@Dandelion: Clericbeast was correct. You are free to distribute stats however you want, and if it's too much I'll let you know.
@BeachBurrito: I have a few concerns with your character, mostly curious what the point is for your "Bondage armor". The mask is fine, if a bit eccentric, though I have to ask how she's going to fight besides trying to peck people. It's also a personal peeve of mine, but I really do prefer character images to descriptions, though I don't mind both. Backstory looks fine though, your Hunter's Aspect and Title is "Belladonna" which gives you the ability to enthrall and hypnotize others with your dance and movements. This is much less effective against creatures aligned with the Dark, while you can usually slow down or distract monsters you cannot fully control their actions as you would a normal human.
@Geoffrey: I know he's supposed to be a bookish coward, but you might want to consider giving him an actual weapon. Caltrops will be woefully ineffective against most the things you will be fighting. Everything else looks fine, your Hunter's Aspect and Title is "Mirrorwalker" which grants you the ability to instantly travel or send messages through reflective surfaces. Your attacks and weapons mysteriously seem to ignore hide and armor. Be wary of traveling through mirrors in the darkness, you never know what else will be doing the same.