Klomster

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

There, i've done some changes in the timeline.

The Battle of Hymns was against Vogani in their homelands.
The siege of Krypola was against a massive slave rebellion.
The battle of shrooms are against a group of elves who thought they could leave the empire. The fools. (Like it was before.)

Claus probably know of the Sa yuta and Avem.
He has fought against the Vogani and been around Mao so he knows those very well, as well as elves.
However the Fu are probably unknown to him.

As for the forsaken, i think t̼̺̞̱̦̞̣̜͕̦͕̳̪͟͢͠h̘͍̯͉͕͠é̶̢̧̬̳͓͙̠̰͔̗̰͘ ̵̛̟̩̮̫̀͜f̶̸̡̛̞̤̲̼̲̗͚̟̲̗̝͕̪̣ǫ̺̣̥̺̲̼̬̩̼̫̤͚̝̜̬̯͢͞ṛ̵̷̞̰̱̲̹͚͇̞̮̝̩̬̱͇͘͢͝s̡̘͈̖͉͢͝a̴̢͓͚͉̘͕̳̜̝̦͙̱̣̮͚̤͍ͅk̀҉̺͈͚͓̝̖͚̩̝̲͉̼̖̱͔̰̺è̴̙̼̘̱̘̞̭͔͜ͅń̴҉̖͚̣̯̳͠ ͚͔̟̦͚̝̮͓͡͡ḁ̸̛̳̖̣͉̠̪̤̗̜͟͡r͜҉̭͓̲̗͚͉̦͈̺͕̯e̸̸̷̩̹͍͍͎̣͕̲̼̘͠ ̶҉͔̼̬̩ą̷̭̲̙̱̟͍̙͠n̸̵̡̬͚̱͔̞͇̗͢ ̙̺̥̯̗̥͈̩̳͙̭̕į̶̴̧̦͖̱̜̣̮͠ǹ̦͉̣̖̟̝̩͝t͡͏͖̝̟̹̱̻̥̮̖̥̬͎͉̻̖͙͇͚ȩ̀̀͏̤̼͖̭͍̖͓̘̫̹̖̻̪̯͕̳͡r̷̢̜̗̲̘͈̦̖̣̣ę̸̫̱̯͍̙̖͚͚̟̖̯̗̮͉̦̼ş̵̷̣̼̮̞͞t̫̙͓̤͙̖̗̙̦̥̰̣̦̦̤̀̀͠į̷̳̳̯̪͔̩̕͢ͅͅͅǹ̛̰̠̱͇̗͇̣̥̙̥̭̜g͏̶̱̠͕̗͈̳͙͞͞ ̴̶̧̗͕͕̭̮́͜c҉̷͙̱̤̻̲͇̫̪̥͔͖͖͍̗̭̯̘o̡̝̰̠̫͙n̴̴̢͖͖̘͎̞͕̦̬c̷̣̻̞̱̜̯̗͝͞e̫̫̝͇̖̪̭̪̫̯̠͓̮̘̗̠͘͞p̨̻̫̜̞̻̹̟̫̲̮̺̮̦̺̤̺̝̀͜t̵̪͙̲̯̩̻̮̯̯̺͎͈̺̝̦̬͕́̕.̧͓̖̻̳̮̙̬̤͟
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Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

So, could the battle of hymns be against the Vogani?

And the siege of Krypola a mixed bunch?
Or should they both be Vogani?

So what are the Sa Yuta and Fu like physically?

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

@Klomster Krypola is a good name. It would have been taken via a slave uprising given the Mao, Fu and Avem have all been conquered by the elves, the Vogani are currently on the defensive, the forsaken are..., and the Caelites and Humans are not at war with the Elves.

In in there I have named all the sentient species of our world.

@TheDuncanMorgan

Wait, who are the Fu and Vogani?

I also realised i've not been subscribed to the correct reference sheet. No wonder i've missed some things.
Also, i'll need to refer to the Caelites as Avem in this thread. I've played too much dominons 4. Or perhaps to little. Eh, only 534 hours so far.

Regardless.
Depending on who the Fu and Vogani are it could be those i've fought in some of the backstory.
But you think Krypola should be an elven fortress taken in a slave uprising?

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

I fixed my last post, i dunno with the posts before that one but at least that one is correct now.

Also @TheDuncanMorgan any idea who the guys at Krypola was? Should i have it as an elven city taken by elven slaves, or as some lizardmen or mao or Caelites or something?
If it come up in play i'd like to have it decided beforehand.
Is Krypola a good elven name?

Also, dang.
The Antherions are ruthless bastards. I like it.

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

@The Wyrm Good post, though one edit is needed: Formaroth is home to the best strongholds and fortresses in the world, and Clarm is considered one of the best strongholds ever built. It would not be regarded as 'crude' or 'children's toys'. If anything the grim company would be in awe of the fortress, particularly given most of the grim company is from Seikatsu where even the best castles are made from wood.

Also one more small point for everyone to take note; Clarm is not a city. It is a stronghold with a walled town at the bottom (called wellstone). Though it is a large town is a defiantly not a city.

@TheDuncanMorgan

Got it, i will edit my post.
Don't want continuity errors do we.

Or perhaps both i and Andrew have referred to it so much as a city it's too much of a hazzle.

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

I should figure out who the fellas in Krypola was.

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

@TheDuncanMorgan I guess most of the reason you put all these "preferably human" rules in at the beginning was so that your story of a human kingdom in reformation wouldn't consist of only elf, mao and caelite characters fighting over the human throne.

It would be a bit odd, but perhaps entertaining.
I suppose it could be another rp.

Formaroth: Battle for the Throne

I can just imagine.

Lady Grim hears of what is going on in the siege of Clarm.
-"The enemy commander did what?"
:P

I hope i didn't go too overboard with my last post. :/

Regardless, i have now updated my timeline of the steel fist, marked Ashala Harr as deceased and added that Claus knows elven language.

Are We the Bad Guys? - A WH40k RP [Mature]

@Sophrus Seeing your post i've come to the only logical conclusion.

Belief in the emperor, "disdain" for chaos, healing powers.
Yup.

Da-duk is a living saint.
I'll just wait until he dies, and sprouts golden wings and a holy axe of the emperor. Slaying us chaos worshipping fools with utter devotion.
And the sisters of battle will be like.
-"........ whaaat?"

Gardens of Jalaryias(Small-scale interplanetary Nation RP)

I'd say mix up the names a bit. Then it's all good.