JonxlatheLion

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*cough cough* check out my new CS *cough cough* This one you should like better

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Character nickname: Gordon Freeman Gender: Male Appearance: Personality: Knowing, and quite wise. He's stubborn as all can be and doesn't give up on anything. He is a natural leader, inspiring others to fight with him as he hits the front lines. He is always willing to do what is right, and has shown this many times. Alignment:Protagonist Skills: Before: Same as deadpool After: Moderate marksman Extremely high intellect, Ph.D in theoretical physics. Complete mastery of using a crowbar in combat Powers: Gordon freeman cannot age, and is somehow... protected from death. It's almost as if a higher power is watching over him and keeping him alive by controlling the fates. This however means he cannot decide what happens to him, and must follow a certain path. Equipment: H.E.V Suit: A protective suit of armor that protects the user from radiation, and makes bullets and other physical attacks bounce off like nothing. A Crowbar: Does more damage than a broadsword, because fuck physics. SMG: Sub Machine Gun AR2: A fully automatic rifle that can also launch Combine Balls: football sized clumps of pure energy that will disintegrate anything they touch. RPG: Rocket Propelled Grenade launcher Grenades: Need i say more? Pistol: Simple, effective, small. Shotgun: For your closer range encounters. Phys Cannon: Able to lift just about anything, and then fling it at high speeds. Other: Password: Draco Ignis

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I sent you a PM btw, sam

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This character sheet has been deleted. Reason: Deemed 'against the ethics of the roleplay' by the new people.

JonxlatheLion

I'mma have to disagree. No one ever used those terms. The discussion came about because people felt Ghost Rider was not only a poor choice for what is a group-based roleplay, given his personality as a lone spirit of vengeance and that his penance stare would be useless against bosses (the only enemies you'd have reason to use it against), but also that he would be wildly mis-represented, leading to a character that would have been Ghost Rider only because it had the name and shared the powers, and those things do not a character make. It developed because, in all honesty, you failed to provide reasonable counterpoints to the arguments presented against you. Not only did you choose to take criticism as a conspiracy against you, you relied entirely on the premise of allowing a fusion of personality between character, which I have to say just defeats the point of bringing in the actual character anyway, might as well just make Joe Schmoe what got Ghost Rider's powerset on the transition. You also appealed to your own supposed seniority over other players in this roleplay as if that had anything to do with the discussion at hand, only to then threaten to quit the roleplay in a huff while saying it's "high time it died in your eyes", completely undermining any possiblepoint your previous tenure in the roleplay might've had. Was the character against the rules? Not really, not like anyone ever argued this anyway. Does that mean the character was a-okay? In my eyes and those of the people arguing against you, not really, because it wasn't actually Ghost Rider. On a personal note, this is why I choose to not play canon characters, because I know I won't get them just right and I'd rather not bastardize something I like. While resorting to personal attacks might have been uncalled for, your absolute refusal to accept that this might not have been the best idea didn't exactly endear you to others, and the little quip about original characters was mean, but I support roleplayers making their own characters even if they're obvious ripoffs/tributes/clones over taking someone else's work and messing it up.

Zero Hex

I understand that i did not respond well to this situation, as that day was not a good day for me by any means. I understand that you thought he would not do well, but see, misunderstandings can be sorted out in play. Characters being thrown together randomly aren't going to go together like cookies and milk the moment they meet. Thus, overcoming these misunderstandings will help all the characters improve, and even strengthen any bonds they already have. Ghost rider was worked with others many times, even people other than fellow Riders. He isn't ALWAYS the 'badass lone wolf' Though i'm fine with not having ghost rider, he's more of a treat than a neccesity to me. On to deadpool. Deadpool isn't used as a 'tragic character' He's a professional hitman with a sense of humor. The way I play him may not be exactly like the original, but he's pretty close in all reality. He's not being 'random' he's being a badass! It takes balls to crawl down the throat of something that could kill him just by exhaling the right way. The problem I had is that people thought that I was making deadpool a joke after just having him do two (count it, two!) purposely funny things. (the torched taco and the 'hemorroids ahoy' joke) Other than that he was genuinely trying to be a help to the rest of the group by taking out dragons one by one.

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Name: Joshua Keyes Alias: Ω (Omega) Age: 27 Personality: He has unstoppable determination and a will as strong as steel. Beyond that though, he's a fun-loving guy and a great big goof. Powers: He has immense strength at his disposal, being able to lift at his best five thousand tons of sheer weight. He is able to control how gravity affects his mass, allowing him to weigh almost nothing or how much he normally would; five hundred tons. Due to his super-dense muscle, bullets and other physical damage do barely anything to him. He can shrug off more brute force than any modern tank could. At max density his muscle is as tough as adamantium. Weaknesses: If it can cut through metal, it can cut through him. In other words, energy and heat-based attacks. Magic will work too. Appearance: Joshua has skin as dark as midnight, and is bald. He has bright green eyes that can either look extremely menacing, or as kind and kind can be. He is seven foot nine with a huge chest, and shoulders 2.2 feet wide. And as said before at max weight he is five hundred tons. But he keeps his weight at around 340 pounds. BRIEF Bio: Joshua grew up as an ordinary kid as far as anyone could tell. Didn't know his father, and no one he knew did either as his mother refused to talk about him. But at puberty, it was seen that he was no regular kid. He reached 7'9" when he was sixteen, and was just as big and strong as he is now. He doesn't even know how these powers showed up, or where he got them from. One thing's for sure he intends to find out. What they bring to the team: He's a tank; slow, heavy hitting, and able to take heavy hits as well. He's the one to walk in front and soak in the damage so the other members can work. Notes: Derp?

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The Outsiders (DC comics based OC Superhero RP)

Name: Joshua Keyes Alias: Ω (Omega) Age: 27 Personality: He has unstoppable determination and a will as strong as steel. Beyond that though, he's a fun-loving guy and a great big goof. Powers: He has immense strength at his disposal, being able to lift at his best five thousand tons of sheer weight. He is able to control how gravity affects his mass, allowing him to weigh almost nothing or how much he normally would; five hundred tons. Due to his super-dense muscle, bullets and other physical damage do barely anything to him. He can shrug off more brute force than any modern tank could. At max density his muscle is as tough as adamantium. Weaknesses: If it can cut through metal, it can cut through him. In other words, energy and heat-based attacks. Magic will work too. Appearance: Joshua has skin as dark as midnight, and is bald. He has bright green eyes that can either look extremely menacing, or as kind and kind can be. He is seven foot nine with a huge chest, and shoulders 2.2 feet wide. And as said before at max weight he is five hundred tons. But he keeps his weight at around 340 pounds. BRIEF Bio: Joshua grew up as an ordinary kid as far as anyone could tell. Didn't know his father, and no one he knew did either as his mother refused to talk about him. But at puberty, it was seen that he was no regular kid. He reached 7'9" when he was sixteen, and was just as big and strong as he is now. He doesn't even know how these powers showed up, or where he got them from. One thing's for sure he intends to find out. What they bring to the team: He's a tank; slow, heavy hitting, and able to take heavy hits as well. He's the one to walk in front and soak in the damage so the other members can work. Notes: Derp? Didnt see the OOC post, i'll post it there instead lol

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kalamadea, it was a character sheet for Ghost Rider.

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well, the beginning of Guardians is to explain how it is, when they're stopping the Children, they have military backup at times. Fear. I do enjoy writing lighter pieces. Just currently my main stories have a darker tone. The Burning is meant as a dark novel, Guardians is about war (so it's not going to be the prettiest story out there, but still better than The Burning) And one i'm looking into is called 'High School Never Ends' about a teenage anthro cabbit (cat mixed with rabbit, yay furries!) and his friends going through school (and their adventures and 'harmless' shenanigans along the way.) and pretty much having fun in the process. Gtg for the day, be back tomorrow

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You seem to have a major issue with getting your tenses right. "A rifle stock slams into the back of his head and he stumbles forward onto the vault door. He growls and brings a hand to the console at the side of the door" is in present tense, when it shouldn't be. "A rifle stock slammed into the back of Finnand's head, sending him tumbling into the vault door. Growling, he brought his hand to the console at the side of the door." flows much better.

Earnest Evans

yeah, i like to write in the present in most cases. I'm breaking the habit for my actual stories however (trying to)