Iuniper

The Elder Scrolls: Heart of Darkness

This is conceptually wonderful, but I lack the Elder Scrolls knowledge to really contribute much. Looking forward to reading some great IC posts. Hope it's very Conradian and whatnot.

Endless

Is it a thing for each character to use a different color in IC posts? I've not seen a lot of that before. Oh yeah it is

I do realize think this first post was way too heavy with introspection but that was just because there's no one around for Hanir to act superior to.

@Drunken Conquistador

NEVER TOO MUCH INTROSPECTION.

Endless

Edited my CS for readability since my previous CS was weirdly stream-of-consciousness and/or confusing, and the character motivations didn't make 100% sense, etc. Opinions tbd but probably won't change a lot

Poor Hexaflexagon. Good luck.

Endless

Character sheet's finished with all the character opinions for everybody. If I got a bit too presumptive with describing people please let me know. Maybe we could even work out some "How they met" scenes to flash back to :p

@Dogematix

In general, the "opinion of others" is written adorably.

Endless

@Iuniper Sounds like a bit of an overreaction...but if you think you (Edit: "should") do better, then best of luck upon you!

@Virgil

All in the name of okay writing! And, erm, better understandability. I will be victorious!

Endless

I'm going to need to completely rewrite or scrap entirely a few sections of my CS. (The structure is very poor, and while much of the grammar is correct, I use a lot of indirect object structure which sounds very bad. I will need to tweak some other parts entirely because they come off as very "special snowflakey" and that is a pretty awful basis for a character. It might just be better to scrap the entire thing. ) I expect it'll be a few days before I can make an IC post. Definitely before the weekend.

Endless

@Dogematix Unh, that character art. Very nice. 10/10. This is also a really great character sheet.

Also, to anyone - I would definitely appreciate critiques on my CS if you have any, since you all seem to have a really good grasp on writing your characters, and something I've not done in a while. I'm rereading my CS and it seems startlingly unrealistic.

Endless

There is much back-patting to be had in these parts!

...Just be careful not to knock out a lung while you're at it guys >_>).

@Virgil

PLS LOVE ME
e: In any case, I have no place in criticizing people so I will be a bundle of .. erm, joy? Until then

Endless

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Naw, my CS is nothing compared to the rest of them, frankly I need to keep working on it if it's to stand up with the others.

@neogreggory

That's an awesome attitude to have. I think it's good to have a sort of 'hardened' type in the mix, so that's good. I'm sure it'll be easier for everyone to write as more content is contributed. :)

Endless

I suddenly realize that I've not been very talkative. My apologies in that regard, not good at conversing with those I don't already know, which may be quite a weakness when online now that I think about it. Anyways, you all seem like good blokes so...

Yeah...

I look forward to this. And on the subject of dark souls... Admittedly I only played the second one once, despite how much I'd like to have a go at a series. The entire premises gave me a soulsy vide though which is why I used a silver knight as my character picture.

@neogreggory

I already know you must be swell based on your cool CS, and talking only adds to the collective good opinion of you, I imagine. No worries!

Also definitely looking forward to this as well. I think you're right that the whole premise is sort of soulsy. :)