@Kaesus No! By all means keep your character. Would you mind If I invent a material that you're character is unable to phase through? Otherwise the whole intro thing might be a bit tricky.
I think that would be awesome, but I'm going to have him not knowing about the material as the story starts. And someday he might bump into a wall xD
@Kaesus Put it in the format provided and you should be good to go.
Also, I don't want to be a dick but I googled a line of Jasper's bio because I thought it sounded familiar and.....
Dunno how it sounds familiar, I came with the character inspired by Kitty Pride, and none of those links seem to be about it. But if you think it isn't an original concept I can come up with other thing.
Intangibility - Jasper can phase his himself or anything that he touches. While phased Jasper can "fly" through solid substances as long as he can hold his breath.
Proficiency with daggers - By self learning Jasper has become proficient in the use of daggers both in melee and range.
Stealth - In the past Jasper has shown great skills of infiltration and stealth.
For a few days now people had be whispering around weird disappearances in the Senkaimon but no one had properly addressed the matter. On that they the Captain had assembled a meeting with all ranks to inform everyone about the subject.
From what the Captain had said it seemed that the disappearances where actually murders but there was still no information about the assassin, he could be an Hollow, which was the most likely option but it could also be someone else, even a shinigami. After the instructions given a few shinigami rushed towards their rooms where each of them would receive specific task for that day. While walking back to his room Yami was hoping that we would be able to work alone because, firstly he liked it better that way, not that he did not like to work with other people, but while working alone Yami did not need to be concerned about his teammate's safety, and secondly while working alone he could call his shikai in full power. He knew well that his Zanpakutou hated when it was called in his incomplete form and Yami cared about his Zanpakutou thoughts.
When he arrived to his room the task was already there, so Yami took a seat on his bed and started reading through it.
Personality: Yami isn't the most talkative person, not that he is shy, he just prefers to keep his ideas to himself, though he will speak up if he thinks that something is wrong or not the way that he thinks it's right. He spends most of his time reading fantasy books that he brings from Earth each time he goes there on a mission. Other that that he likes to be outside and have walks in the the forest. While in battle his personality shifts, one can see the enjoyment in his face while fighting, his eyes "change" to a predatory look and his body takes a steady stance opposite to the more "chilled" one he normally walks around.
Former Life and Biography: Back when he was human Yami lived in Japan, nothing about his life was out of the ordinary, he lived alone, and grew up in an orphanage never knowing who his parents was. One day he died. He does not remember how, but the last thing he saw was a bright red-ish light coming from underneath his bedroom door. When he "woke up" in the soul society it took him a few years to understand what was going on and what was his place in this new world. He wandered from town to town, learning about the new world he was living now. A few years past until he decided that he wanted to become a shinigami, this decision came with no apparent reason, he just felt that it was what he was meant to do. So he joined the academy. During his training years Yami was never really skilled in Zanjutsu, but he balanced his weakness by being really good with Kidō and Hohō.
A few years after joining the Gotei 13,during a mission hunting a group of Hollows that were attacking a small village in the outskirts of Soul Society, Yami got separated from his group, and found himself surrounded by three Hollows, in that moment, while cornered, Yami heard a voice coming from his sword. It said a name and Yami called for it. His Zanpakuto turned into a bow, and using his Shikai powers he managed to defeat two hollows. The third one was bigger and stronger but after defeating the first two Yami's captain showed up and with a movement of his sword he destroyed the last hollow. Afraid of prejudice of his weapon look Yami was speechless towards the Captain, but without saying a word the Captain gave him a nod of acceptance and Yami dispelled his Shikai. Out of gratitude Yami now wishes to climb up in ranks in order to serve his Captain as best as he can.
Zanpakuto - Shiroi Umō (White Feather): In it's sealed form it looks like a normal katana with a white circular guard. When the Shikai is released chanting the words "Fly, Shiroi Umō" it takes the form of two small daggers that Yami can use normally but also trow and make them spin in the air. After trowing the daggers Yami can make change course in mid air and also make them come back to his hands.
Abilities: Not being skilled in sword fighting Yami compensates with the use of Kido, he is able to cast up to number 50 spells without chanting. Not being a master in Shunpo he can still move really fast as well as being able to air step.
Weaknesses: Yami's greatest strength is also his weakness. Afraid of prejudice by others for it's resemblance with a quincy bow, Yami never releases his Shikai true form, restraining him from using it's true power. Only when alone and if the situation really calls for it will Yami chant the words "Fly and Spread your Wings, Shiroi Umō" making his Zanpakutō assume it's true released form. In it's true shikai form, the Zanpakutō takes the form of a bow from which Yami can shoot arrows at great speed. When Yami activates his Shikai a quiver also appears in his back filled with 20 arrows (this number has grown with training), after using all the arrows his Shikai dispels. The arrows are surrounded by high speed winds. Yami can control the winds in two ways: make them have high speed and piercing capacity or make them able to push the enemy hit with blunt force. The only person in the Gotei 13 to know about his shikai true form his his Division Captain.
Theme: TO BE ADDED SOON
Hadō #1. - Shō #4. - Byakurai #32. - ōkasen #33. - Sōkatsui Homebrewed #53. - Karui Yumi (Light Bow) - seven blue bolts of light form around the person that casts it and can be shot towards one or multiple targets - (Tell if it's good or too op for the number) #57. - Daichi Tenyō Bakudō #39. Enkōsen #62. Hyapporankan
Alright, good changes so far. Only a few more details and we're good to go. Firstly, as I've said with the other kido based characters, at this point in the roleplay no-one will be able to cast Kido above 50 without incantation so we can change that. Add a kido spellbook as well so we know what you're capable of using as well. The arrows are fine as long as they're physical constructs after being summoned by the reiatsu, and the final change I'd like you to make is regarding the character age. 32 is exceptionally young, so maybe bump it up 20-100 years if at all possible to make it more realistic to the sccenario. Once you've made those changes, just let me know and we'll be good to go.
Done, also added added inner world and spirit pictures.
