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Cherryville, Elton's Bar, 4:45 PM.

An old man is sitting against the bar on one of the faulty stools. He watched the local channel, broadcasting daytime soap opera. Suddenly the broadcast was cut and interrupted by a news segment from the homeland security NSA.

"We urge all American citizens to remain within their homes and lock there doors. They are not to contact or trust afflicted individuals showing symptoms of Ebola, we believe this new mutated form is a hundred times deadlier than the primitive disease we know 2 weeks ago.

Please avoid physical contact with others and be advised until further instructions. This is Jerry Sigmund speaker of the NSA and CDC. God help us"

The old man was indifferent to the news piece as he yelled at the bartender to switch the channel. The bartender didn't respond, he was dormant and silent. Then suddenly he lunged at the old man and bit his flesh clean off the bones. The old man screamed, as it echoes alongside other screams all over Cherryville.
Delta44 said
Alright, edited in a few things. For simplicities sake I'll write what I did here: I added she was born in Cherryville, and is returning there to eliminate a certain "loose end". She now has an AR-15 Assault Rifle and her M.1911 as weapons, and I've excluded that last part in the skills section. If you want, I could probably list a few disadvantages to the character.


Sounds better, and yes a few disadvantages will paint her as a good character.
We will begin within moments!
I totally just made up that song on the fly haha.

@Ink Blood feel free to post a time or two before meeting Randwoth
Randwoth was listening to the young Gryffindor plead as he was struggling to put words together, too busy catching breath and recovering from his collision. The young student was one Randwoth recognizes very well, but then students never leave the planes of his memories.

"Doing unnecessary rounds around the premises again are we, James?" Randwoth held his serious face, squinting behind his sagging glasses. He adjusted it then broke into a chuckle as he patted James. "Off you go, you will want to attend Hagrid's class today."

Randwoth walled away, he headed over to professor Draven's quarters as he strolled about the corridors and halls, smiling back at the greetings of nervous students and unaccounted staff. It was unusual for the headmaster to approach his deputy instead of the opposite, it was also unusual for the headmaster to stroll throughout the castle in the morning. But Randwoth was nothing usual, and nothing orthodox was about his means.

As he slowly strolled with both hands behind his back, he sang with stressed accented 'r's:

" There once was three kings then two,
And over the throne a plot they brew,
ravens were killed and a mortal Hambrew.."
@legion I wish if you had included it ealier in the character sheet, anyway go ahead, I don't see a reason why David can't be a chaser.
@Inkwell Esme looks good, loved the Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes bit, and her bio was well thought of, really painted a good background. Though I'd prefer you made less typical grammar mistakes (there and their) that's all. ACCEPTED!
Also the main group didn't even meet yet altogether! We are still separate groupings of 3!
Great posts so far, but yeah, this is Hogwarts not public school. Shame on you. Wear your uniforms guys.

I think the reason they dressed well in muggle cloths in the movies was to satisfy the larger audience. Since most would find it easier to watch something familiar. But I agree, it did kill the integrity of being faithful to the book. I expected at least one of the three to be in uniform during the Deathly Hallows, even for half the film. Whatever.
Mark was exhausted to the last shred of energy left in his body. Once he rested against the wall, sat down, and extended his legs there was no way he would get up. If those two strangers would suddenly decided to attack him and Rachel he would have no power to fight back. If the doors were struck open and walkers climbed up to devour them he would just sit and wait for it. He was in all terms and meanings fatigued and tired. Still thirsty.

Mark set his wrench beside him, then he took out the expired skimmed milk and the small water bottle he found downstairs. He lines them up beside each other, then he took the water bottle and rank it all to the last drop. It wasn't even enough, but it was good to keep him alive and search for more. He could ask the strangers for water, but he was too tired to start a confrontation.

Mark left the expired milk cartoon on the ground and succumbed unto sleeping. At first he hesitated to shut his eyes around strangers, but he was too tired and his body shut down.
Mark was woken up by the rays of sunlight coming through the window screens, hitting his eyes as he slowly opened them. The walkers had stopped and little groans were heard. The milk carton was still there, the now empty water bottle too. He sighed and looked for Rachel. The second floor was dirty and in quite a mess.
I agree, when reading other posts stops being fun and turns into a chore you just have to do the RP basically dips into a downward descent to inactivity and death.

But you can always pick out the participating individuals to avoid that. Nothing ruins a nice RP like on le player with horrible or uninspiring writing style.
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