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*Headmaster removes ash from existence because that is his power*
Whoami said
Well I don't think Kade wants to give up that easily. :P
*Headmaster has her removed from the academy for harassment*
Horay for nudity!
It doesn't look like Roman's going to be responding, which is a bummer. Oh well.
I'll let Est decide when to move the act along, when they go off I'll move Hannibal and Cyrus and all that. I'll be watching your posts. I'm still here!
I'll let Est decide when to move the act along, when they go off I'll move Hannibal and Cyrus and all that. I'll be watching your posts. I'm still here!
I'm Jazzy, MrAllenJ, Co-GM.
Well, we can provide some leniency with grammar, but do keep in mind that good grammar is in the Advanced section's summary of things you need to have.
We tend to shy away from bloodbending. We can make an exception, but you'd have to have a pretty good set of weaknesses for Allen and I to even consider the power because of how effective and deadly it can be with so little drawbacks. We also already have a bit of a 'Wrathful demon god' who is young and doesnt know his own power.
I'll let Allen handle the necromancy. I'll let him decided how he feels about that.
We dont invite people because we dont make a promise that we will accept them. Post your characters, and we'll work woth you on them of there are problems. You DO apply to this RP, and if you make the cut after some work and talking with us you're accepted into the 218 community. Dont come into the RP with short term characters. Those tend to be forgotten pretty easily, or the person who owns them doesnt do a good job with them. You dont need a picture for your characters. But we do require a great deal of depth in the description in all aspects. I recomment looking at Allen or my own's sheets. They're on the second post in the OOC.
Well, we can provide some leniency with grammar, but do keep in mind that good grammar is in the Advanced section's summary of things you need to have.
We tend to shy away from bloodbending. We can make an exception, but you'd have to have a pretty good set of weaknesses for Allen and I to even consider the power because of how effective and deadly it can be with so little drawbacks. We also already have a bit of a 'Wrathful demon god' who is young and doesnt know his own power.
I'll let Allen handle the necromancy. I'll let him decided how he feels about that.
We dont invite people because we dont make a promise that we will accept them. Post your characters, and we'll work woth you on them of there are problems. You DO apply to this RP, and if you make the cut after some work and talking with us you're accepted into the 218 community. Dont come into the RP with short term characters. Those tend to be forgotten pretty easily, or the person who owns them doesnt do a good job with them. You dont need a picture for your characters. But we do require a great deal of depth in the description in all aspects. I recomment looking at Allen or my own's sheets. They're on the second post in the OOC.
"I am not sure where you get your measurements but an athletic man at 6 foot 6 is suppose to be pretty heavy, I mean Michael Phelps is 6 foot 4 and ways 194."
Michael Phelps is far beyond your character in physical capabilities. He is an Olympian who is not only constantly working and is in perfect human condition, with incredibly densely packed muscles giving him that extra oomph that goes into his weight. Your character is fairly scrawny for his height based upon how you described him (hell, I'm six inches shorter and have a bicep width of 19 inches) that really doesnt come across as a person who works out to nearly the extent Michael Phelps does. So if you want to keep him at his height you're going to have a bad time.
My character, Ben, is a 6'10, 324lb man. He is huge, and his muscular structure is what gives him his weight because he really is a big guy. Take this picture for example, which is fairly close to his appearance. He's stocky, even for his size, and he really is built like a little giant. Your character lacks the muscle condition to qualify for that weight class.
Michael Phelps is far beyond your character in physical capabilities. He is an Olympian who is not only constantly working and is in perfect human condition, with incredibly densely packed muscles giving him that extra oomph that goes into his weight. Your character is fairly scrawny for his height based upon how you described him (hell, I'm six inches shorter and have a bicep width of 19 inches) that really doesnt come across as a person who works out to nearly the extent Michael Phelps does. So if you want to keep him at his height you're going to have a bad time.
My character, Ben, is a 6'10, 324lb man. He is huge, and his muscular structure is what gives him his weight because he really is a big guy. Take this picture for example, which is fairly close to his appearance. He's stocky, even for his size, and he really is built like a little giant. Your character lacks the muscle condition to qualify for that weight class.
Ah, alright. Only reason I thought they were talking about me was because I recently asked about this:
To which Fallen Reaper was okay with, and then Zombie replied. I didn't know what he defined as coincidence, or if he just put the wrong person by mistake. I apologize for the confusion.
Jazzy said
I'm glad I'm one of the 4-5/2-3 people that post, because it's a really good RP and I've had a lot of fun writing my characters. I look forward to reaching some interaction. Once that happens I think stuff will pick up. Depending on how you all want to play it I could have Diesel smell the gasoline/hear the car running a little ways away and lead my group to you all, once the collab is done. It's just an idea since I didn't position my group in any specific area in Salt Lake City yet. I'm just trying to pitch some ideas here.
To which Fallen Reaper was okay with, and then Zombie replied. I didn't know what he defined as coincidence, or if he just put the wrong person by mistake. I apologize for the confusion.
I'm Jazzy, unless you're referring to something I dont know about lol.
Hey Paingodsson,
We have a few problems with your characters.
First off, he's really heavy for a person his height and muscle structure. Like, really heavy, I'd go as far as to describe him as being fat. Because he's about fifty pounds more than what I'd expect of a basketball player of his height and build to be. 160, sure, that's fine. 210+? The see you rollin'. Literally.
Second off, I still have no idea what he looks like. I'd recommend reviewing any of Allen's sheets, or one of mine as long as the character is not named Henry. I dont know what his face looks like, there's no distinguishing features about him on his face, there's nothing about facial hair, nothing about his hair style, face shape, etc. Severely lacking.
Thirdly:
"He is an outgoing person, most of the time that is. Except when he knows nobody then he becomes very introverted. But he is naturally extroverted."
He is literally the most confused person personality wise we have. Like, he doesnt even know what he is. His whole personality and appearance are pretty meh, and unfortunately if this character was accepted the way he is (which he's not, because he needs a lot of work) he would be left behind interaction wise. No one wants to interact with a boring character.
You also have two personality sections lol.
Fourth, your history lacks. There's nothing too it besides that 'lol he killed a guy' with no mental drawbacks. You cant just kill someone and walk away from it and be just fine from then on. After selecting a target, the killer often make plans. These plans take a long time to formulate; usually the killer doesn’t want to get caught, so they follow their target around and select the best time and place to strike.
Afterwards, there is guilt. Remorse. You don’t just kill a person and think nothing of it. I am not a murderer, but I can imagine what it would be like to have killed somebody. They would have nightmares about their victim(s) coming back from the dead to get them. They would be paranoid of getting caught. They would regret ending a life. The dying screams, the pleading, and the look in the eyes of the person they killed would haunt them to their dying day.
You can’t just walk up to somebody, stab them in the face, and move on.
You just can’t.
There is also the point that you dont just 'develop' tourettes. You are born with it, and you have it for the rest of your life.
Fifth, we already have a sound manipulator. Her name is Sylvia and she is bound to make your character useless because she's a bitch like that (and Allen does shit like that because he can. ily Allen <3 ).
Sixth, you cant store sound in your body and then throw it out in a punch unless you're amplifying the sound of your arm cutting through the air to the point where the sound hits harder than the punch.
Seventh and final, your character's mental illness coupled with his power makes him a danger to himself and everyone around him. In the condition the school's in right now they wouldn't accept a person who can accident badly injure or kill another person. Even if it's on accident.
We have a few problems with your characters.
First off, he's really heavy for a person his height and muscle structure. Like, really heavy, I'd go as far as to describe him as being fat. Because he's about fifty pounds more than what I'd expect of a basketball player of his height and build to be. 160, sure, that's fine. 210+? The see you rollin'. Literally.
Second off, I still have no idea what he looks like. I'd recommend reviewing any of Allen's sheets, or one of mine as long as the character is not named Henry. I dont know what his face looks like, there's no distinguishing features about him on his face, there's nothing about facial hair, nothing about his hair style, face shape, etc. Severely lacking.
Thirdly:
"He is an outgoing person, most of the time that is. Except when he knows nobody then he becomes very introverted. But he is naturally extroverted."
He is literally the most confused person personality wise we have. Like, he doesnt even know what he is. His whole personality and appearance are pretty meh, and unfortunately if this character was accepted the way he is (which he's not, because he needs a lot of work) he would be left behind interaction wise. No one wants to interact with a boring character.
You also have two personality sections lol.
Fourth, your history lacks. There's nothing too it besides that 'lol he killed a guy' with no mental drawbacks. You cant just kill someone and walk away from it and be just fine from then on. After selecting a target, the killer often make plans. These plans take a long time to formulate; usually the killer doesn’t want to get caught, so they follow their target around and select the best time and place to strike.
Afterwards, there is guilt. Remorse. You don’t just kill a person and think nothing of it. I am not a murderer, but I can imagine what it would be like to have killed somebody. They would have nightmares about their victim(s) coming back from the dead to get them. They would be paranoid of getting caught. They would regret ending a life. The dying screams, the pleading, and the look in the eyes of the person they killed would haunt them to their dying day.
You can’t just walk up to somebody, stab them in the face, and move on.
You just can’t.
There is also the point that you dont just 'develop' tourettes. You are born with it, and you have it for the rest of your life.
Fifth, we already have a sound manipulator. Her name is Sylvia and she is bound to make your character useless because she's a bitch like that (and Allen does shit like that because he can. ily Allen <3 ).
Sixth, you cant store sound in your body and then throw it out in a punch unless you're amplifying the sound of your arm cutting through the air to the point where the sound hits harder than the punch.
Seventh and final, your character's mental illness coupled with his power makes him a danger to himself and everyone around him. In the condition the school's in right now they wouldn't accept a person who can accident badly injure or kill another person. Even if it's on accident.
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