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    1. Makatsume Haru 11 yrs ago

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Oh god. .-. I am so very sorry I saw Fire Lance and went full derp about it! >.< Forgive me, Baldy, damn momentary dyslexia attack.
Ray, I must say, I don't love tragic stories for characters a lot but this teared me up! T-T

I like your character a lot! Maybe I'll make mine fall for her
Okay... Baldy, you'll need to block the Fire Lance too for now. Fire as a whole right now is a no-no. Also, the one in which you absorb stamina, strength, etc... from people killed around you, I'll need to ask you to nerf it a bit. Were something happen where there is a mass massacre you'd become OP by only standing around. So, if you want some advice on how to nerf it, then I think you should put that she gets those buffs from people SHE kills and those buffs are rather small. Also, the icy glare,please stick to objects. Basically, you can already form ice out of nowhere with your spirit.

I'll be here nerfing your abilities, the rest of your CS will be reviewed by Haruna.
So, we don't have to be strictly japanese, right? And I'll be having my CS up today, later, but today.
Hey Lugubrious, I got Kano to interact a bit with Greg, hope ya don't mind. :P
Kano was sitting on the bench of the bus stop, his mind wandering far away. Well, more than sitting he was lying there as if he were in his bed, the only thing impeding him from completely lying down was the backrest of the bench. He really wasn't thinking of anything of major importance, but the news of someone suddenly fainting were indeed preoccupying. He didn't know the girl well, more like just some hall small talk when he had nothing better to do. Kazuko is her name, right? He wondered if he should visit her in the hospital sometime. Maybe it would be rude to just appear when a moment ago he couldn't remember her name really well. Still, that kind of things were what Kano often tried to steer away from, so he shrugged and dismissed it.

Ah, the bus finally arrived. He stood up, hands inside his pockets and boarded the bus. He let out a sigh. He was a bit disappointed because the day was not only boring, but also somewhat devoid of life. Many people were still dumbfounded with what had happened with Kazuko. "But that ain't my problem." He whispered while he gave the driver some money to pay for his bus fare and the driver turned around, thinking Kano was talking to him. "Oh no, it is nothing, ojisan." He motions with his hand not to worry about it and searches for an empty seat in the bus, and a tease worthy seat mate.

He found someone who looked rather interesting sitting alone and stretching out. Perfect. He walks directly to that seat and sits beside the blonde guy without even asking for his permission, a big cat smile on his face. He was sure to have seen the guy before in school, but this was the first time he'd get to actually talk to him, something he had intended to do some day, just to tease him a bit. "Hey there! I am Kano. I believe we both go to the same school." He extends his hand. "Well, I just wanted to ask ya, is your hair natural or do you dye it? Cause if you do dye it, then we are comrades!" He points at his head, since he also has blonde hair, just that his is dyed. He wanted to get the conversation up and going so he could start teasing the guy, and if he was a foreigner, then all the better, he could get every stereotype he had on this guy's nationality to entertain himself. Kano just hoped that the guy wasn't temperamental.

Scarlet thorn was lying down on the floor of a little forest, beneath the shadow of a tree. He was so completely relaxed that he would beat the crap out of someone who dared interfere with his relaxation time and the sound of someone walking in the distance, who as well seemed to want to make his presence known in the whole forest, wasn't exactly a soothing sound. The harder he tried to relax, the louder he'd heard the footsteps, even if the sounds weren't as loud, for him it seemed that way. Steadily increasing, this was getting on Scarlet Thorn's nerves.

Along with the stressful footsteps, the birds were also chirping and, even if it was more relaxing than those armoured footsteps, it was also being annoying alongside the other sound. Well, since his relaxation time had already been interrupted by the sound of footsteps from someone who seemed to be armed to the teeth and his paranoia, he might as well see who was the cause of the ruckus. He stood up with a swift break-dance motion and walked to where he thought the footsteps were coming from. When he finally encountered someone, he let out a sigh. "A guy huh? Well, what was I expecting? A hot armoured girl? Oh, whatevs." Now at least he had someone to tease, which would be a good way to kill time. So, Scarlet firstly sneaked up behind and then put himself to the armoured guy's side, took his arm and put it around him. "Whatcha doing, boy? Looking for someone?" The androgynous Alter Ego said in his high-pitched voice, so knowing what his gender was would be rather hard with just his voice. "If so, why don't we have some fun...? He said, taking the armoured guy's arm and embracing himself with it. It'd be really funny after he discovered Scarlet was just a guy messing with him. The though of it made Scarlet giggle.
I'll leave Merthus' flat state up to infinitum, maybe it was destroyed vcompletely or it just took some damage, but one thing is for sure, it didn't go out unscathed.
Well, he has trained for quite some years for this and he is quite stubborn, so yeah, kinda :P

And it wasn't technically to knock HIM out rather to knock Merthus out, so the force would be the same, it is just that he can take more of a beating than Merthus.
Okay, now we are going into free time. You guys can do what you please.

If you want to ask why I finished this so quickly it was cause I didn't want it to drag any further, after all, things will get more interesting in the future. So, you guys can go sight-seeing or go to Kaimei and get yourself treated. Whatever the case, I just hope we can see some interactions between characters now. Also, Zodiac is still on the loose, since the thing with the police hasn't been resolved, so, shadowkiller, if you'd like, you can still fight him.
Even if the terrorists fought back with all they had and a little bit more, their raw will power still wasn't enough to beat the Connector police force. Marcus examined his surroundings... They were losing, well, why wouldn't they? They're against super humans here, mopping the floor with them, normal humans, was a s easy as killing a fly. Many of his friends were impaled, others were thrown into the air, only to crush their head after impacting against the ground. It was a gruesome massacre, and what was even more horrible, an utterly one-sided massacre. They managed to retaliate a bit after Marcus' speech, but that was over, and the slaughter would continue.

He hesitated. He didn't pull the trigger instantly due to his hesitation. He was unsure of why he should pull the trigger, after all, this girl is around the age his own daughter would have by now if she was still alive. Oh, yeah, his daughter. He tightened his hold on the pistol and when he was about to pull the trigger, another boy appeared, also acting as an smart ass, but this one seemed to be insane. He entered a psychotic fit, one that didn't last long after he was shot in the tight. 'Hmph. Good Riddance...' He glanced in the boy's direction, but quickly turned his eyes again to his hostage.

But even so, people seemed to be dead set on stopping him from pulling the trigger. A big ice mirror appeared behind him and he knew something like that wouldn't be good, still, if he was going down, then this little saint would go down with him. He only pondered for a moment, was she a bigwig? Maybe that's why everyone was so dead set on rescuing her. Well, it matters not. His finger goes back to pull the trigger and...

*BANG*

Not the sound of the actual shot of the gun, it was most to represent the thing he felt in his head. Marcus quickly loses conciousness and falls down and, strangely enough, the girl she was holding by the neck a while earlier, embraces his head. Maybe she was really a saint? All the hatred that Marcus had quickly faded away and he let himself be lost on this warm sensation of having his head close to another human being. His other sense completely detached from the world, he could only feel that heat, a heat that felt nostalgic. One of his first dates with who would later become his wife, yes, he fell asleep just like that, and the only thing he felt was her heat... It set his heart at ease. He slowly regained conciousness, opening his eyes as slowly as he did. The first thing he did after waking up again after quite a short dream was to lift up his arm... detonator in hand. "I can finally join you, Sophie..." He presses the button.

....Nothing. The detonator didn't set the bombs off, Merthus' exchange was successful, even now, that he was out cold, his efforts helped save the day. Or so it would seem.
Zodiac watches through his scope in the distance. His orders were really specific, everyone was expendable but Marcus, even him. "Damn, I ought to stop taking this jobs. But it gives some excitement to the life so I won't be bitching about it too much." He shoots a Tsurara officer who was approaching Marcus with a killing intent on mind. It was crucial right now not to make any mistakes, or he would have to break Marcus out of jail. With a mirror in his back and many other Connectors with his sights on him, his only chance of surviving was using the hostage as a meat shield, but Marcus seemed to be hesitating.

"Dammit!" An unknown force makes Marcus' lights go out. He falls in the arms of the girl that was previously his hostage. "Now what? A bad move and Marcus dies. We cannot afford that!" It seems the attack wasn't strong enough as to leave Marcus out for a good amount of time, since Zodiac sees him lift his arm with the detonator in hand. "YES! SUCK ON THAT, TSURARAS!" He excitedly said, but when Marcus presses the button and nothing happens, he gets nervous, even more because someone had not only infiltrated the building he was in, but was also already behind him. "Shit, then, plan B." Unknown to everyone, Zodiac gets out from his pocket a detonator of his own.

"Always think ahead, that's what my mother used to say." He presses the detonator and a loud...

*BOOM*

Is heard far away. He closes his eyes and enjoys the sound of the explosion as if it was a symphonic piece of orchestra. He stands up from the crouching position he was in and faces the intruder. "Sorry, but you're too late. Bye-bye." Zodiac was shooting from the edge of the roof, so he climbs the little edge and throws himself from there. A certain death, weren't it for his spirit. "Sylph!" A little whirlwind builds up in his back when he is a few meters from the ground. With the force of it, his fall slows down and he lands safe and sound at the foot of the building. "Suckers."
Marcus was at a loss. His triumph card wasn't working. He pressed it desperately, still half asleep. Tears falling down his cheek. All of this, all of his now dead friends and their sacrifices, all of them, useless. His vendetta unachieved, he was about to burst down in tears at the girl's lap, but just then.

*BOOM*

The bombs activated. The fools who thought just de-attaching them from the bodies of his comrades and then throwing them would be safe were proved wrong as the explosions were even more violent than one could have predicted. The Tsuraras, however, were quick to act. They rushed into building an ice dome surrounding the people who hadn't entered the fight, and many others who did entered the fight covered themselves with their own spirits. Sayaka was rather near from Marcus, and it was obvious he also had bombs in his body, him exploding was just a matter of time and, once again, Alexander sprung out of nowhere to rescue Sayaka.

"Sayaka!" Alexander embraced her and acted as a shield for her, his Tamazoku was activated, so he hoped he could at least protect Sayaka from the blast, even if it costed him his life.

However, Marcus didn't explode. Eyes shut down tightly, awaiting his end, he suddenly opened them to find himself still alive... And he though that this was the perfect chance to make a run for it. He pushed the girl away and ran while everyone was confused. This was truly the choice of God, his part on the plan wasn't over yet and he was given another chance to finish what he came to do, here at Lyranias. He pulls up his hood again and hides himself once again. 'I should return to his place, he might help me.' He disappears into the shadows.
Zodiac Shutter was feeling victorious for yet another job accomplished. He was supposed to return to the base, but...

"Freeze! Tsurara Police Force!

He was stopped by a pair of cops, well, what can be done.

"Tsk. Fine, fine. I'll surrender quietly." He presents his arms, so that the cops can apprehend him. Poor, poor fools, who don't know what is about to happen to them.
Back to the little plaza, the police officers were inspecting to see if there were any losses.

The final countdown: 54 humans and 0 Connectors. It was a miracle that after such a large explosion no one was injured, well, Connectors were known for achieving the impossible.

Many were helping treating others, while others just cared about themselves. The little plaza soon got devoid of people, none other than the injured and unconscious, and a handful of people who were helping them, were left.

What had just happened was a mystery, even more was it what their real intentions were, but now that they were dead, it didn't matter. The only concern on everyone's minds was what could have happened to Marcus, but even so, what can a single human do against them? He was now alone.

Many of the unconscious who looked young enough were to be treated at Kaimei Gakuen, as well as those hurt in the previous battle, but this was mostly just Kaimei recruiting some possible talents, at the order of the vice-president.

Now, time was their own again. Their non-hectic lives could now return to normal now that this crisis was averted.
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