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Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

plan B

Name: He calls him self Tartarus, though this is not his true name. He keeps his true name hidden for reasons known only to him

Race: Vampire

Gender: Male

Age: 847 years

Appearance: Tartarus stands at 1.95m in height, his hear is shoulder length and is a jet black color and is always in a pony tail. His eyes, due to him being a vampire, are a shade of red and are cat like in appearance, due to this he always has black sunglasses on, be it in or out side. Physically he appears rather slender do to his height, though this can be misleading as he is rather strong, his skin is ghostly pale. He can be seen at all times wearing black pants, black shoes, a red vest with a cross hanging off it, black shirt with a red tie, and over all of this he wears a black coat with a red handkerchief neatly sticking out of the left pocket on the coat and a pair of black leather gloves, along with this ensemble he always has a silvery cane that has a cobra shaped handle at the top (If you don't want to read throw all of this just look at the pic bellow)

How he looks

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Magic:
Schools:
Mana:18

Lightning: 17

Spirit:20

Mental:20

Technique: Due to his vampiric nature and having centuries of time, he was able to perfect his skills to a razors edge. His most preferred tools are that of the spirit and the mind, though he is well versed with lightning as well. His preference for the magics of spirit and mind stem from his nature as a vampire, as vampires are more likely to create illusions and tricks of the mind then anything else. The centuries of time he has had, he has used well; he can walk among a crowd of people, with out them even releasing that he is there, even if they do come in contact with him physically, they will not see him but someone else a man, woman or child or otherwise. Though should you buy some unknown reason ever be able to see past the illusions, the only thing you will remember is that you where knocked down buy some one passing buy and continue on your way, though you might also find a small burn hear and there from something that looked like tiny hands, though you would not know if they where tiny hands

Abilities: Because of his nature as a vampire he has grate strength, speed and agility that is only matched buy the elves. Along with this he is able to transform in to a number of animals, ranging from hawk's and owls to wolfs and cats, though he prefers to transform in to wolfs and owls. Though due to being a vampire he is highly susceptible to the sun as all vampires are, adding to this he is also week to silver, the myth that holy water can damage and even kill a vampire is just a story made by the Christian church, the most it will do is annoy them at best

Skills: Tartarus is a phenomenal violinist, as he finds it to be an elegant instrument that takes grate heart to play, or in his case a lack of a beating heart. He is also an expert on fine vines

Bio: Vampires, vampir (slavic pronunciation), sanguine, night horrors... they have bin called by many names but are best known as vampires. Vampires have bin hiding among men for as long as they have existed, walking side by side with them, using them as both food and as servants. Vampires are one of the rare races that have meddled in the affairs of men, influencing some of the events from history from the shadows. The darkest time for vampires was the aptly named Dark ages, where both witches, heretics and everything else they could get there hands on was hunted, tried and killed... though some times just hunted and killed. It was during this time period that vampires started to recede back into the shadows from where they could quietly observe and influence events and not be exposed to direct prosecution, and that's how it remained till the divine war. In the time be for the war, a council of six grate vampire clans was made to lead them all, and on the head of that council where twelve ancient vampire, of the twelve ancients, only six remain. Buy the start of the divine war, the vampire population was at half a billion strong, buy the end of the war, it numbered barely four million total globally. And where was Tartarus in all of this? Well, he was a part of one of the six grate clans that made up the council, though there are only two of the six grate clans left, his clan was the first one to be destroyed in the war, though some how Tartarus was able to survive the slaughter with a handful of others and hide. It was at the end of the war that he met Arthur Wick and learned of his plans. From that time on, Tartarus has bin acting as the professor of illusion and spiritual magic at the school. And what of his past? Well he dos admit him self that he dos not really recall all of it or from where exactly he is from, though he dos recall that he is from somewhere in Europe.

(As it stands, I opted to make a new character and drop Dendrin as I do not STILL have enough info on the dwarf race, you are free to use him as you will. I opted to do this cos I new I would have a bid more leeway to work with. Hears hoping this one gos throw. I might add some stuff later if this app gos throw tho)

@neogreggory @Myr @Cruallassar

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

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We know exactly why you've been nagging us. Not to sound insensitive...even though I am...but we don't care. If you have some real life things going on that may prove an interference, that is fine, feel free to tell us...but the mark of a mature RPer, which we know you should be by now, is that they can separate real life from the roleplay. Don't bring the irritation from your real life problems here. Please.

Your assumption is essentially correct.

Dwarf lore is up to my colleague to add, but I would recommend considering removing a few details from your backstory instead of replacing them. That way you give the impression you want without actually creating any conflicts with existing lore. If you don't want to do that, that's fine of course, it is your app...but such a thing is a skill that can be quite useful.

Finally, I was talking down to you, however this is normal when someone has irritated me. You don't irritate me, I won't irritate you, how does that sound?

Also, yes.

@Cruallassar

Well I will give it a wack or two of the hammer of editing to change (or remove) some stuff as even I who have made the app can tell that there are things that I have not added and need to remove

As for me asking if you liked tabletop games, hear is a link to something like it, you may or may not like it, if you dont feel free to bash me on the head with it
fabletop.com

(And neo I know you are there, so give me some more info on them dwarfs as there is not enough in what you posted in the races tab)

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

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I've not consulted the other GMs on the matter quite yet, but I suspect I am the voice of generosity on the matter, and will speak for all of us until informed otherwise, since you are so desperate for an answer.

There are two conditions for entry.
Firstly: You will please retain a modicum of respect for the GMs, their decisions, and their real lives. We are far longer-lived beings than you and possess the patience gained over such a time, as such, we have no need to keep to your schedule. Be honored that we considered your application for as long as we did instead of rejecting it outright due to the previously mentioned mistakes.

Secondly: You may be granted a total of ten strikes on both spelling and punctuation combined. This starts with your character application and will continue throughout the RP. We GMs will keep council and tally over your posts so as to keep a reasonable line of what is acceptable and what is a strike, that way you don't have to deal with my perhaps overly strict definition without assurance that others spoke in moderation of such. The moment you reach that ten strike limit is the moment your character is...removed. And be advised that this is over the course of the entire RP, not over any single post.

Now, with the understanding that this is a premature verdict and has not yet been discussed with my fellow GMs, you may consider re-submitting your character app if you find these conditions acceptable. If you would like to refrain from re-submitting it until we have a more unified voice, this is indeed recommended...however, you may find it useful to use that time for your edits. Rest further assured that I will acquire a final verdict within at most the span of a decade.

Signed: Your local GM who knows you and can get around your misspelled words with no problems,
-Cruallassar

@Cruallassar

Regarding condition 1: The reason I have bin nagging you guys this much is cos I have had a lot of BS going on at work and other wise, which compounds in to me being very cranky and irritable and cos I am to used to massivecrafts forum speed of reply, which is relatively fast

Regarding condition 2: I am just gona take a shot in the dark and guess that this means my spelling/grammar as a whole if I am accepted and that If I make more then 10 mistakes regarding spelling/grammar I am out? If I am wrong do correct me on this

My point 3: If I ma going to make any edit regarding my guy I will need some more info on the dwarfs then there is atm (unless neo added it in the mean time then I will just go and take another look)

Final point: Its a small thing but, the way you formatted this reply sounds, at least to me, like you are talking down to me which irritates to no end. So I will kindly as you to not speak to me like that if it was intentional (If its not then I am sorry for writing this bit) and just speak to me normally like you would usually do

And thanks for a quick reply

Of note: Do you like tabletop games by any chance?

CIV V play stile and strategy and nation picking

Hello to you all you awsome bastards! I am the one and only LORD DEADPOOL! Now as the name implies, this is a location/destination where you can tell every one how you play civ V, how you win it and how you do it with what nation. Keep the b!ching to a minimum or ľll b!ch slap the lot of you.
Now the way I play is the long term game with germany and always try to be the rich guy every one wants to trade with. I would normaly avoid wars as they can be damaging for profits, the only time I do go to war is to get rid of a pest nation thats right next to me, and when I go to war I go all out and try to take as much of the pests territory as I can and if possible total domination of the pest. As for citys, I normaly go for quality over quantity, at most I would have 5 to 7 citys spaced out to take as much land as I can and as many strategic resources as I can then by the end game when I have a constant surplus of cash, I can then just buy me an army, and all along that time I would be makeing friends with military city-states that would give me free units over time

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

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@LordDeadpool
After some thought and discussion it has been decided that Dendrin is to be rejected. I apologize Lord_Deadpool but the spelling and grammar is simply not something we can look past. Unfortunately, since all our contact is over the written word your small problem is unfortunately anything but. I really like Dendrin I can not deny, but sadly in this space spelling is key and while a few misspellings or awkward sentences can be overlooked, your quality of writing simply does not do DP.

@neogreggory

I still want in and I still want to use my guy, so what the hell do I need to do to get in. As it stands the ONLY problem you seem to bring up is my spelling, Myr had pointed out that I did a lot of geuss work regarding the lore of the dwarfs,the reason for that is the lack of info on them, the info that is there is waaay to vage. SO, to summarize: you ar not leting me in do to my spelling and I want to know what I need time do to get in. And ľd like an answer in the next week not in the next century

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Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

@LordDeadpool I take it, then, that Dendrin does not have any magical ability whatsoever? According to a for-some-reason-not-mentioned-in-the-OOC communique, 400 is considered 'really old' for a dwarf, and Dendrin is downright decrepit, by that metric. Other errors of note:
Arkangrad has only existed for 50 years, give or take a couple months.
We already have an instructor for such things as combat. His name is Glynn, and he is played by none other than Cruallassar
The 30 or so spelling and grammar errors. We aren't asking for perfection, but, come on, man.

@Myr

Yes he is a no magic character and as for the age thing I was going to set it at 300 something, but be cos there is no specific info on how long a dwarf can live I just thought in the ball park of 600 to 700 years old. As for the years of how long Arkangrad has bin around, thats a mistake on my end. Sense the CQC of my guy is a no go are the other two classes a go go? And the grammar stuff is a small problem that most of the people that know me ( I.E neo, crull and electra to name some) can get around with no problem cos it only happens whit specific words and to add to this english is my second language

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

@LordDeadpool Deepest apologies about the delay, life happened, things needed doing.
To start, I'd like to verify your familiarity with the template we've provided for character sheets.
You also seem to be making a lot of assumptions about Dwarves, and of the lore behind Arkangrad as well.
I urge you to examine the first OOC post and to adjust your character to reflect what is written there.
Based on what I've seen, this will likely not be the full extent of necessary changes to get Dendrin to fit.

@Myr

Yes I have used that cch (character creation sheet) and adapted it to fit my character a bit better. As for me makeing assumptions, its in no small part me not knowing the lore, far from it, I have looked it over and turned it 360* so I can get as much info as I can, but the thing is that there is not much info for me to go of off, the races most of all. The bit regarding the Dwarves is wage at best and dos not give me enough information to make a better assumption then the one I have. And my final point: This is why I kept nagging you guys to check my cc and to give me more info and/or to tell me to piss off

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

@LordDeadpool

But Deadpool, look! Cruallassar tried really hard to give you an answer to your app! Look at all the effort that went into that dot!

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It's a really important dot!

@Electra

Not funny

I'm glad someone recognizes my answer to the situation.

Beyond that dot and its meaning...which should be understood by those present...I leave the answering verdicts to my fellow GMs.

@Cruallassar

And the dot dos not mean anything to me