of course! While a slime's entire body was essentially a digestive organ and needed to filter, having a relaxing bath and letting the water travel through all her cells was quite exhilarating and felt rather cleansing. Finding a time was rather hard to do considering all the mouths to feed but the skeleton butlers could at least chop up vegetables and whatnot for easy cooking later, so she could afford a small break.

The Chateau’s main baths were in a traditional roman style, so open air with what looked like granite, marble, and of course columns giving the area a bit of a fancy feel. Aside from the aesthetic, the other draws of the baths were they were large enough to accommodate larger species and multiple members of the Chateau at a time, also that the bath water could be modified with a special filter to give the water scents and various effects. Like eating the right meal before a battle, the baths when prepared correctly could be used to temporarily boost stats and wash away enemy debuffs. The baths had their uses aside from just being pretty.

Flan slid into the bath’s outer edge and looked into the waters; it appeared she would not be alone. Taking up most of the side of a bath was violet in all her baby-faced, giantess glory. Violet’s armor and other equipment was stacked in the corner, taking up a good bit of space, while Violet lounged in the water, her elbows on the side of the bath with a look of contentment on her face. Since her ring was off Violet was at her full stature, while she was petite for a giant she was still a giant and so even her meager assets were quite large in comparison to most everyone else. Violet was bathing in a pink tankini and cute pink bathing bottoms, the tankini just barely reached her bellybutton so depending on her position, it would either be hidden or showing. If Violet wasn’t so large, she would certainly be seen as a petite and cute young girl.

“Good day to you Violet Florence.” Flan curtsied in her maid uniform before heading to one of the bath’s stone benches. Flan heard a ‘kyaa!’ and a sudden splashing as Violet floundered about, slipping down into the bath upon hearing the greeting. Flan raised a non-existent eyebrow at Violet’s rather, violent reaction.

“O-oh Flan, Onee-chan, I wasn’t expecting to see anybody else today.” Violet’s cheeks were flushed emerged from the bath after slipping in from a brief panic attack. She quickly gave herself a quick one-over to make sure nothing had slipped out of place. Only a minor adjustment was needed.

“Forgive my interruption, but as I am sure you are aware it can be difficult for me to find time for such luxuries. I hope you don’t mind me joining you.”

“N-not at all Onee-chan, I was just startled is all, don’t worry about me.” Violet was glad it was someone non-humanoid who had popped into the bath while she was there. Revealing her large, clumsy body to others outside of combat was not something she particularly enjoyed. Everyone else was so small and cute compared to her, but at least Flan was not a humanoid like her so it didn’t feel quite as awkward to be seen bathing by her. Still, Flan certainly knew how to make herself look like a curvaceous beauty which made Violet feel a little self-conscious about her own body.

Flan nodded and started to take off her uniform. Off came the uniform and Violet couldn’t help but feel a little embarrassed at seeing Flan strip down to her black under ware which looked quite nice with her purple complexion. What came next though sent Violet into a frenzy was Flan started to strip out of even her undergarments. Violet’s face was dyed crimson and she quickly covered her face with her hands.

“W-W-What are you doing Onee-chan?” Violet’s frazzled voice caused Flan to pause for a moment.

“Getting ready to slip into the bath?” Flan responded as off came the bra and the panties were soon to follow. Flan tilted her head in a quizzical fashion as she watched Violet practically melt behind her hands. At least point, Flan was completely naked of course, her slimly, purple body reflecting whatever light hit it, especially where she still had her feminine curves.

“You bathe completely naked!?”

“Of course I have no need for bathing garments after all; I prefer to feel every pore of my body to have full access to the water.” While Flan was completely naked, she didn’t bother to show any feminine ‘details’ so it was more like looking at a smooth jello sculpture of a woman than anything else. Flan started her descent into the warm waters below, her body gurgled with pleasure as she started to automatically strain the bathwater through her gelatinous form. Violet kept her rosy cheeks hidden was she watched Flan descend into the depths of the bath.

Flan had to be a little careful to keep at least some semblance of shape as her body naturally wanted to just relax and dissolve into the water, while her nucleus would be fine, it would still be a pain to put herself back together if she let herself go too much. Soon, the slime was neck deep into the bath, her cheeks darkened in comfort as she allowed the rest of her body to virtually turn into mush. Flan was transformed into a very happy, slime blob.

Once Flan was almost fully submerged, Violet could see he body had returned to a more formless shape, a slime’s nakedness was truly quite different from other species nakedness. Violet took some breaths to calm herself as she tried to wipe the thought of sharing the bath with a naked Chateau member.

“Well, enjoy yourself, Onee-chan...” Violet mumbled as she tried to return to her state of mind before Flan had come, but to no avail. “Uhhh…well, I’ll be heading out first Onee-chan!” Not able to handle it any longer, Violet got out of the bath and quickly started to dry herself off with a very large towel.

“There’s really no need, I’m sure you were looking forward to this as much as me.”

“Oh no no no, Bath’s are made to be enjoyed in peace and quiet, I’m sure with my splashing it would be hard for you to fully relax. I-I’ll see you later!” In about two minutes flat, Violet had rubbed her body dry and quickly got into her armor and put on her ring, reducing her to the dwarfish size of 4 feet, decked out as the cutest tank one could imagine. With a quickly bow, Violet rushed out of the bathing area, leaving Flan to ponder Violet’s actions.

“Guess she just doesn’t like bathing with other people, well I’ll be sure to enjoy every second of my time here.” Flan started to bubble happily in the bath while she enjoyed the feeling of the water, flushing her completely clean.
Conversely, M177013 is familiar with bath houses in Korea due to his family there, which has gendered hot-tub and washing facilities as well as these rooms with the warm rocks and calm ambiance. The baths should be a place of quiet relaxation with no noise but the flowing of water, not even music or loud scrubbing. The waters itself isn't just plain heated water, but both medicated and herbal, so you don't even need soap. Just soak and relax.


I spent a night in a Korean bathhouse once, quite a nice place to be sure. Even had its own little restaurant, mats you could just pull out to lie on, and all sorts of weird rooms with different stones and woods for various effects. That of course was on top of the baths and saunas down below, quite the wonderful experience. Afterward I went on a tour of the DMZ.

Anyway, either one would have to enter someone's territory to take a bath or else there is a more communal one for everyone else. Hmm, well I can also just put one in the barracks for all those non-affiliates. Otherwise need to know which areas are open for non-members.
I have a matter of utmost urgency to discuss. We must decide what sort of baths we have at the Chateau. Large, marble roman style? Open air onsen style? Or perhaps something more conventional like tubs and showers? We must discuss and decide for...reasons. Well mostly I was thinking of writing a scene in one but I'm not really sure which way to go with it, also I am sure everyone will find this topic extremely important.
Well for now at least decided to change up Violet. Changed her armor set and gave her more of a bodyguard style. Also ditched the smithing part in exchange for some mining action. Also probably gonna give Talim a bow as well to give him a bit more in the air department.
Party composition wise she'd be pretty useful to have out and about, especially with any squishies. I suppose I could put in a mining emphasis for those tough rocks that one else else can get. Though if need be, I could tweak her and replace the smithing part with something else so she wouldn't be quite as 'necessary'. Could also add some smith bots in the Forge used mostly for maintenance and the like so Violet would mostly just be needed for making and taking care of high-grade stuff.

Didn't want to double-post, so here is the other character I had in mind for review.


Okie-Doki, let's see if everyone can handle this one. Just know that one should steel themselves before entering within.



Have another character idea too, but this is the one I ended up making first, so let's hear some thoughts.
On another note I think I need another character. Flan is great but as the resident cook bot it's hard to justify Flan going very far or getting involved at all outside. After all, everyone alive, especially Rodias, would never allow precious Flan to ever get in harm's way. Must protect and all that.

I have some ideas but perhaps some notes on things we might need might be good. Also is our resident healer considered inactive or removed now? Probably a pretty important role to have filled.

@Lugubrious Will probably need you to kind of set things up when the time comes so I can figure out exactly how such collabs are set up and done. Thanks in advance!
@Lugubrious Collab isn't something I've really done before, but I would be certainly willing to try. About time I got some practice in anyway. Course if you would rather not try with someone so inexperienced I'd understand.
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