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Alright, I'll start working on some edits, as far as the backstory I just kind of tried to match your character close as I could.


You don't have to add more if you don't want to, I'm only adding more to mine because it felt lacking. If you don't feel the same way about yours than don't worry about it, we'll learn more about you as time goes on.
Oh! Don't forget, you shouldn't be on Earth!

Stream users are banned from Earth after the events that take place before Olympus's creation and all live off planet. Here are a few of the planets that exist now-

New Earth- This was the first attempt at recreating the feeling of Earth, as the war with the alien race had brought about a lot of problems for earth and had happened under the Galactic Council's watch, the group of advanced life forms gave the humans their backing and immense resources to create a perfect replica of earth through terraforming. This backfired however due to this earth having all of (if not better) resources and technology than the original but without any of its pollution which through the "normal" humans up in arms. This backlash, caused the Galactic Council to allow non-stream users to join in on the move from earth.

Dallha- A small beach planet, mostly uninhabited and kind of the complete opposite of "New Earth" this planet is a beautiful land of vast oceans and small islands. Most people get around by ships and the fish here are surprisingly delicious. Only problem is that a lot of the lower depths are home to some pretty vicious monsters and the jungles can be equally treacherous...essentially, stay in your designated area.

Rebellion- A once beautiful metropolis with wide grass lands in the east and several areas of different climate, this nameless planet was going to be the second New Earth but fell to in-fighting and is now just a mess of city streets and highways. As this place has some loose laws, many suspect it to be the home of some "rebel scum" who aren't all too happy with being forced off of their own planet. Rumors have spread that a secret group of Stream users and non-stream users are trying to start a war and are trying to procure weapons for a full on assault.

So those are a few(you can make your own if you want), there are also some space stations and of course an Olympus facility or two. It's actually a major plot point for later in the story when we find a stream user born on earth and it's like whaaaaaaat?

By the way, here are a few of the missions we'll be going on, you guys get to choose which one we do first.

1) Train Caper: Arnold, the businessman from the opening, is being offered another dangerous case of unknown substances; he's decided to take his private train through the mountains but the Olympus agents will intercept the train and take him out before he reaches the next station.

2) Attack the Ice Compound: A war criminal is receiving a shipment of weapons of mass destruction; the Agents of Olympus will need to procure the weapons, destroy the compound and assassinate the war lord responsible for all this.

3) The Sad Clown: A famous member of the Galactic Council is being targeted by a troupe of assassins that call themselves "Death's Circus", the Olympus agency is to perform security detail for him and his family as he goes to retrieve a series of important documents that could bring peace to a warring world.
@xGoblinKingxAlright, remember that you only have 1 specialty, this is what you are most efficient in which you just said was stealth also remember that what you use your stream isn't a skill so you wouldn't use your Stream in the description.

Everything else, those other skills are listed in "other" so your skills piece should look like-

Skills
Specialty: Infiltration. Agent Zephyr specializes in stealth. While at times goofy and casual, he can sneak through the shadows without anyone noticing with light feet and a controlled breath.

Others:
-Survivalist: He's not a trained medic but if needed he can stitch himself up
-CQC:Hatchets: He is extensively trained with his hatchets in close quarters combat.


As for your Stream, everything you listed for your Skills should be here. What you use your stream for and its limitations should go with manifestation, giving us a short description of just what you mean. It should look something like this-

Stream-
Manifestation: Line of sight teleportation- Agent Zephyr's stream allows him to easily gain access to well guarded locations undetected. With the ability to move instantaneously across short distances, Zephyr can execute irregular combat strategies and take out several enemies at an amazing speed.
Purity:7

I also need to know how far you can teleport because, with how you plan on using it, you might not want to have a purity of 7...that might kill you..

Really, the only fault I see with this is, essentially, where you put your information, not even the information itself. So, good job on the CS, I think he'll be a fine addition.

Though, I might give a little more meat to his backstory. I plan on doing the same with Neptune.

@FubsyWe still have room for more!! YES!! MORE PEOPLE!!!YAAAAAAYYY!!!!
@xGoblinKingxHmm, yeah, we're still excepting, I'm thinking of stopping at 6.
@Eirene Hmm, good choice!

Skills
  • Specialty:Sniping(Your character has the ability to shoot things from an incredibly long distance away, your sharp eye gives you an amazing shot with any firearm but your bread and butter is the sniper rifle.


Since you wanna be an assassin and since you're thinking of using "Sniping" as your specialty, here are a few secondary skills that would compliment a sniper-

  • Others:Stealth(for hiding), Ballistics(for gun upkeep) and....hmmmm..I'm not sure on a third one, maybe CQC:Knife(Close Quarters Combat:Knife(just in case))

Remember though, it's not just about skills. Your Stream ability will also have a major role in your character's life expectancy on missions.

If you ever wanna practice or anything, I made a few simulations for people who wanted to see what mission's would be like and what to expect.
Here's some specialties to give people an idea of what you should look for. A specialty can't be vague and all encompassing so here are two examples of fields you might want to have a foot in but are too vague to be specialties on their own.

Like if you wanted to specialize in-
Medical Science
you could go with


1. Psychology
2. Neurology
3. Physician (You know about the human body in general, which bones are hurting etc but nothing specific)
4. Toxicology(Overlaps with “Poisoning” but you'll be less deadly and you'll more often have the antidote than the poison)

or if you wanted a specialty dealing with-
Assassination
you'd probably go with-


1. Sniping
2. Martial Arts(Hand to Hand or Armed(specify weapon))
3. Stealth
4. Poisoning(Can overlay with toxicology)

Remember that just because you have 1 specialty, that doesn't mean it's your only skill. In fact, you can use your specialty to give more power to other skills. Like Neptune's skill in acrobatics is strengthened by his specialty, Martial Arts, because of the honed balance and agility Martial Arts gives you.

This is why it's important to pick skills that compliment your specialty and vise versa.
What does that even mean? Are saying that Sailor Moon is Sailor Earth? That she's the Guardian of Earth?
Oh, sorry for double posting!! Just wanted to say now that if you pick speed, remember that friction is a thing so you won't be able to turn on a dime which means you'll have a hard time using it in corners and hallways.

Also, sorry for all the grammar farts, I wrote this up a while ago but It'll be fixed before I post it in OOC land. I'm kind of big on grammar, that won't be problem with anyone right?
And besides, Tuxedo Mask is the guardian of earth so there can't be a Sailor Earth right?

Plus yeah, I don't know what this is about, may we have a few details on the game?
Woo hoo! I got a bite!!!!
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