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Red-Eyes has some really good fusion monsters as well as one of the best non-generic polymerization cards in the game.

Actually, I'm planning for the Neos House dorm leader to use Red-Eyes.

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@dragonmancer

For a Neos-house student, I feel like your character should have more fusion-based cards and there really is no excuse especially now that fusion is back with a vengeance. Of course, this is something that can happen in-character and you can definitely have more fusion-y cards come by as the game goes along.

Accepted.

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Fixed wordings
(will update the actual cards a bit later since I have to reupload them, and if any more changes are needed then uploading them now would be a bit of a waste.)

@dragonmancer

I have a template up for a reason. Lemme help you with what I think you should do.

Tail Spear of the Tyrant Dragon
Equip Spell Card
Equip only to a "Tyrant Dragon" monster. The equipped monster Gains 1000 ATK. If the equipped monster battles a defense position monster: inflict piercing damage to your opponent. If you control no monsters, you can reveal this card in your hand and send two cards from your hand to the graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Tyrant Dragon" from your graveyard.

Supreme Tyrant Dragon
Level 12 FIRE Dragon-type Fusion monster
3900 / 3000
"Tyrant Dragon" + "Tyrant Dragon" + "Tyrant Dragon"
If this card was fusion summoned using the effect of "Dragon's Mirror", shuffle the fusion materials used for this card back into the deck.
This fusion summoned monster is unaffected by your opponents trap and monster effects. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each.

Tyrant Dragon Overlord
Level 8 FIRE Dragon-type Effect monster
2900 / 2500
When you tribute summon this card, you can banish dragon-type monsters from your graveyard as monsters required for the tribute summon. Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to this card's summon. This card cannot be targeted by spell cards your opponent controls.

@SillyPhilly
I'm fine with you helping other players. However, if it is a balancing issue, that's my own domain and I would prefer if you stayed out of it. I've already threatened to ban two players. I don't like being the ban-happy GM. This is your second warning, however. If you do it again, I will ban you.

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#1: Because of your fusion monster's name clause you can't actually make it since you can only run a max. of 3 of each card in a deck. This can be solved with just havin it treated at Tyrant Dragon while on the field or in the grave.

@SillyPhilly

This has been addressed like twice already. You don't need to say it again.

#2:It's "attack again" effect is kind of busted. Change it to "attack another monster once again in a row" and put a once per turn clause on it.

It's really not that big a deal. I might think about it, but for now I'm okay unless someone can make a good case for it not only for me but Mr. Dragonmancer.

#3:Tail Spear just doesn't work. For one you can't tribute summon from the graveyard.

The wording was a little confusing, but it doesn't say tribute from the graveyard, it says to the graveyard.

#4. It's activation requires you to have no monsters but then it wants you to tribute monsters from both the field and hand. If you need to have an open field to use it then why have the option to tribute from the field?

Again, bad wording. He's apparently doing an errata of it so that he tributes from the hand. I think he should say "special summon" instead of "tribute summon" too. I'm also pondering whether or not to change "tribute" to "send from hand to graveyard" so he can't exploit Hieratics.

#5: 1000 atk is kind of big, especially for a revival equip. Remove this.

Axe of Despair OP komoney pls nerf

#6: The wordin youre lookin for is "if the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead."

He knows.

#7: Not quite sure why it needs to be treated as a Tyrant Dragon spell when it already has Tyrant Dragon in the name.

See above.

#8: What do you mean "tributed from the graveyard"? Don't you mean banished?

Djinns are "tributed" from the graveyard.

#9: It's effect that makes it attack again should require the destroyed monster to be sent to the graveyard.

Maybe, but it's not like he can just randomly tech Dark Law into the deck so it's not like that'll even matter. Again a problem of wording, which has been addressed.

#10: Once again, since this has a name clause you can't more than 3 of it. You are currently runnin' 6 Tyrant Dragons.

The horse has been dead for hours, yet you still continue to beat it. Why?

#11: A card that is unaffected by traps AND can attack multiple times AND is a casual plus 1 as soon as it comes out seems terribly broken. Pick 2 and scrap the third.

Supreme Tyrant Dragon requires three specific monster either on board or in the grave and a fourth card to fuse them all. As opposed to Kozmo shups or BECMD which are stronger and need less to summon.

Also please GM your own game. This one's mine's.

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@mattmanganon

You didn't change much at all of your character sheet did you? I thought you said you were going to play Nordics?

@dragonmancer

Dragons aren't an archetype.

The wording on your cards in general is a bit off-standard, so I'd like you to look at some of the actual cards in the game to make it more streamlined.

If Tyrant Dragon Overlord is treated as Tyrant Dragon always, it means they count as the same card. Meaning if you have 3 overlords, you can't have Tyrant Dragon (because you already have the maximum 3, technically)- same as the NEX fusion monsters.

A Solar Legacy isn't necessarily a strong monster rather than it is your ace monster. It's a card that evolves rather than being something that is already incredibly strong. I think in this case, Overlord should be your character's Solar Legacy instead of Supreme. Also, Supreme TD either has too low level or too high attack. I think its attack, effects, and summoning condition should let it be at least level 12 like BEUD.

EDIT: Is everyone wrapped up? If so, I'll move the story along.

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@Satoshi Kyou

Sorry for neglecting your character. I prefer to have dominion over the NPCs

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Each has a set of stairs on either end and an elevator in the middle

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I didn't accept your character though

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@KOgaming
So what's the Speed Counter cost on the speed spell version of PK Launch?

@Ammokkx

I'll put it up in the OP once I get home. 4 required to activate, pay 2 for effect, 2 for graveyard effect.

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