Little Alice

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Sage,

I am not a GM, but would like to ask to approach it a bit differently. I think that its better take it to the PM's when a GM ask for it.
Not to mention that you're sounding like a passive aggressive person with such a reply. Please consider this from one to another member : Please take in consideration that the GM's want to balance the characters and game. For that reason they have to say no at times.

Hope you've something with that advise.

Edit :

I went over the CS and reviews.

I think the problem, seeing it from an objective view is that you didn't formulated things properly. You just told them about several factors that weren't written down as you just did. Without the needless passive-aggressive attitude.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Mika Hayashi
Kirigakure Jounin Sensei
Team 14

Nothing escaped the attention of Mika. The fact Chou stayed away from Haruhi, the preparation of Haruhi and finally she noticed the last student to arrive. Mika hadn't turn her head to glance at him, but she had heard the sounds of him approaching. Her mastery over Silent Killing however alarmed her of something else. Something was lit on? With a quick move, Mika turned to see where the sound came from. Haruhi had kunai with two tags. Paper bomb tags? Mika's right hand almost went to her shuriken pouch, wanting to deflect the kunai. If they were deflected from close, the boy would get blown up in bits. Or at least suffer some serious burns. But she remembered her own order. She had caused this.

Instead of thus saving Rai, Mika just stood there. Haruhi's approach to punish a late comer, like Mika had done with her, was more brutal. It almost brought a wicked glint in the eyes of the jounin. It was interesting to think the girl could probably cause some harm to her team mates. In fact, it brought up some grim times when Mika went through the ANBU training that was set up to make the ANBU the 'tools' of the Fourth Mizukage. Mika kept also her eye on Chou, wondering if she would do her 'order' as well.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

They are so distracting. x3
Until you have seen them all for one.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

It's a Konoha Genin CS?
Underneath the OOC opening it states they will want then two other CS's for the more empty villages. I think they won't review it until you have posted the other two CS's. Like Fattwan is doing. They haven't reviewed his Konoha genin either, yet.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Harumi Uchiha
Konohagakure ANBU

Putting on the strap, of the sheath for the tanto, Harumi then turned around. Slowly she put on the gloves to complete her garb. Now only that was needed was the ANBU mask. The black haired woman glanced at the whit mask, with the three purple marks. Slowly, as she was very wary of the mask, Harumi donned on. With that done, she would walk out of her house. It wasn't something big or anything special. Just good enough for her. Besides, she wouldn't need something fancy. If she wanted to do anything, she wanted as less as possible attention of the people around her. Her own clan. Not that she regretted that she didn't had the sharingan or such. No, she was proud of her skill and abilities. It had caused her to be picked as ANBU and she had showed at least in her records she was a capable kunoichi.

Walking outside the backdoor, Harumi then looked around. A habit of hers. Just to look around to see if she could spot a person before making her way to the Hokage Office. She would need to stand on standby in case the Yondaime Hokage would have a mission for her. Though she would like to head out again, Harumi wasn't in favor of seeing the man again. For her own personal reasons. ''No, focus.'' She told herself, in her thoughts. Putting her personal thoughts away, the ANBU headed towards the Hokage Office, jumping from rooftop to rooftop.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Mika Hayashi,
Kirigakure Jounin-sensei | Team 14

Slightly amused, Mika noticed the short struggle between the two. However, the eyes of the jounin had noticed something strange. The new comer had done something with her eye. Slightly Mika narrowed her eyes as she had noticed the change. It was normal however as the 'struggle' was over. ''That is good enough. Haruhi, you did an average job. Both at ease now.'' Mika calmly said with her cold voice. Looking to the newcomer, Mika raised her eyebrows. Chou, she had read about this genin. The messed up chakra lines in her body caused the special ability. The profile on the girl wasn't that interesting, but the ability of the girl was. ''Chou Minori.'' Mika said with the calm cold tone.

Pausing, Mika glanced at Haruhi. ''You still held back. I will tell you that is a mistake. Every nin is a potential enemy. Your punishment is that you're now not able to easily get one of your tracks. That should be enough punishment for not thinking about a better plan.'' Mika nearly sneered in Haruhi's direction. It served two purposes. First, she wanted to make it clear with Chou that her ability wasn't strange to her sensei. The second purpose was to make it clear to Haruhi that she should plan more before striking. Though she was a genin and had done it alright, Mika wouldn't admit that. It would get her killed. That was how she had learned it in the Kirigakure ANBU. There was no 'You did good, but next time better.' It was doing it right or get killed. There was nothing between success and failure. Returning her gaze to Chou, Mika spoke again.

''I want you both to do some warming up now. Stretch, run laps, jog. I don't care if you both start to socialize. But the moment the last member comes, I want you both to throw a kunai at him. Enough to make him wary, but not hit him. I hope I am very clear.'' The woman ordered the two genin. With her last words, the cold eyes travelled towards Haruhi. It wasn't sure if Mika meant really something with that or maybe she wanted to see if the girl would get the lesson as well?

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Awesome. Always fun to read more entries. ^^

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

It something that is just free for everybody that has a character. Just like the Breakdown. It offers a lot of insights, very funny ones if I may say so myself, and can be useful to learn some characters you might find interesting.

Its something we had before the December Crash. ;3

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Hahahahahaaha. Aw gawd. That brought a tear up.

Btw

IMPORTANT NEWS!

THE DATABOOK IS BACK! YEY!
The Databook!

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

No problem. I am kind of inclined to help after a CERTAIN GM said I was a good member. :C
Need to keep up a reputation after all.

That and think my reference might be a bit too clear (title of the flashback I made for Kiyomi) for some people. Even an idiot or worse might recognize my reference. x3
(Not anybody that is new. It's something of the past. ;3 )