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I missed that part. I figured they would know of one another but had not met yet. Vrikdarok is still under the impression that the shade is a messenger of Dúv.
Yea. That is either a very brave orc or a really dead orc. But either way, it is up
Eastern in the US. 6:20 right now.

So.. I'm not going to give anything away. But I am talking to all of you... All of you. You're all screwed. :) <3. With that said, I'm a part of the all part.

@Dark. Can the bad guys win? Is that a possibility? I know everyone likes a happy ending... but an ending is always happy for someone...

*Whistles the happiest, creepiest whistle he can as he skips off to his word processor. Also pops in his earbuds and changes from Incubus to.. I don't know.. something menacing, maybe FFDP or 40BS*

Dammit. I hate making a dramatic exit and then having to come back in to give details about my post. Assume that whatever response you two... yeah you two, have toward Oscar riding up to you comes before he is speaking.. And any speaking you two do comes after his questions but before the horse almost runs NewSun over. I think it's New Sun. Your character's name is too hard to remember (couldn't you have chosen something easy to remember like Vrikdarok?) so you're that guy. And the goblin is "the goblin". Once I know their names IC I'll try remembering them for the future.

*Skips back out.*
For the most part, being lord of the keep was uneventful. It wasn’t often that Vrikdarok was able to leave and go on his own adventures. The orc was too valuable and indispensable to Vish’Kar’s daily operation. He oversaw every department. Decisions about sanitary concerns and steadily increasing population and need for expansion of the mountain keep were required of him at every corner he rounded in the halls of the keep. It was exhausting and made the orc almost wish he had never slain his father to gain the position. These were the musings that currently ran through the enormous warrior’s head as he sat on his throne, one armored hand curled into a fist, on which his jaw rested lazily. He yawned. More of a grunt and growl, the air forced its way free of his throat and echoed throughout the large throne room.

The band of orcs had returned, half of what he had sent with a quarter of the suspected spoils. The roads were being guarded better and misinformation was being spread like wild fire. The damned Necromancer, as the orcs referred to it as, was causing Vrikdarok trouble. The raids from the under keep grew steadily in number and ferocity, causing the orc lord to waste more and more soldiers to defeat the humans and take their provisions. Suddenly enraged at the thought of orc lives being wasted at the hands of insignificant roaches like the humans, Vrikdarok stood and trampled the ground beneath his heavily armored feet, lashing out with his right hand at one of the iron ornamental torch holders that garnished the edge of the worn carpet leading to the throne. He snatched it into his hand, candles and all, and flung it at the wall in front of him. It clattered off , bent slightly. He wasn’t done. Chasing the candle holder down, he took it back to his form and beat it off the wall until it was nothing more than a folded mass of iron. He kicked the wall, roaring in his rage. Turning, he whipped the folded wreckage of iron and wax at the opposite wall. It clanked to the floor. Crossing across the carpet to the wall he knew well, the orc punched it and kicked the opening door, causing it fling open in front of him. He glared at the statue of Dúv, the crimson pools of sight dancing with the flames of fury that burnt within him. His digits of his right hand stung, bleeding into the spiked gauntlet from where he had punched the grey stone. “ANSWERS!” the orc roared at the statue, approaching it. “I want them!” His anger did not wane, “and you will give them to me! My forces do as you suggest we should and STILL, my kind are the ones dying!”

Black wisps of smoke emerged from the altar, swimming around it before solidifying into a hazy form, one that supposedly represented a servant of Dúv. It spoke, the words whispered hisses of air, “And do they not find comfort in death? Is death in battle not what your kind desires?”

Vrikdarok’s nostrils flared and his arm lifted above his head, dragging the six foot axe over his head. In a fluid motion, using the momentum gained from the downward swipe, the blade passed through the shade and into the ground, chipping the rock and burying a quarter of its edge into the rock. The intangible form regained its form unharmed. The lord huffed and screamed at it, “You know nothing of my people. You know nothing! To die by these insects is an insult to the idea of battle! You whisper things into my head and have never shown yourself! You’re a fucking coward!” The orc roared, spit flinging from his mouth, lips drawn back and pointed teeth and tusks shimmering with mucus as he growled the words.

Calm still, the shade replied, “I have survived longer than anything you have ever known, orc. Go to the under keep. You know the way. Go alone, though. Speak to this Necromancer… Have your concerns heard.” The orc’s eyes narrowed and his sneer softened.

“If I do not have answers when I return, tell your master that I will march to Ifreann and claim his head and intestines as my own. And I will make a coin purse from his meager nut sac!” Vrikdarok did not wait for a response. He turned on his heel, ripping the axe from the stone and strode from the room, placing two fingers between his mouth and whistling as he did so. His other hand grabbed the passage’s door and flung it closed behind him. The smashed back into place and the collision echoed through the hall. He continued walking toward the entrance of the throne room, replacing the axe to his back. His footsteps were joined by another’s whose pattered instead of clanged against the floor. The scraping of claws tore through the relative silence that overcame the inner sanctum of the keep. Without looking, Vrikdarok took a hold of the mane of the great mountain wolf and swung over its back and dug his heels into its flanks. “To the mines!”

The beast took off and the lord ducked his head, the long cape trailing out behind him just as his tail of hair did. They descended down the winding corridor and further down still, pushing several guards out of the way as they went. They were going to the deepest of the chambers recently opened in the mountain. Vrikdarok readied his mammoth axe yet again.

At precisely the right moment he struck out, shattering the boards that stretched across the mouth of the chamber, breaking it open in a single swing that crossed in front of the wolf’s path. He did not sheath it again. The two charged into the darkness, fearless though both could feel the coldness of what they would soon face.

Time lost its meaning in the darkness that engulfed them. They exploded through the mouth of the cavern, looking over the Necromancer’s keep from above it. A winding path that was carved naturally into the face of the cliff, led down to the eastern side of the fortress. Knowing nothing of caution at this point, the orc charged forward, altering his course so that he could approach directly, heading for bridge, across which a gate lay. Vish’Kar, Vrikdarok soon realized, was nothing compared to the size of The Fang.

While the wolf started to slow as grew near to the heavy, massive doors that barred entrance to The Fang, Vrikdarok sped up. He leapt from the back of the beast and raised his foot as he did, slamming it into center of the doors. They did not budge but the impact rang through the cavern and the main hall of the Necromancer’s lair. From the other side, the intensity of the orc’s anger did not decrease, “Open these doors before I cut them down!” Knowing that it was a futile effort, the orc still swung the axe, which was showing signs of wear from striking so many objects of equal or greater strength than it, at the doors. The clanging rang out, showing that he meant what he had said. He kicked it again, not knowing that he was literally knocking on the door of the most evil creature that had been born under the signs of the Nine.
The dragon had felt something. It was a fierce churning in her stomach that Sariloth originally attributed to the number of sheep she’d eaten. However, that meal had been passed from her rear several hours before and still the uneasiness persisted. As she flew, seemingly without direction, the upset inside of her grew. It was a sense that had never presented itself to the dragon before. The closest resemblance of similarity was when a mage had tried to capture her, several hundred years before. Magic! The thought crossed her mind, which, as feral as it was, reeled with attempts to find the intent behind this feeling.

That had to be it. There was no better explanation. The great beast almost altered her course, but continued inland. The peaks of the Olc Cairn rose before her on the horizon and her wings shifted her slightly. She was teetering, drawn in both directions at once. The further she went toward the Plains of Origin, the stronger the feeling her stomach grew. However, a separate beckoning of power begged for her to redirect herself toward the mountain chain. No, she ordered herself. First this, then that.

The dragon flew just above the cloud cover, avoiding detection.
It wasn’t until after noticing the armored man and goblin that Oscar noticed the orc. Filthy, robbing vermin that held no value for life in any form, orcs were. The man started to call out but was cut short by the booming voice that emanated from thin air. “That,” he mumbled to himself, shaking the voice, which was different this time, from his noggin.

Rupert neighed and obviously wanted to follow the other two, or join them at the very least. Taking the time to unsheathe his arm from the shield, he fixed it to his back once more. No fighting would occur, it seemed. Hopefully the fight would not be between the two and him, though the orc offered a different tale to be told, perhaps. Shifting in his saddle, Oscar patted Rupert on the side of his neck twice. The horse jerked forward and was at full speed in only a matter of moments. Dirt flew up behind the horse, splattering the swordsman’s legs with moist dirt.

He encroached on the two within only a few moments. Whether they supposed he now posed a threat was to be seen, but little mattered in that regard at the moment. “That,” he repeated. “is what brought me to you two I’m guessing. Well,” he continued, “not that exactly. More of a voice in the sky with no body to accompany it, is why we are finding ourselves talking at this moment.” Oscar’s voice was thick with the island accent that most Ju’ra citizens had. The fiery red hue of his hair was faded by the thin layer of dust and muck that accented the follicles. It hung in tendrils that kissed his cheeks. Once, about three days ago, it had been slicked back and held tight to his scalp. Things, however, had changed rather abruptly.

“Since we are going in the same direction, I ask two things,” he questioned, “has anything odd happened to the two of you lately? And, is that filth your companion; or, do we turn on it and have it for dinner this evening?” There was only a slight nod of his head as it tilted backward, motioning to the orc that stood in the distance behind them. Normally, Oscar’s voice was laced with jovial tones and gentle kidding, but not now. He was serious about turning on the orc and slaying it where it stood. Also, he may have been sincere about eating it. There were rumors that floated around Ju’ra about cannibalistic tribes that sought power from devouring their foes, or anything that they could get their hands on for that matter.

Rupert’s breath returned to him and he walked beside the two, who seemed to be companions already. The horse had seen armored men all of his life. In his conquest for freedom with Oscar, he had even seen a few goblins. This one, however, seemed likeable. The horse’s head peered from above, large eyes cast down at the creature’s form. Would it be too much if I nudged him? Maybe he has some food? I will have to make sure to nudge him when we get where we are going. This grass is plain and tasteless. Maybe he has a carrot. Without an eye forward, Rupert almost walked directly in front of the armored man, correcting his stride at the last moment possible.

The horse looked upon the armored man, shaking his head and breathing a sigh of apology for almost trampling him.
Darkmatter said
For your sake I am going to assume this post was sarcastic. I'm 99% sure you meant it to be but, I'll assume away that 1% as I never quite know with you.


Totally sarcastic. Going to read the IC in a few. Gotta catch up on the OOC because you guys post in a different time zone then me I do believe. At least that's what I've gotten from the type of activity I see going on while I'm at work.
Allowed. Aloud is used when speaking outward. When you read a book to a group of people, you are reading aloud. When you are permitted to do something, you are allowed to do it. :)
Darkmatter said
Decided to split this Chapter post into two parts. The first for Shankee, the second for Bawzel. The former will be summoning all the adventures and the latter will be calling for his generals (sicarius, inspector and NPCs (or other players who join between now and then)).Well then, it is good that you took the criticism constructively and I would be delighted to have you on board The thing with advanced is they require time investment. They have the most reading/writing but also the most reward. The plot and character development are to a higher standard. All I ask is to make the character a part of Enduwin make it fit. Feel free to create a new race even, we have a lot of humans Mostly, it's just that the grammar, syntax etc need to be maintained to a high standard and all's good


The character sheet for the BB shows me nothing. Literally. It's all smoke and mirrors and doesn't tell me anything on how to destroy him in one uber powerful strike from my non magical swordsman. Wtf. Fix it. I need to know his weaknesses and his flaws and everything that will help me make this into a short lived RP. Otherwise this is going to take time investment, development and real effort.

Also. I thought advanced existed because some people aren't good enough to write concise posts that are easy to read and understand in as few words as possible? I didn't know that advanced offered rewards... I thought it was a pain in the ass.

And I suppose he could have been hiding. But where? Behind a tall bush? Plus he's an Aries. He doesn't hide, even if he should. Uh. I understand that Aries probably don't exist in this RP. But that's how he is being played.
Kiddo said
Ah, well... like you say, five minutes isn't really enough time for them to approach from out of line of sight in such a way that Dssialii wouldn't have seen them when examining the surroundings. Still want your character to come relieve us of our boredom, though :P


He's blind and deaf, remember?

I tend to assume my posts are being made at the same time as the characters who are posting their own posts. Otherwise is a linear, depthless progression of events that makes me fall asleep. I get it though. No one wants to feel like their post was ignored. I should have probably pmed you guys first... But I feel like I'm above the law of courtesy among RPers. I'm also wrong a lot.

EDIT: The achievement for having most hiders in the Compendium goes to this guy. Yeah. That makes me better than all of you. It really doesn't. Ignore me. I'm in a pretty good mood, despite having to trash my comical post because you guys want me to follow silly things like line of sight and hearing and progression of time. Gosh. Uh.. Yeah. Someone post something.
Done and done. :)
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