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Onepiece: A whole new generation.

If I am to understand this correct, Narumi and Allen are the first two to meet each other in Lougetown just before heading out, correct?

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

Well, this non-artist has come up with a fairly decent sketch of his character. I notice that I should have added something in the C.D. so I'll add it here and edit this post when i get the sketch on the computer.

What I forgot was that his nose is crooked. The left nostril is bigger than the right. If you look really close at my picture, you might actually notice it on my face.

Here's the sketch. I was too lazy to add the hair.

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

Well, I definitely like it. It sounds like you and I are going to have fun with the sarcasm. That's for sure.

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

Sableyezer said
not bad but, why the B in his name?

Monkey 'D.' Luffy, that's why.

Seriously, I just threw it together with only that in mind. There isn't really any need for it. It's just for flavor.
Also, I think I used the wrong word in his personality. By Non-persuasive, I mean that he cannot be persuaded to do anything he doesn't want to do, so I guess 'stubborn' would be a better word.

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

Okay I think this should do. If anyone has any ideas as to what I could change, please let me know. And be as critical as you want. Don't hold back.

Name: Orzahva B. Allen

Age: 23

Gender: Male

SO: Straight

History: Allen was born on an island in the South Blue. He never knew his parents and lived in the forest all alone. Everyone on the island didn’t want anything to do with him. To learn how to get off the island, he started watching the shipwrights at the docks as they worked on new ships. With the skills he learned over a few years, he turned 16 and built his own ship to sail the seas, but he didn’t have the supplies necessary for the voyage. Thankfully though, he caught the attention of one of the shipwrights who saw what a great job he did, and decided to supply him with everything necessary to get to the next island. He set sail for the East Blue, and due to many circumstances, he got to Lougetown 5 years later. Throughout those years, he came across many people, many different islands, and learned some things about him own family. After everything he has been through, he decided to wait a while in Lougetown for a few years or so. He spent the next two years looking for a suitable pirate crew to join, and while staying there, he found a Devil Fruit in a small crate just laying in one of the alleys of Lougetown. Not long after, he found the crew he would join.

Personality: Kind, Protective, Unsocial, Mostly sarcastic, Uncharismatic, Very Selfless, Secretly emotional, Mostly fearless, Non-persuasive, Pacifist.

Other Bio: Finds every way possible to avoid a fight. Reason? When incredibly pissed off, or given no other option but to fight, Allen becomes… different. His personality becomes unrecognizable. He also ignores all pain caused to him, and becomes about 5x stronger and faster, regardless of his small figure. Basically, think of The Hulk, just without the massive body growth or ripping out of his clothes. When in this mode, he loses all control, and would hurt even his friends if they get in his way, without knowing that he is even doing so.
Only goal in life is to live life to its fullest before he dies.

Crew Position: Shipwright

Weapons(if any): None, if he can help it.

Devil Fruit(if any): Unknown. Shaped like grape bushel. Orange color. Each grape shaped like a Gusher.

Abilities: -Very observant. Almost scary how observant.
-Can build things with great speed and accuracy.

Other(if anything):
-Aware of his anger issue. Has very good control over it.
-Hates The Celestial Dragons with a passion. Loathe if you prefer.
-Becomes social in serious situations, or when it’s about ships.

Sorry, but I still can't find a suitable picture for the character's look.
For now. I have a general description....
-Blue eyes
-Blonde hair
-5' 7'(1.7 m)
-Scrawny figure (120 lbs./54 kg.)
-Caucasian(tanned)
-If you have a good imagination, then try to put this in anime form, and that's the character's face.


That's all I have for now.

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

The more I think about it, the more I want to get rid of it. For now, it's still in, but we'll see.

Update: I've decided. I'm getting rid of having the ability. Instead, I've decide that the character will have found one and is carrying it to this day. That is if you guys find that alright?

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

It's mainly as a defense rather than just that. The idea is that no living thing can hide from him in any form. Even assassins have a hard time killing him. Still, I'm just throwing ideas out there to get an general understanding of it myself. The more I read it, the more I understand it. At least that's the goal.

Here's what I've got for it so far. As it looks so far, I might just end up getting rid of it which will be no trouble.

Devil Fruit(if any): Sukyansukyan nomi (Scan Scan)[I know it sounds retarded]
Abilities: Has the ability to see life-force of other living things
Down-sides: Obviously, can’t swim.
: Can only use the sight for about 20 minutes before problems begin; Any longer, and he begins to lose his sight for an extended period of time, up to three days at a time.
: Can’t see any living object in the ocean; Pools are different, as they try not to use sea water in most pools.
: Only spreads to 30 meter radius.
: Can’t determine exact distance of every life-force yet.
BTW, I used google translate for the name. It's still stupid.

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

COMBINE, I SAY!!!

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

The ability to scan for the life-force of any living thing. Currently within a 30 meter radius. So it's not the best of devil fruit abilities but it help the character do his job sometimes.

EX: As he is a shipwright, he can use this ability to check every piece of wood for termites.

Onepiece: A whole new generation.

That's a tough one. Here this might help. When in a fight would you rather have to fight everyone, or just the ones that can use haki? Also, throwing fire at people, or turning them into butthead, literally, is completely up to you.

Also I have a question: What would a Scan Scan Fruit be called?