Josie123 Member

I think that's a great idea.

Samantha almost jumped when she heard her caller go off on her ear and pressed the button. She took a while then finally spoke, "The newbie. Rick." She said his name but was still running but very quietly. *Oh no. Rick is a dead man for sure*, she thought as she found only 4 of the teammates and was missing Rick. So she said into the caller, "And the problem is, now we can't find him. And we are sure that the Outcasts here have heard it." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Midnight tensed up when she heard gun shots go off and nodded her head, "Lets go then." She had a straight face on but her eyes were filled with fear.

*claps* perfect. XD

Samantha felt a headache kick in once again making her groan. She put her hands to her head when she felt a thought invade her mind: It was the newbie-Rick- running and tripping on a stem of a tree which made him- Sam saw nothing else but she knew it was another gunshot when she heard another one echo in the forest. She cringed a bit when she heard it then murmured "Yup, Rick is sincerely going to get us all killed." Shuttering from the thought, she stood up and ran to find her teammates.

Sam and the other Blades raised their guns when they heard movement. She felt a headache start to come in and lowered her gun for some reason. But the others raised still had their guns raised and pointing at a direction where they heard the movement. Sam felt kind of grumpy since they still didn't let her have more guns like the others which was really no fair. Right when she was about to say 'Lets go back no one is here', the new Blade shot at a tree accidentally pulling the trigger. Which made a noise echo in the forest and made Samantha curse under her breath. "Rick seriously......Now I'm sure some of them heard it. Everyone go in different directions and kill if you find one." She said looking at all 5 of the Blades before they all ran silently in different directions while their guns still raised. Sam knew some of them wont survive but she hoped they will.

> > Her power is like seeing the vision but its the present. I don't understand it sometimes. Okay, I'm just going to give a example. If it still isn't understandable then I'll just change it. For example, if she was sitting down in the middle of the forest. She could see what is happening a mile away. Without her even being there. If it was a animal or a person, she might feel the emotion that person is feeling. > > so, remote viewing with a dash of empathy? You make it sound like a cupcake. But yup.

Okay. XD I think I almost had a heart attack if you didn't like. Somehow it always happens when I make a character.

Her power is like seeing the vision but its the present. I don't understand it sometimes. Okay, I'm just going to give a example. If it still isn't understandable then I'll just change it. For example, if she was sitting down in the middle of the forest. She could see what is happening a mile away. Without her even being there. If it was a animal or a person, she might feel the emotion that person is feeling.

Midnight was only in her second period for a couple of minutes before she had to go to math. As she did so, she couldn't stop but think about her nose bleed. It made her blush in embarrassment when she thought of it. She walked straight into math class looking down.

Can someone tell me if my new character is good or bad?