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You have given me something to ponder over and for that I thank you. It is more than welcome.


I thought you were receiving some unfair criticism and wanted to pitch in my thoughts. The sort of detail you've put into this setting is the kind you see on single canon RP site. Perhaps a bit overkill for a freeform place like this (though not unfeasible), but it'd be highly valued in other settings. You have a lot of creativity and I'd hate to see that discouraged.
I think I was twice that age when I got banned here, so I had no excuse.
For me they remove some of draw of truly delving into a character.


Personally I tend to agree. When I started my RP I drew up a very minimal outline for required bios and use them only as reference sheets, so I can remember names and relevant details. But the histories were optional. They're also familiar and a good starting place for ideas, but if I was playing an RP game with just personal friends, I wouldn't bother with them. They're a bit petty and cumbersome.

All characters, regardless of well laid plans, will evolve based on the story they're in.

Add.: On the note of too much information, there is a certain degree of merit to discouraging players who wish to put forth minimum effort in your RP. You don't want everyone to want to join if everyone wouldn't match up to your standards. Me personally, I don't join anything unless it looks challenging or well thought-out. You'll know the GM is less likely to be fickle.

It's also possible to get swept up in detailing the world instead of the story. I used to RP with a guy who would just create vivid worlds to the point of obsession and start a new RP every few weeks or months. However his RPs suffered from a lack of plot-worthy material and aimlessness. You can't expect to be able to involve ANY of the world information in the story. It should be there just in case it ever becomes relevant to current events or OOC questions about lore.

In your place, I would keep the doc handy, but the information would be private (though leaving it accessible as an option your players could be good too, if anyone wants to go the mega detailed route). If you think about how this information is presented to the reader of a novel, all of it is introduced gradually so that it can be easily learned and understood.

I've had the most success in RPs if I world-build as I go. Start out with a rough framework and then make it up as I go along, based on ideas generated by the RP, what I need to move the story along, and what the players contribute. But there are different styles and I don't see any problem with this, as long as you don't require anyone to read all of it.

There are some players, like Frettzo, who might like to do so of his own volition. So having that available as an option is still pretty cool.
For several years, that was all I had too. It got me through. I did lots of writing in that time. Got banned from a few forums (including this one). It was a wild few years.
Yeah I'm not exactly one to talk either.

Edit: Man that cat hair is really bugging me. Freaking cats.
Nice glowing keyboard, nerd.
Ha.
I think that your interest check would benefit from an abbreviated version of your Google doc here on this page. Just some quick summaries about your races and concepts that would give players a chance to form ideas without having to go out of their way. To give better form their idea, they can go ahead and delve into the doc to research.

Also, speaking personally, I haven't read any of the fiction you listed above so the references are a little lost on me, but I can understand if you're trying to attract a crowd with similar reading interests.

Clearly you've put a lot of work into this, and I'd like to see your RP take off the way you want it to. Making it digestible to players is a good way of doing it. Using the Doc as a reference sheet instead of required reading will ensure that all of your material is properly appreciated.

With that said I'm intrigued by such a detailed world. What do you have in mind for a starting plot?
“Go on, show Nana.”

A toddler in pink twisted with delight, brandishing a recently unwrapped doll in colorful plastic packaging. The camera panned to an aging face, which brightened with an amazed gasp. Lit along her edges by the ghostly blue light of the monitor, Camden felt herself smile.

“What did you get!”

Still tangled in her sheets, Camden curled around the tablet in her bunk. Before the Captain decided to crow for the morning, she stole what peace and privacy she could manage in the dark of her cabin. Friendly shadows expanded to fill the room in cool, cozy quietude, except for a twinkling array of colored indicator lights scattered along the walls. The ship’s engines hummed a soothing tune underneath everything, a sound that Camden had come to associate with safety and security.

The video ended, so reluctantly she peeled one limb from the warmth of her covers to navigate the touch screen. She had already flipped through a few pages of photographs and text entries when the Captain finally addressed his crew over the com, filling each room with his gravelly cheer.

Camden switched off her tablet and rolled onto her back, yawning and arching into a stretch with shameless abandon. Afterward, she collapsed back onto the mattress and made herself accept that another day in this life had begun. Now then, time to go be useful.

The ship’s medic was still twisting a tie around her dry, lusterless hair as she appeared from her cabin, pausing to glance down the hall. With a piercing feeling in her heart, she recalled that this would be about the time Dakho would be rolling out of his room, always with something sharp to say to Camden if he passed her by. This morning, there was no one down the empty hall. Just the shadows of Iikka and Reaver leaving from the other end.

It was a lonely feeling. She had never thought about it much until he was gone, but he was just about the only other soul on board who understood the value of a sense of humor.

Camden entered the mess hall and counted the heads as she passed by the cabinets. A prepackaged plate was drawn carelessly from one of the cubbies and given only a cursory examination before she slid it into the kinetic oven.

“Mornin’ lads.” Leaning against the counter, Camden folded her arms and hooked her heel on the surface behind her. “Iikka, you’re looking positively chipper, as usual. Sleep well?” She sent a smirk in Reaver’s direction as well. He looked about as ready for the day’s adventure as she felt.

The oven chimed, and Camden withdrew her breakfast. There was a metallic element to the steam as she inhaled the scent, but nonetheless she flicked a gold and white portion into her mouth.

“Mm, polystyrene eggs.” She sat down with her meal, keeping a comfortable amount of room between herself and the wireframed human. “Just like my grandmother used to make.”
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