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Kurt watched as Liam wandered all over the house looking for his wallet. He shook his head. For someone so smart, so eloquent and so darn on time all the time, he could be such a scatter brain to misplace something as important as his wallet. "Okay, okay. Stop." He held up his hands. "You're making me dizzy walking here and there. I'll pay for the groceries for now. And..." He reached into his pocket and withdrew a key. "You already gave me a key last week when I came over. Now, just go and relax... And..." His eyes fell on the bandaged arm again. "Maybe you need to get that looked at by a doctor. And maybe get a tetanus or a rabies shot or something." Kurt took his backpack off his shoulder and laid it on the couch. "I'll see you later." He said before walking towards the front door.
Kurt raised an eyebrow. "Oh. Mrs. Parks got herself a dog? That's strange. I thought she hated animals...or were you talking about Mrs. Kent? Oh wait, wait, she's a cat person and I think she hates dogs too..." He thought out loud and then promptly forgot about the dog issue when Liam launched his complaint. "Right, the texting... I keep forgetting about that... Well, I'm here now and I'm late but I'm fine." He grinned as he looked at his friend's face which still looked irritated. "Alright. I apologize. I swear I will keep that in mind starting today... But... You know...You don't have to worry so much about me. I'm a big boy and I can take care of myself. And my house... My house is just 15 minutes away from here. I could shout from there and you could practically hear me even if your windows are closed." He chuckled and then stepped in. When Liam didn't smile, he raised both hands. "I'm just saying..." He cleared his throat and focused on the writer's next question to stop himself from aggravating the situation even more. "Grocery shopping... I'll do it. What do you want me to get?" He asked.
Oh, right. I thought I edited that part. Getting on it now. I'd still like to keep the ring of fire power there, if you don't mind. ^_^ I'll keep in mind your warning though. :)
Editing done. ^_^ Additional powers added. Comments please so I may refine if I need to. Thanks for the patience, guys. ^_^
When the door opened, Kurt braced himself. There would be a glare and a reprimand about him being late. He would stand there and nod and try to explain. Liam would finally let him in but would still complain about it. He would promise it won't happen again but in the end it always does. The whole cycle occured so often, it was almost a routine dance. And sure enough, there was Liam, glaring at him. He ran a hand through his hair. "Sorry, sorry. I was working in the dark room and kinda forgot the time. I would have called but obviously, I didn't have time for that while I was hurrying over." Kurt explained smoothly. He was about to say something else when his eyes fell on the bandaged arm. He raised an eyebrow and studied his friend more thoroughly. There were dark circles under his eyes and his shoulder were hunched. "What happened to you? You look like hell." His eyes shifted from Liam's face to his arm.
Alrighty. Will edit soon.
I said earlier that I'll wait for Kapuchu but I'm editing the parts you commented on already. ;p
Hi Monochromatic Rainbow. Thanks for the comments. ^_^ Lol. I made a typo with the year... I think I was talking about the numbers 20 and 63 with someone when I was editing this. And so put the same numbers in. I feel so silly. Lol. I'll edit this one now. And for the rest of the comments, I shall keep those in mind and wait for Kapuchu's comments that way I do only one editing. ^_^ The comments and suggestions are making me write better. Thanks ^_^ and I do hope I fit in well with you guys.
Kurt Aldritch furrowed his brow as he studied the still wet developing photographs hanging on the clothesline he had strung up in his dark room. They were landscape photos taken from different angles. The first one looked off, the second one he used too much exposure. The third one looked fairly good but it was the fourth that earned a nod of approval. "You'll go to the gallery tomorrow." He smiled and then began the process of developing several more photos. As he reached for the chemical bottles, he caught a glimpse of his wristwatch. He lifted his left wrist closer to his face to see the time. The clock face read 10:45. "Oh, shit. I forgot all about Liam." He withdrew his hand and hurried out of the room. Developing films in the old fashioned way had always fascinated the raven haired photographer. And every time he worked in the dark room, he seemed to forget about everything else. He quickly washed his hands, grabbed his backpack and his car keys and was out the door in only a few minutes. Driving to Liam's house took a good fifteen minutes. Along the way, he considered stopping to get some sort of peace offering but when he saw the time in the dashboard, he changed his mind and continued on his way. No amount of peace offering would be enough if he arrived later than he already was. As he pulled over in front of Liam's house, his mind raced through all possible alibis he could give despite the fact that he knew that Liam won't believe him anyway. Settling for his usual "I forgot the time" excuse, he got out of the car and made his way to the front door. Promptness has never been his strong point. And it was something that irritated his writer friend. He lifted his hand and pressed a slender finger to the doorbell and waited, staring at the dark wooden door that was the same shade as his eyes.
Edited. ^_^ awaiting comments. ^_^
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