My sexual orientation is that of a Demon Triangle.
10 yrs ago
Working on a Roleplay idea, it will hopefully work out.
10 yrs ago
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''A state of endless euphoria is precisely what it feels like to be taught the arts of writing. To wield it with precision is to wield a weapon of unrivaled literary power. Now, no one dares question what it would feel like to live in the world of literacy, for it would be unmatched, words being unable to express your emotion.''
- Anon
Introduction I am KaiserAuto, somewhat nameless as of now, but I could most probably throw out my name should the desire rise. As a Roleplayer I am far from inexperienced, I've spent some time roleplaying on multiple other forums, on G+ and even on Facebook. I felt the need for higher quality roleplaying, and thus I journeyed onwards, much like my friends, from the low standards of FB and G+.
Roleplay Genre Interests Whilst I am not specially inclined to anything of the sort, I am, however, most familiar, and most comfortable, around a fantasy setting. Whilst I've done my roleplaying in anything from modern to science fiction, I feel specially attached to the idea of which fantasy brings me. So, whilst I'm open to anything good, I am especially inclined (and somewhat biased) to join Fantasy roleplays that pick my fancy.
Roleplay History It may not exactly be as you'd expect, this roleplay history, it will be short and kept to the smallest possible limit, since I don't have much space to write.
As I said prior, I've roleplayed on FB and G+, I spent the most time on there roleplaying stuff like combat, fighting, and somewhat sketchy romance clichés. I had numerous circle of friends and I would quite honestly say that I built up quite the reputation. Whilst those around me where maybe not the best and grammatically efficient, (Hell, I'm not that good at grammar myself) it was certainly good times whilst it lasted, but repeated irritation due to quality, technique, and godmodding, lead me to quit that scene for a while. Now I'm here, hopefully for a while.
Roleplay Preferences Once In a roleplay I would certainly choose something along the lines of a villain, mainly because I am able to roleplay one with utmost ability. I'm more inclined to roleplay villains simply because I find it interesting to confront a band of righteous warriors as a somewhat evil Dark Lordwith ulterior motives. This interest came to me after reading a multitude of books and pieces of literature, and quickly I found myself interested more in the villain role rather than the heroic one.
Roleplay ''Difficulty'' I don't feel inclined to join any sort of following between the three 'ranks' of 'difficulty' in this forum, I am happy being able to freely move between the three and join if there's anything interesting to join. I could do Advanced, Casual, and Free.
Well, Cyclone, the trick is to not have dead space. rambling is a way to fill out space, but the space is dead and without importance. Therefore when writing one should have a ghoul with every sentence and kill any possible dead space found within it.
You can do that by removing unnecessary parts and decreasing the lenght of your sentences based on word necessity.
For instance: Yesterday I saw a crocodile, it's tail was longer than the towers of Hababubabu and it's teeth were sharper than the sharpest knife- but one might not even understand the might of it's strenght, I think even I would be thrown by that thing!
could easilly be turned into: Yesterday I saw a crocodile. It held a long tail and sharp teeth- and it's strenght was unparalleled.
@Cyclone I am aware of some of my own grammar errors, but often times I am far too lazy to fix them.
I find great curiosity in witnessing your writing.
Observing a style with such rich words and impervious metaphors places me at joys end. Whilst they are often times fluent and without worry, there are also times where the heavy use of metaphors brings the flow to a quick halt, forcing you to understand what you had just read. This is mainly due to the usage of such a rich vocabulary. Whilst it isn't a fault in itself, it brings the reader down and forces them to either learn the meaning of the word, or the meaning of the sentence.
However, in and of itself, for what I can say from my personal experience is that that doesn't bring me down. (Not trying to brag) That is probably due to my own vocabulary not being such a small decrepid place of malice and rundown filth (lol)
Like I was trying to say before I got lost in my own terrible sense of humor: I like it very much, however, understand that some who may not be as rich in word knowledge may not understand everything you voice through your writing.
C) Improve Infrastructure/Begin construction of city.
With the independence of their farming and food industries Ultor and his lieutenants gather in a discussion meeting after the great feast.
A multitude of answers came up from the fountain of questions, such as the construction plans for the city of Hazan-Khar, the Hazan-Murak. The idea of other dwarven settlements in the surrounding mountains, this idea came from one dwarf seeing the mountains alight during the darkness of night.
Ulkan and his own handpicked squad would perform scouting duties and investigate the mountains around Hazan-Khar, engage in conversation should the inhabitants be dwarven kin.
Plans for the preparation of the construction of Hazan-Murak were made and the construction plans would be redrawn to cover the mountain in its entirety and glory, the first part would be the Forge as well as the wonderful and legendary dwarven halls and walkways of the city.
Ultor also prepared his travels to the top of the mountain with the idea of appeasing the mountain and binding himself to the mountain as it's Khazan. This is the legendary union known as the Khazan Walks where the striving Khazan walks to the mountains top and holds a conversation with the mountain god, also known as a contract.
The icon of the contract is known as the Empyrillian Crown, a mineral of divine aspects.
Ultor would walk the journey to the mountains peak, there would rest the God of the Mountain on his throne of iron.
After a valiant return and a wondrous feast the Lieutenants and Ultor discuss what they’ve experienced and have in mind for the future. Mjoll speaks highly of his men during the expedition of the tunnels and with him he holds a map which he made in order to paint the explored terrain for his fellow dwarves in the future.
“It wa’ the least I’d do fer’ m’dwarves!” he said as he gave it to Drakkenhammer.
To end the return feast which would mark the beginning of these dwarves’ legacy- they honored the two dead, throwing two cups of the finest dwarven drinks down Hazan-khar’s gaping maw.
After that, many days passed whilst the supreme commanders of the Ironborne Legion discussed the layout of their planned mountain home: Hazan-Murak. The Blacksmiths played an important role in the plans and the groups were reorganized based on professions rather than availability.
Ulkan gave his carving and forgery wisdom to the fellows next to him, and even Ultor, a long-standing warrior began to learn a bit more about the craft. Mjoll began to realize why Ulkan was known as the Forger; he spoke with such finesse and knowledge that you’d think he was a descendant of Haffa-Kigol-Ungor, the lord of the forger himself!
According to Ulkan’s estimates the mountain city of Hazan-Murak would require fifteen essential parts. A forger, barracks, and citadel being a small amount of what is needed. The dwarven tools which were brought from the tunnels would prove just enough to perform this task.
However, he’d require many dwarves to accomplish this task, so he recommends that they should initially begin to inhabit the Maw of Hazan-Khar before thinking of establishing a vast capital city within the bedrock walls of the mighty mountain.
“You have to respect the mountains might; its walls feel your touch and every step you take desecrates its rock. With a mountain you have to be aware of its honor, of its knowledge, of its wealth!”
The members of the supreme command understood his teachings and, before deciding anything else, came onto the rather humorous topic of what to name this chamber of rule that they were within. All eyes turned to Ultor and he spoke. “The High Chamber, Hykur-yl-Kobar, named after the Lord of winter and order. That will be our ruling chamber.”
Within short time Mjoll came to a rather revolutionary realization. “Wha’f ther‘re other dwarves out ther’?” The dwarves of the High Chamber looked at one another and before anyone else could speak Mjoll continued. “I’mean, if we’re ‘ere, then s’ouldn’t other dwarves be ‘ere too? T’ese are s’m beautiful mountains!”
Ulkan quickly added. “He’s correct, there are some wondrous mountains in this region, from what I’ve heard at least three rivaling the heights of the greatest peaks of Varran…” Mumble came to fill the chamber and people began to recall these peaks of which Ulkan spoke of. “I’ve seen one of the mountains shine during the night sometimes, maybe there are other dwarves out there?”
Ultor took a decision, one which wasn’t as absolute as his prior orders.
“I’ve seen the mountains shine during night fall as well… Ulkan, gather some of the Boars you find worthy and move towards these mountains, scout them and whatever surrounds them- I want to know what exists in our area of dominance.”
Ulkan nodded quietly and put his hammer to his chest. It was far damaged than any of the others’, but a dwarfs’ weapon, shield, and armor was his family’s legacy. “Aye Drakkenhammer.” He said before exiting the tent, he’d leave at dusk.
“We have become self-reliant in terms of food, next is to construct a forge- a dwarf rather sleeps in a hut with proper weaponry than a royal bed without any ancestral heirlooms to speak of.” Ultor glanced as his own weapons and armor, and to the shields lining the entirety of the High Council’s hut. The shields of the families that belong to each of his lieutenants.
“Ultor, m’mate Ybarr ‘sed to be a forger, I t’ink he’d know ‘ow to carve one into ‘e mountain.”
“Mjoll, m’lord Drakkenhammer; don’t you need iron and molten magma to operate a forge?” A rather intelligent answer came from one of the junior lieutenants, he hadn’t shined prior to this. However, Ultor was intrigued by his sudden appearance in the dialogue.
“He’d been ‘alkin’ ‘bout t’is fer’ a while now, ‘ccordin’ to ‘im the bedrock o’ Hazan-Khar’s strong ‘nough.”
Ultor had a conflicted face, should he risk spending resources on the beginning of Hazan-Murak by the completion of the forge, or should he send a mining expedition down into the tunnels and follow Mjolls map which mentions high amounts of rich minerals.
“Hm… I pray that the mountain-father watches over my actions, and that Hazan-Khar will allow my desecration of his flesh.”
Mjoll turned to his friend Ultor and before he could say a word Ultor spoke, dominance in his lips.
“We’ve been too long without a home, may we rest our hearts and retake our pride- we’ll begin the construction of the mightiest city to ever be crowned upon Varran or this continent! It is time for us to rest. Begin constructing the Forge, plan a proper city for the entirety of Hazan-Khar and its riches!”
As the dwarves were caught by surprise, but also hurriedly moving along to perform their designated tasks a slight shine of joy could be felt form each and every one of them. They had officially obtained a home!
“Mjoll, I will walk the Khazan walks.”
After all others dwarves had left, Mjoll and Ultor were left alone, and as Mjoll heard these words he looked seriously at his superior ‘was he serious’ Mjoll thought and Ultor simply looked at Mjoll in return and placed his hand, one which had been through much and reassured Mjoll.
“I will return a Khazan, and when I will, for I will, the mountain will have blessed me and I; the mountain. The omen of which I saw will be none of worry but rather of glory and honor, I will return: the Embyrillian (A so called deified mineral in dwarven belief.) Crown on my head.”
Mjoll was silent, but he respected the will of his future Khazan: he believed in his words, he always will. In return Mjoll placed his hand on Ultor’s shoulder, a symbol of mutual understanding. ‘’When ye’ return I’ll be ‘e first ta’ call ye’ my Khazan, Ultor.”
The next night fall Ultor would reach towards the crown of Hazan-Khar, the mountain which carves even the heavens, he would do the walk which his forefathers had done and their progenitors.
The walk of kings, the walk to bind the mountain to its people- the Khazan walks.
The omen of which had haunted him before swayed repeatedly across Ultor’s face as if a whip of pure frost. The only thing which made Ultor continue on was his own vows, they would be his engines.
Oh boy. A learning process for sure. Shoulda stuck to Teemo. On the down side ur now an expedite group. On the plus side I won my bet your people are alive and have a vendetta of which cannot be quenched until the world burns by your hand as being a migrant group makes you pretty much the mongols
Turn has advanced to turn 4! The first non-player civ has been discovered and a "point of interest" has been marked with a star on the map to those that are close to it.
Again, if I missed anyone or anything let me know! It's not easy keeping track of everyone.
My people attempted to capture some of the remainder of those animals left in the forest as well.
By creating small holding pens made from the little amount of wood forraged from the forest some turns ago.
I also noticed my military populace decreased by 5%, what would cause this?
''A state of endless euphoria is precisely what it feels like to be taught the arts of writing. To wield it with precision is to wield a weapon of unrivaled literary power. Now, no one dares question what it would feel like to live in the world of literacy, for it would be unmatched, words being unable to express your emotion.''
- Anon
[b]Introduction[/b]
I am KaiserAuto, somewhat nameless as of now, but I could most probably throw out my name should the desire rise. As a Roleplayer I am far from inexperienced, I've spent some time roleplaying on multiple other forums, on G+ and even on Facebook. I felt the need for higher quality roleplaying, and thus I journeyed onwards, much like my friends, from the low standards of FB and G+.
[b]Roleplay Genre Interests[/b]
Whilst I am not specially inclined to anything of the sort, I am, however, most familiar, and most comfortable, around a fantasy setting. Whilst I've done my roleplaying in anything from modern to science fiction, I feel specially attached to the idea of which fantasy brings me. So, whilst I'm open to anything good, I am especially inclined (and somewhat biased) to join Fantasy roleplays that pick my fancy.
[b]Roleplay History[/b]
It may not exactly be as you'd expect, this roleplay history, it will be short and kept to the smallest possible limit, since I don't have much space to write.
As I said prior, I've roleplayed on FB and G+, I spent the most time on there roleplaying stuff like combat, fighting, and somewhat sketchy romance clichés. I had numerous circle of friends and I would quite honestly say that I built up quite the reputation. Whilst those around me where maybe not the best and grammatically efficient, (Hell, I'm not that good at grammar myself) it was certainly good times whilst it lasted, but repeated irritation due to quality, technique, and godmodding, lead me to quit that scene for a while. Now I'm here, hopefully for a while.
[b]Roleplay Preferences[/b]
Once In a roleplay I would certainly choose something along the lines of a villain, mainly because I am able to roleplay one with utmost ability. I'm more inclined to roleplay villains simply because I find it interesting to confront a band of righteous warriors as a somewhat evil Dark Lordwith ulterior motives. This interest came to me after reading a multitude of books and pieces of literature, and quickly I found myself interested more in the villain role rather than the heroic one.
[b]Roleplay ''Difficulty''[/b]
I don't feel inclined to join any sort of following between the three 'ranks' of 'difficulty' in this forum, I am happy being able to freely move between the three and join if there's anything interesting to join. I could do Advanced, Casual, and Free.
<div style="white-space:pre-wrap;">''A state of endless euphoria is precisely what it feels like to be taught the arts of writing. To wield it with precision is to wield a weapon of unrivaled literary power. Now, no one dares question what it would feel like to live in the world of literacy, for it would be unmatched, words being unable to express your emotion.''<br><br>- Anon<br><br><span class="bb-b">Introduction</span><br>I am KaiserAuto, somewhat nameless as of now, but I could most probably throw out my name should the desire rise. As a Roleplayer I am far from inexperienced, I've spent some time roleplaying on multiple other forums, on G+ and even on Facebook. I felt the need for higher quality roleplaying, and thus I journeyed onwards, much like my friends, from the low standards of FB and G+.<br><br><span class="bb-b">Roleplay Genre Interests</span><br>Whilst I am not specially inclined to anything of the sort, I am, however, most familiar, and most comfortable, around a fantasy setting. Whilst I've done my roleplaying in anything from modern to science fiction, I feel specially attached to the idea of which fantasy brings me. So, whilst I'm open to anything good, I am especially inclined (and somewhat biased) to join Fantasy roleplays that pick my fancy.<br><br><span class="bb-b">Roleplay History</span><br>It may not exactly be as you'd expect, this roleplay history, it will be short and kept to the smallest possible limit, since I don't have much space to write. <br><br>As I said prior, I've roleplayed on FB and G+, I spent the most time on there roleplaying stuff like combat, fighting, and somewhat sketchy romance clichés. I had numerous circle of friends and I would quite honestly say that I built up quite the reputation. Whilst those around me where maybe not the best and grammatically efficient, (Hell, I'm not that good at grammar myself) it was certainly good times whilst it lasted, but repeated irritation due to quality, technique, and godmodding, lead me to quit that scene for a while. Now I'm here, hopefully for a while.<br><br><span class="bb-b">Roleplay Preferences</span><br>Once In a roleplay I would certainly choose something along the lines of a villain, mainly because I am able to roleplay one with utmost ability. I'm more inclined to roleplay villains simply because I find it interesting to confront a band of righteous warriors as a somewhat evil Dark Lordwith ulterior motives. This interest came to me after reading a multitude of books and pieces of literature, and quickly I found myself interested more in the villain role rather than the heroic one.<br><br><span class="bb-b">Roleplay ''Difficulty''</span><br>I don't feel inclined to join any sort of following between the three 'ranks' of 'difficulty' in this forum, I am happy being able to freely move between the three and join if there's anything interesting to join. I could do Advanced, Casual, and Free.</div>
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