Tyzitia: Accepted. It's well written, and everything falls under an obvious theme. Pretty much what I'm looking for.
Esra: It seems to lack a little bit of cohesion. Don't get me wrong, it's well written and fun, but she just seems to fall under so many categories. Void, construction (which in essence is the opposite of void), time, order. Maybe try altering the CS a bit so that it falls under a general theme? All of the themes there would be fun, but try sticking to just one and fleshing it out more. EG: Domain - void. Has power over nothingness. Not to say she doesn't have power over anything, but over the actual idea of nothingness. Think Sithis from the Elder Scrolls. If you want to link some sort of observatory power to that, maybe something like... being able to see out of the eyes of anyone who's blank minded?
Empyron: If you're a god of lightning... that kind of counteracts the whole hope and sun and stuff. Where's the sun when there's lightning? It's clouded out. Lightning is destructive. If we're operating in a functional, at least semi-rational universe, the views of the people shouldn't have an effect on what reality is. Kind of how believing the Earth is flat doesn't make it flat. The other critiques from before still stand. The character in question should have some sort of theme and structure, and be cohesive.
General: I'm gonna start working on the OOC post now. I'll let you guys know when it's done.