Name: Lilin Crowne
Age: 14
Ability: Air Mimicry - Lilin can morph into a gaseous silhouette of herself. She is also naturally lighter and more flexible in her solid form.
Bio: Kidnapped from her original home with her uncle and aunt, the marauders realized they can use the little girl's ability to disappear to cause mass mayhem. They attempted to raise her to be the perfect thief. However, Lilin had other ideas. She found it amusing when the people she was told to rob would find themselves at the mercy of
her very own hands, a little girl like her. Soon enough, Lilin found herself enjoying the fountains of blood her victims would become while the rest would shriek and tremble in desperate fear. Horrified by what the girl had become, some of the thieves managed to convince her to come, as they went to turn themselves in. Betrayed by the only family she knew, something inside of her cracked. As she stood there, frozen, one of the policemen tased her into temporary paralysis once he realized who it was. She found herself locked in an airtight facility, and was only spared because of her age.
What do you guys think of her? A bit too young? The bio too extreme?