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    1. Lyfe 11 yrs ago

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SoleAccord said
Fix some of the issues I've mentioned and try again. If my analysis is too harsh for you and you no longer wish to join the group, then you're free to do that too.


Too harsh? Well now that's just insulting ^_^ Thanks for the criticism, if Seijuro is not liked here perhaps I will scrap the idea and offer another character.

Oh, but one thing. The massacre of 122 people kind of eliminates the threat of things like 'background checks' when you do it right. You know... cause no one knows you're a murderer? This was a shortened version of Seijuro's actual history where the dots are connected more fluidly. I admit I half-assed that one as I've had a lot on my plate, not like that matters to you though. ^.^

I revised his bio, changed his history, removed several techniques including his sensor ability and made his Shinsoku more damaging to himself. Gave his illusions a clear-cut weakness that any intelligent shinobi can pick up on. I just have to work on the endpoint of his history, but I'm not sure how you want to deal with his status as an ANBU member seeing as his status in the Bingo book isn't exactly set in stone.
Will the real Slim Shady please stand up?
Amphibian the Mighty said
Where is Connor and where is Tyler? Or Austin...


Frog-chan...
Beta said
Lyfe. Your IC post has an issue that needs fixed.She's the Kazekage, bro.


Pssshhh! Mizukage.. Kazekage.. same shit, right?
Tsuchikage post is up though do my Genin even exist..?
The stench of stale tobacco smoke sat in the air of the Tsuchikage's grotto atop the highest mountain of Iwagakure. His assistant, Sogeki, persistently insisted that he keep a window open yet as the Tsuchikage smoked his pipe his thoughts seem lost in the atmosphere, oblivious to the stale aroma staining his furnishings. Kazuma Harukotsu, Second Tsuchikage of Iwagakure, was leaning on the back two legs of the chair, thinking of the Chuunin Exams to come, although he should have been doing desk work that had been piling up over the past few weeks. Sogeki entered the room abruptly, the Tsuchikage's chair falling forward as his eyes focused on his comrade. It was easy to tell that he had been procrastinating any real work he had.

"Shirking your duties again, Kazuma?" Sogeki asked in a disciplinary tone with a slight grin on his face. Kazuma leaned back again, looking away from his subordinate and finding himself staring out the window. He mumbled something in response, it was either a joking insult or a lame excuse. "I know you have a lot coming up with the exams and all but don't you think there are important matters to attend to right about now?" It didn't seem to register with the Tsuchikage. He was still stairing out the window aimlessly, though he had most certainly heard his assistant. There was a short pause before he finally turned to Sogeki and looked him square in the eyes.

The Harukotsu's eyes were an electric blue, his hair a black mess with no real form to it, tufts of hair just stuck out and gave him a somewhat unkempt yet free-spirited appearance. His chair touched the ground on all four legs again, and he folded his hands together on his desk. His firm expression never faltered as he stared down his assistant. "Gather the Tsubakihara girl, the Kamizuru kid.. oh, and that immortal freakshow. Yeah. Those three. After thinking it over a bunch, it's them. They're the Genin I want representing our village."

And that was that. Letters were sent to the Genins' homes to inform them that they were selected to participate in the Chuunin exams and were to begin traveling to Uzushiogakure immediately under Jounin supervision. Kazuma himself traveled with a caravan of two Shinobi. The travel was a long one, but felt rather short to Kazuma as he daydreamed and allowed his thoughts to carry him away from himself on his journey.

Arriving in Uzushiogakure was a little odd. He didn't expect anything fancy but he assumed accomodations would be made for his stay.. they did not. He received many judgmental, piercing glares from pedestrians in the village. Especially along the outskirts where the damage from war was highly evident as the poorer occupants seemed to live around the village rather than in it. This was were where the judgmental atmosphere was most intense, many of the villagers whispering to one another and when an Uzushiogakure Shinobi passed, they would either scowl or spit in the path of the Tsuchikage.

Kazuma paid very little mind to it, one of his aides commented that their rude behavior was most likely due to the jealousy over wealth, as Iwagakure was a rich country who had suffered from the war as well but still made out prosperous from it. Kazuma, on the other hand, had taken over after the war. He was not responsible for these peoples' damaged lives. And in knowing so he corrected his aide, explaining that their behavior came from grudges held against foreigners for coming onto their homeland and bringing disrespect upon their people. That is why they did not welcome the other Shinobi.

Eventually Kazuma reached the entrance of the Uzukage's manor. He took a deep breath before drifting through the threshhold and up a flight of stairs. A long hallway led to two large wooden doors, the presumed location of the meeting of the six Kage. Kazuma entered through the doorwar with his two Jounin guards, and quickly scanned the room. He discerned the only woman in the room to be the Kazekage based on her uniform, and determined the Hokage to be the other occupant, aside from the large old man sitting across the room at the head of the table.

"Oi, you lot are the Kage then?" Kazuma shrugged before talking over to the right side of the table and taking a seat. His escorts stood behind him, one on either side, standing firmly still like gargoyles. "Well, let's get this formality over with..." He sighed as he looked over the three other present Kage once more, taking in their appearances and attitudes toward one another.
yoshua171 said
So are any of the other kage going to post? If not, I can post.


I'll post as soon as time allows, probably sometime today.
Iwa has so few people >____>
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