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Starfall's a fight fiend; she reads everything and loves nothing more than a right and propah throwdown, but she hates it whenever there's weird shit like this that gets in the way of said throwdown. Trust me, she ain't jumping in specifically to defend me; I've been on the receiving end of her Don't-Be-A-Dumbass backhand more'n once. She tends to be a bit more protective of me because I'm usually a very easygoing guy who's somewhat prone to being walked on by folks more ruthless than sporting, but trust me - I know exactly how the Don't-Be-A-Dumbass backhand feels.

@_@

Heh, we all know what it's like to hold strong opinions, and the nature of the game means we're all right on point for throwing them out there. I've stated my case, both IC and OOC, and will discuss with a judge anything else the judge wants clarified. There's not much more I can do before that point, but I more than understand the frustration everybody's feeling right now. It's a hot topic. If I may suggest we all adjourn it until Shawdus, or someone else, has a chance to lend a less biased opinion?
It's all right, Starfall. We'll let judgment sort it out.

Though, in the interests of that clarity mentioned earlier and avoiding vagueness (I do wish quotes here had time/post stamps):

Well. If the words weren’t enough, conjuring up some sort of massive, diamondite lance-thing was certainly an indication of hostile intent. All right then – game on.

On the curve of beach facing Not-Quite-Corban, a dozen coconuts fell from a dozen palm trees in a wide arc...

Hardened by Meteor’s will, the tropical cannonballs would hit like actual cannonballs...

...Nothing immediately fatal, yet…but certainly enough to cripple and end the contest then and there, should NQCorban prove sloppy.
Given the rather charged nature of this conversation, I'll do my best to leave off further responses until a judge can make a decision. However, there's one last comment from Div I feel I should address.

Divinity: If you feel there's allowable room for vagueness, stylistic or otherwise, in a competitive combat scenario, then you and I have learned the game under very, very, very different rules, and I apologize to the rest of the tournament once again for the disruption in its proceedings.
Heh...perhaps, Divinity, a word of description as to the spears being ground-based would've helped? I do apologize; you specifically used the word 'javelin' when describing the lances dissolving, which has a very specific connotation in most folks' minds. Without any description of where the spears came from/how they formed, I was left to try and figure out from what few clues were present.

If I missed the bubble, that's my bad and judgment will likely make me pay for it. Clarity is important, however...and I will further admit that I don't like the notion that a single tossed-off sentence with no support can nullify an entire post's worth of attack in this place.

Shawdus: not a problem man, and I appreciate your help. Life comes first, always does. That said, is there a standardized forum judgment system we can appeal to? Given the Round 1 pairings and results, there's plenty of room for conflict-of-interest accusations leveled at you no matter which way you jump on judgment, and I'd hate to see you put through that for no reason. If there's a third-party system we can employ, that might be for the best. If not, then good luck and don't stress yourself over it.
Certainly, I had expected just that. My apologies for the disruption.
Since I know my latest IC post ("Pain Imminent") is going to be…ahh, somewhat contentious…please permit me to explain.

Divinity’s defense against the cannonut attacks was so brief as to be difficult to even notice on first read, consisting solely of the phrase “Instead, it was dumped like a guyser into crystal blue waters, swirling milky patches of color floating within as they were impaled on quartz lances. Hefty defenses weren't required when you had precise ones.” No detail was given as to where the javelins came from, how they got there, or what they did to stop the cannonut attacks. The cannonuts were explicitly stated in the previous attacking post to be continually under Meteor’s direct control throughout the entirety of their flight – not a single word from Divinity was given to explain how that control was broken or disrupted. As such, by the rules of the game I grew up playing by, it was not broken or disrupted at all and the attack goes through essentially clean, driven by Meteor’s unopposed telekinesis.

I’m of course willing to let NQCorban try to mitigate the damage she’s about to take, but she’ll have to do so from a position of severe disadvantage unless a judge disagrees with my assessment of Divinity’s defense. If there’s anything I’ve misinterpreted in the board’s overall rules to dispermit this sort of reversal, please point them out to me and I’ll make corrections.
Alas, poor Not-Quite-Corban. Such potential, wasted. She might’ve gone quite far in the ranks of the Company, had she not met Meteor that day.

The cannonuts had been invested with Meteor’s will – possessed by fragments of her mind and transformed, however briefly, into extensions of her body and vessels for her power – and she had not relinquished that control at any point during the fruits’ maiden flight. The flurry of carbonated javelins flew out and struck the dozen-strong salvo of cannonuts…to little practical effect. The cannonuts, actively hardened by Meteor’s continuous focus and will, were also held together by that same hardening will. The javelins drilled neat little holes through the cannonuts before flying on into the waters behind the still-quite-dangerous telekinetically-directed cannonuts they had been meant to stop.

They did not explode into harmless splurts of coconut milk and shattered rinds, nor was their progress towards collision with NQCorban’s general self abated for more than a few heartbeats. The sheer kinetic impact of the darts ripping through the cannonuts slowed them for a beat or two, caused a few wobbles in their path, but it was nothing Meteor hadn’t encountered multitudes of times before and learned to correct for damn near instinctively. If the ‘nuts had been thrown and abandoned, the defense would probably have worked just fine…but for ammunition Meteor was continuously manipulating up until the point of impact and beyond, it was a bit like trying to stop a car by throwing a rock at it. However much one slowed the car down, it still had an engine and would speed right back up.

All of which meant that NQCorban was not at all safe from the cannonuts’ impacts. She was, in fact, in just as much danger as she had been a second ago – except this time she had no time to realize her defense had been inadequate to the strike she faced, or to raise a second one. As she closed her barrier over Meteor, hoping to charge in and begin the exchange of sweat and bruises and mighty-thewed tomfoolery so common to the multiverse, she would instead find her diamondite lance smashed out of line by cannonuts she had thought were nothing more than broken fuel cannisters. As well as her legs, her ribs, and her arms – all crushed by brutal cannonut impacts which had been taken without so much as a defensive stance. The only mercy was that her head had been left uncrushed – she would live, provided the paradisiacal trap she and Meteor had found themselves in spat her out somewhere she could get prompt medical attention for the profusion of shattered bones, pulped muscle, and burst organs she would be experiencing.

While NQCorban was learning of her folly, Meteor was bursting her way free of the oddly floofy barrier she had been ‘trapped’ in. The stretchy flexicrystal was singularly resistant to being burst through main force – she couldn’t simply explode her way free of it with an omnidirectional blast of telekinetic power. Fortunately, such wasteful hijinks weren’t Meteor’s first answer to being trapped inside a bubble in the first place; why blast when she could pop. Drawing her blade, Meteor turned the motion into a swift, vicious slash, casting a razor-edged slicing spiral-arc of telekinetic power at the flexi-crystal bubble. Built to withstand expanding, explosive force rather than cutting strength, the spiraling cut sheared through the bubble as easily as a box-cutter might shear through impact-resistant packaging – when struck by a razor attack at a single point at once, the barrier’s stretchiness did it no good at all, and a stretchy barrier was not a stiff, cut-resistant one.

Meteor blasted skyward then, hurling the severed upper half of the barrier away from her with a swift fist of telekinetic force. Should NQCorban somehow still be able to find the fuel for her rocket charge whilst being brutalized with less-stopped-than-she-thought cannonuts, she would find her target a hundred feet above the treeline, her nimbus intact and able to freely maneuver. And intercept her assailant. As Meteor had punted herself up skyward, she’d drawn forth four of the hardened steel bearings she’d brought to this particular engagement. Roughly the size of an old-fashioned musket ball, the bearings had nonetheless been forged and treated in such a way as to give them the same toughness and consistency as the Company’s medium-grade vehicle armor. They were Meteor’s preferred ammunition for gunfights, and there were Company snipers who envied the mentalist’s accuracy with them. There were also Company heavy gunners who envied the raw force Meteor could pack into the bearings.

With a long-practiced combination of brief mental-construct ‘barrel’ and an explosive burst of directed-force, Meteor flicked the bearings out and accelerated them to velocities favorably comparable to high-powered antimaterial rifle shells, targeting NQCorban’s diamondite lance and the area of her legs with two, while discharging the other two at the pixie-like being accompanying her target. Fired via Meteor’s patented telekinetic-rifle technique, the bearings lacked the continuous impetus and fine control of the earlier cannonut shells, but were moving tremendously faster than the cannonuts had been to compensate. The bearings were, in point of fact, moving quickly enough that the mere shockwave from a near miss would be enough to deal considerable damage to soft tissues caught within a few feet of their path. For anything struck directly…

Well. There wouldn’t be much left of anything one of the antimaterial bearings struck directly.

Having struck her foe with heavy firearm-level telekinetic impacts potentially fourteen times, depending on how one counted the impacts against the lance, Meteor cruised around the perimeter of the island in the sky, her blade held at ready guard, maintaining her mental vigil against further counterattacks. However unlikely they were starting to look.
Hmm...okay.

Beneath all the unusual language I'm not entirely sure what's going on in this one. To confirm:

-NQCorban is raising a flexi-crystal barrier thing around Meteor
-NQCorban is then throwing hir lance across the island to impale Meteor through said barrier
-The impact of lance and flexi-crystal causes an explosion

Is that about the size of it?
Well. If the words weren’t enough, conjuring up some sort of massive, diamondite lance-thing was certainly an indication of hostile intent. All right then – game on.

Tracking her foe(s) with her Mind’s Eye, Meteor’s perusal of the island turned up the usual profusion of improvised armaments ready to hand. With the bulk of the island between her and her new foe, Meteor was free to strike with relative impunity – though she was not nearly so naïve as to expect that to last. Nevertheless…the first blow was hers.

On the curve of beach facing Not-Quite-Corban, a dozen coconuts fell from a dozen palm trees in a wide arc, over two hundred meters from end to end. The fruit descended barely a meter from their trees before accelerating at NQCorban with sharp crack!s of violently displaced air. Hardened by Meteor’s will, the tropical cannonballs would hit like actual cannonballs, striking in a pair of six-shot salvos timed and physically spaced out such that no single motion or position of the diamondite lance would catch all of the projectiles in either salvo. One way or another, the woman was going to be struck if she didn’t put up a hefty defense indeed. Invested with the mentalist’s will, the projectiles were under her direct control the entire time, moving as easily as she moved her arms or legs – no last-second hairline dodges would suffice to clear the path of these coconut spurts. When they landed, it was gonna hurt.

Meteor herself drifted along her own beach, never staying still, as she focused on directing her attack and keeping track of her foe. Her senses brushed over the whole of the island, searching for tricks or hidden traps while cannonuts bombarded her foe. A simple opening salvo, more a probing of NQCorban’s defenses than anything else…though it wouldn’t stop any cannonuts that struck home from pulverizing flesh and shattering bone. Nothing immediately fatal, yet…but certainly enough to cripple and end the contest then and there, should NQCorban prove sloppy.
How's it coming, man? Any luck reconstructing it?
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