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@Experiment 249btw, I love the details on your CS. The pack contents are great.

Arn't they just?




Right, there is an ooc thread for sarcasm and public plotting, so I figure I may as well do some.

Footnotes from IC post 2

I'd kinda intended to make it to the tavern, but I held off putting his up last night as I felt it was too soon after my previous post and enough happened in the alley that I decided I should probably put my head in.

No, the constable isn't expecting me (or the local priest), but Saul intends to get there before the priest turns up so it will all work out nicely. What could possibly go wrong?

I don't know if I need to claim NPC's or anything, but as far as I am concerned the urchin is just a nameless mook and fair game for any/everyone to do with as they wish.

The leg wound isn't that serious - it's still hidden under clothing and isn't slowing him down that much. However, it was added as an excuse for characters with first aid skills to introduce themselves, so don't be afraid of using it for that.
Saul Kent

Location: A shadowy street corner then some rooftops over a popular alleyway.
Interacting With: A local urchin, three suspicious figures in a back alley.


The roads in town were Salarn were busier than the road to it, but that wasn't saying much. A few drunks who had made an early start on the festivities, street urchins who should be home, grumpy militia men on patrol.

He shuffled past an outfitters, now shuttered for the night. Replacing his missing pack would have to wait a while then, unless he wanted to break in. He stopped for a moment, glanced around to see if anyone was watching – then ran a finger down the door jamb feeling it out. Then called himself an idiot for seriously considering robbing some guys home and business just because he was having a bad day. There was no reason shopping couldn't wait until morning.

There were other matters to attend to, anyhow. The pressing matter of a tavern that he needed to locate before it was drunk dry by revellers for example. So he strode on through the streets, trying to ignore the growing ache in his leg from that recent wound.

He paused at a street corner, noticing the way the streetlights threw shadows here. A man could just stand there and be almost out of sight, if he felt the need to wait for someone. He paused a minute longer, weighing the advantages of an ambush in his mind vs his need to get to the tavern and dull the pain in his leg and his increasingly dry throat. Then he stepped into the shadows and started to wait.

He didn't have to wait as long as he had expected before an urchin came wandering by. Poor kid, ragged old shirt, ragged old trousers, and an equally ragged and torn wool blanket wrapped around him to keep out the night. No shoes. Every town had them, the orphans that luck and gods had left behind. The little guy nearly jumped out of his skin when Kent laid a hand on his shoulder from his hiding spot in the shadows.

“Argh!”

“It's ok.” The weathered dark haired figure spread his arms wide to show he wasn't armed and ment no harm. It didn't occur to him that the the stained tunic he wore was almost as scruffy as the urchin's own. “Shouldn't you be home with your mamma?”

The kid spat on the street. Kent just looked at him, as that answer didn't tell him if the kid even had a home to go to. “Mamma's drunk, better off out here.”

“Wanna make some money?”

“I told 'em, I ain't no thief.” Young boy stood maybe half as high as Kent did himself, and here he was trying his best to stand up before him. Granted, there were still enough people and witnesses around that Kent probably wasn't going to do anything here – but it took a bright kid to realise that. “Might not have much mister, but I got my pride. I ain't gonna rob someone just cause you will beat me if I don't.”

“I'm not looking for a thief.” Kent considered assuring the boy that he wasn't thieves guild either – his reply suggested he had been troubled by them already. “I'm looking for an honest kid, can carry a message.”

“Honest work?” The boy brightened up a bit at the thought.

“Honest work.” He reached into his purse and pulled out a couple of coins. It was a bit too dark for the boy to see them clearly, but both were silver and of good size.

“Awright.”

“One is for the head priest at the temple. Tell him the constable would like to see him in an hour.” Kent held out both coins to the boy, whose eyes widened somewhat on seeing them. “The other is yours for the trouble.”

“Thas a lot of money mister. For me, I mean. Priests do like their silver.” He was almost reluctant to take the offered money, almost not believing his luck. But almost doesn't stop you when someone offers you a chance to buy a whole new set of less worn clothes in return for a brief errand.

“You know there is a war on, yeah?” Kent answered as he started to walk away. “I might die in a battle tomorrow. Figure I can at least buy a young boy some new breaches before I die.”

“I'll see the priest gets your message sir.” Said the boy as the two parted ways in the night. “An Thank ye!”



It wouldn't have taken him long to reach the Crossed Swords where promises of strong drink and song awaited him for the slightly less than an hour he had before his meeting with the constable and priest. But something happened. There he was, limping down the road and – for once – mostly minding his own business when he heard shouting from an alley. He couldn't make the words out, and he couldn't hear the distinctive sound of steel on steel on steel on flesh but it was late at night, and a warzone about to be destroyed by undead. Any form of back alley altercation was probably something he wanted to at least know about.

So he ran over there. It wasn't far away so didn't take long.

Two figures at the end of the alleyway.
One armed, the other a minstrel or entertainer or some kind.
A crusading priest – or a man pretending to be one – at his end, with his back to Kent.
And...something in the shadows right at the back.

Kent didn't break stride as he ran round the corner and almost straight past Sundos. He leapt for the bottom of the roof of the house on that side, coming up a little short because of the bad light and jumping a bit too soon. He hung here from his fingertips for a moment scrabbling before he managed to get a foothold and push himself up. He also didn't scream from putting all his weight on his injured leg doing it.

Then he sprinted across that roof, leapt onto the next from which he could finally see the critter hiding in the shadows. Which was a dire wolf, sitting on it's haunches looking somewhat bemused. Well, only about half a dire wolf actually – it must have been quite young.

He looked down at the three figures gathered in that alley.

“Hi.” He tried to shrug nonchalantly. “...Err, would someone mind filling me in on what whatever it was I clearly just missed?”
Glad you like.

A lot of it is a bit ott and cliché, but... I don't actually have a huge problem with that.

I like my characters larger than life and with twice the angst because, well, if I wanted to write a story about an office worker I wouldn't have signed onto something about armies of undead and evil artefacts.

And clichés have become clichés because they are storytelling devices that work.

That said, I am rapidly realising how rusty a writer I am, and I have accidentally signed onto something that clearly has some very strong contributors.

So please do not be afraid of PMing me with suggestions, or calling me out if I'm getting carried away / going in a stupid direction / whatever.

I'm both going 'squee!' and really keen and 'Eeep! What were you thinking?' at the same time!
I want this character to get meta and ask for a drink that requires a Con save.

Given part of the reason for his drinking problem is to try and drink himself unconscious enough to sleep, I kinda like that idea.
...and voluntarily failing the save is quite likely!

But, that said, the reason I saw Amalthea's post and went 'Oh hell yeah' wasn't because it read like a three stooges skit, but because so much of the CS was entries like 'Flaws & weaknesses:' or 'Supporting cast:' or 'Additional plot hooks:'

Characters arn't defined by their strengths - they are defined by their weaknesses. Buy what they can't do, not what they can.

Anyways, first post is up.
I've been away a long time so I'm very rusty.
Feeback/further plotting etc is more than welcome.
Saul Kent

Location: The graveyard, then later Salarn town gate.
Interacting With: Some empty graves and the unhelpful guard who has been on duty all day.


The leaf fall squelched under foot as he walked through the graveyard. Dew already glistened on the bushes and shrubs as night fell and a grey mist started to close in. The air was stiller here, sheltered by the trees.

The figure walking through the graveyard pulled his cloak tighter more out of habit than any real reason. This felt bad. He was limping slightly on his left leg, the result of a recent skirmish with some soldiers. He had managed to repair his chain mail, but the wound just didn't seem to want to close up properly so blood trickled slowly down the outside of his leg under his armour. Nice, happy graveyards where everyone was resting in peace didn't feel like this. He remembered old rumours of an secret coven of nymphomaic leggy blondes hidden in the woods.

That had turned out to be a trap created by soul sucking faeries.

Why was it that rumours of hundreds of sex starved girls normally turned out to be lies, but rumours of people raising armies of corpses to kill everyone normally turned out to be true?

There was something unfair there, he felt.

He came to the first of the empty graves, knelt down beside it. He pulled a glowing rock from a belt pouch to help him see and looked over the hole in the ground. He reached into the loose earth with a suntanned hand, and ran it through his fingers. He raised his fingers to his lips, sniffed the gravedirt. licked his fingers, tasted the gravedirt. It tasted like mud. Kent stood up, shaking his head sadly.

He pulled himself to his feet and walked across the graveyard to the next empty grave leaving a trail of footprints in the early evening dew. This grave he also knelt down beside and checked. This grave he also wasn't happy with what he found. He stood up, brushed the dirt off on the side of his equally grubby cloak. His eyes scanned the graveyard again, trying to put a finger on exactly what was wrong here. Of course, he had his suspicions. He, like everyone else, had heard things. But hearing them and seeing, touching and poking them were two different things. So the figure in the muddy cloak spent over an hour nosing around the graveyard, occasionally scraping ivy off a tombstone so he could read it better or moving a bramble out of the way to see what was under it.

Then he limped back out of gate, down the path and back to the road towards the guards and the gate.

The road was quieter now and he was able to make reasonable time, despite the darkness. Most folks had pressed on to try and get to town before this late hour. He didn't really blame them for that, what with the night smelling of burnt orc an all. But then most folks hadn't spent most of this morning looking for their thrice-cursed-now-missing backpacks, or felt the need to go poking cemeteries just to confirm that there were, infact, undead there.

He soon made the town gate, and threw back his hood as he approached. The gate was closed.

“Oi!..”
The traveller yelled.

“Who goes there?” A faceless voice replied from the other side.

“My name is Saul Kent. I seek shelter, and food.”

“I know no man called Kent! Begone from here!”

'Well, that went well' Kent thought to himself. “I can earn my shelter!”

“We have enough farmhands!”

“I'm no farmhand! I am a carpenter!”. Well, it wasn't really a lie. He had never been apprenticed to anyone, but was fairly sure he could make a passable chair or whatever if he had to.

A lantern blinked on at the top of the fence, it's beam wavering down the path a bit until it shone in his eyes and made him squint. The gate creaked a bit as it swung open.

“You are welcome, Saul Kent. There is a tavern in the centre of town where you may find shelter.”

“Thank you” Kent nodded as he walked into town. It was often an interesting test of the mood of a place, he found – did they react better to an offer of gold, or to the offer of skilled help?
Just putting finishing touches on character now, hope to have first IC post up tomorrow if everything goes to plan.

In other news, dead happy with how some of it has turned out:

"Skills: Unsportsmanly Conduct"
"Might actually be made of nightmares or the souls of sinners or something."
"...an apocalyptically bad idea..."
"the fact that she hates him for turning her into a child murdering monster complicates the relationship somewhat."


...I'm really rather looking forward to this!
Excellent!

I'll get started on a character now then

How do you feel about bards of dubious backstory?
So, I wander back to this place thinking I might like to try some forum based RP again.

...and I see a character sheet like that.

Ok. I'm sold.

Is there by any chance room for another?
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