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((I apologize for how ugly this post is. I wanted to just get it posted and work on it from there since the past 3 times I've tried integrating into an RP have failed due to either my own inactivity or the collapse of the physical RP))

Llewelyn Rorch



Age: 26

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Significant/Special Belongings: The glove of the Wander, a pair of brass knuckles that have been lined with iron, a charm that holds no power and grants no abilities, a nice pair of sunglasses
(not finalized)

Fighting Skills/Techniques: More than capable in close quarters combat, skillful in knife/dagger combat, knowledgeable on the operation of firearms

Llewelyn, having grown up in the Azure, has been exposed to all sorts of different supernatural beings. This has caused him to become a very cautious fighter, picking his fights carefully and never underestimating his enemies.

Weapon of Choice:


How You Came to be in Azure: When he was 9 years old, Llewelyn’s parents traded him to the demon Glandrech as a means to settle their debt. Glandrech, ever gazing into the future, placed Llewelyn in the Azurian city of Krÿmias, a cross roads of the mortal and immortal realms. It was here that Llewelyn’s fate was decided.

Job Title & Description:
Llewelyn is part of a 2 man act involving daring acts of gymnastics and sleight of hand. From knife juggling, throwing, and the eventual catching, to cartwheeling and summersaulting through flames and other dangerous “things”, the untrained eye would see Llewelyn’s job as incredibly dangerous.

Number of Souls You Have to Collect:
((I dunno how this works))

Number of Years You Have to Collect Souls:
((read above))

What Was Your Wish?
For the Demon Glandrech to regain immortality.

How Many Souls Have You Collected?
221 (subject to change)

How Long Have You Been at the Carnival?
Two weeks. (subject to change)

How the Collection of Souls has Affected Your Character?
Having grown up a murderer and a thief, the act of collecting soul has not really swung Llewelyn one way or another. He sees the act as a necessary evil he must complete in order to preserve that which is important to him, as well as the promised eventual release from Glandrech’s service.

Personality: Llewelyn has always had trouble interacting with others. His life as a street urchin in one of the most dangerous cities in the realm has made it difficult for him to trust people. That said, he is able to become well acquainted with others he works with or lives with for extended periods of time. His having a sister as a child has made it easy for him to get along with women, though the nature of his lifestyle, as well as recent medical developments, have made it difficult for him to maintain relationships.



(Forgive how horrible everything in the biography and personality blocks is. These are my two least favorite things about character sheets, and I was falling asleep writing them. I’ll touch things up if it’s important, but what I have here should give you the general gist of this character. Sorry, but I really just wanted to get this done)
Damn, and I had just finished tier 1... (EDIT: to clarify, I finished getting everything I would need in terms of content down. This is completely unedited, and likely nonsensical at times)

Ok, I've gotta go to sleep for work tomorrow, so I'll just post my unedited responses to the first three paragraphs you wrote. I am willing to make drastic changes to the character if I need to, but for now I'll just try and get you as much information about the one I have as possible.

The reasoning behind the assassination thing was that there would be people looking for those who gained these abilities (I figured at least one group in the world would be trying to prevent the spread of knowledge about AMA/would be trying to stop the resurgence of magic), specifically Heaven’s Hand or some other underground organization.

I figured it would be an OP skill to have, but I also figured the ability could be as much a curse as it is a blessing. I planned on the eventuality of his character dying relatively frequently, allowing for infinite possibilities on who he takes over as well as what situation whatever he takes over is in. For example: he could take control of someone in jail, or a pet bird trapped in a cage. Or he could take control of a morbidly obese person, a cripple, or an elderly person.

Perma-death was also something I thought over quite a bit. I’ll be honest; I figured that since his character was more of a specialist than an actual fighter, it wouldn’t matter as much if he died. Ways of him dying forever would involve his conscious mind not being able to swap to another body, someone attacking his consciousness through other forms of telepathy, and eventually a steady decline in his ability to find another host. I also thought of the potential of a mind “snapping out” of its dormant state and fighting back against Jack’s presence, occasionally ejecting Jack’s mind. Lastly, the process of taking over someone’s mind and then having them die on him leaves a permanent impression of the thing’s consciousness on Jack.

(none of Jack's higher level tiers have been thought about in detail yet, so if this stuff that I'm writing seems OP its because I didn't take the time to think about it too much. I planned on the higher tiers actually decreasing the OP nature of Jack's initial ability)

I planned on having the higher tier unlocks mainly be based around him breaking his consciousness into pieces, allowing him to briefly influence someone’s actions, feel someone’s emotions, or make them feel something he creates. The only way he could actually fully take over someone else’s mind (until very late game where one possibility I thought up involved him creating two functioning conscious minds that could act independently) is if he were to fully remove himself from his current host (whether or not the host regains conscious control of his or her mind is based on how low of a tier Jack is) and place himself in a weak willed mind. This would be around tier 4 or 5. Actual mind reading was not something I saw as being possible for this character, as his mind never straight up melds with someone else’s. I wanted the person or animal’s mind to temporarily be suppressed (kind of like when you’re blackout drunk) while Jack is in control.

I'll check back tomorrow, as well as do some more specific work on this character, but I am willing to make a new character if this is too much of a headache for you.
I've got an idea for a character, we'll call him Jack for now, but you're gonna need to OK his backstory and ability as they are both potentially issues.

For backstory, I wanted Jack to be someone who was recruited into those scientific fields you mention as a child. When the story starts, he would be at an age range that would be this universes equivalent of one's early twenties. I would like for him to be working as a researcher apart of a team that is trying to learn the secrets of AMA (one of many research groups headed by various Noble leaders). His team in particular would work out of the AMA storage facility that is destroyed. The team would be a group of six people around the same age as Jack, and one supervisor. I would like for one of the team members to make a small discovery that would allow the research team to get a glimpse of how AMA works. The entire group is told about this discovery, but the physical information is destroyed in the explosion, and most of the team members are killed.

Now, depending on how getting magical powers works and whether or not you'll let Jack's ability fly, I would like for four or five members of the team to survive the explosion, but for most of them to be assassinated (if this doesn't fly, then just two survivors other than Jack) by the people who destroyed the facility. Jack will be killed during the actual explosion, but the ability that Jack gains is for his consciousness to flee to another host after the body it resides in dies. Tier 1 would make it so this process is completely random, allowing his consciousness to take over animals and people at random and anywhere within a multi-mile radius. I would have him be trapped inside a nobleman at first, who ends up being assassinated along with the other surviving team members (Jack attempts to find the team members and learn what's going on, which gives him away), then a rat (which is crushed in some machinery soon after Jack enter its body), and then a citizen, which is where we will start with him.

The way this ability would work is that he can only enter the body of an animal or person whose mental defenses are completely lowered. A mind with a lot of stress on it would reject Jack's consciousness, as would one that is aware of Jack's presence. As it is right now, Jack would not be able to enter the mind of someone who has magical abilities like his own.

I came up with all of this minutes ago, so I'll leave you with this to OK or pan before I go too crazy. I plan on expanding on the rules of this ability and Jack's backstory more as I continue working with this character, but right now I think you have enough to get a general idea. The issues I mentioned earlier are that you would need to give me a little bit of information to make Jack's knowledge worth killing over, as well as the fact that currently Jack's ability makes his conscious mind immortal (at least early on in the story).

Sorry for inconsistencies or grammatical errors in this post. I haven't done much in the way of creative writing for a couple years now.

Also, Jack is just a placeholder name.
I used to have an old account on this website, but it seems to have either vanished or become associated with a different e-mail. This'll be my first post with this account.

I've been on a three year break from most forms of creative writing (other than writing for the screen) and would very much like to get back into it. I've worked with collaborative RPs in the past (one lasting for about two and a half years), and I've found them to be more helpful in developing my writing skills than most classes I've been taking at my university. I find the universe of this RP extremely interesting, and would love to submit a character sheet if all the positions aren't filled. Let me know if you're no longer accepting submissions, as I'll stop working on my character's backstory.

Also: I only plan on using one character, but there are several supporting characters that I would need to properly flesh him out. Should I PM you about such things, or is it cool for me to post it all in here?
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