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    1. Max Shadow 10 yrs ago

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i meant we talked about how he teleports, and really i only keep calling it teleporting due to not being able to thing of a better word for it. realistically he's not teleporting, more breaking himself down into partials moving himself around then reforming himself in whatever order he feels fits the situation, meaning that due to the method used it would be very easy to only break down a part of himself or reform part of himself separately, but through this method there is also the risk of loosing the limb if it gets separated from the shadows supporting it.

if he took his arm off, and a strong light hit his shoulder he'd start to bleed and feel pain as if the arm had been taken off by a blade, if the light hit the arm while it was formed away from him it would also act like it had been cut off. he can fix it with shadows but he needs more time than he would have in a fight and if left to long the arm would be beyond being able to re-attach, he could just as easily bleed out and die from his shoulder.
i was originally going to ave only part of his body vanish, but someone decided to interrupt. and really he could partly materialize, only enough of him to grab the weapons and turn them to shadow forming rather that the majority of him meaning that technically it would only be one move rather than two or three. this being possible through how he's actually teleporting, where he's really converting his body into millions of tiny shadows and re-assembling himself from that in another place, which is why his movements through this method aren't instant. you and i discussed that part of it a while ago
Max nodded slowly, taking the moment that his opponent had offered to get feeling back in his body. Hearing a noise of to his side turned his attention to the other fighter he knew was still fighting, noticing him taking aim he hit Lith against the ground, forcing a piece of wood up under him, throwing off the shot just enough for it to miss. A shadow stretched out along the ground and formed as a hand ,grabbed and quickly pulled Digan back to him "Stop that annoyance from interrupting and we'll continue."

He placed Geth at his feet, the oily poison coating it quickly corrupting the leaves and grass around it, creating a dead spot where the ground was now toxic as it soaked into the dirt. He calmly slid Shina into his bag, not needing it for what he was planning, at the same time he dropped Digan into one of his hand like feet, holding it tight. Holding his armored arm out in front of him he pointed Lith directly at the electric man's heart, every section rotating at full speed to counter the weight of the weapon. A black circle formed around him as he poured large amounts of energy into the lance, causing a blue glow to emit from the tiny gaps between petals from the lances tip to his shoulder. behind this he was gathering shadows, the darkness gathering around him and pouring into the circle around his feet making the lance look even brighter.

The circle faded away, giving the appearance of him having purged the shadows out of himself, but anyone who could sense the shadows would be aware of the mass-less growth still collecting unseen inside the ground. Crouching ready he waited for the right moment, hoping his opponent would play along.
you know there are 4 fighters still in this >-> one of which is still fresh and unchallenged......on that note....
i'll have a post up tonight. drallinix you have till the end of the day to post.
fixed......again

and feel free to post, quiet has had at least 3 days since it became his turn
i finally got around to making an edit. quiet, please try to hurry up and post.
quiet, you're up. i'll try to fix my post today, just been distracted and shit. likely going to kill myself off and work on a different fighter. not sure though
first off, before i come back with my reply, i just want to apologize for the number of times it posted. i was rushed towards the end of typing it and panicked slightly when the site didn't seem to put the post up (trying 7 times on two computers >__<) i'll hopefully reply and edit my post at sometime tonight.

whoever it is that is after me please don't wait for me unless you need to.
okay, sorry i'm late but i had a crap day yesterday and didn't really want to put any of that into this. on that note.....

sorry if this sounds rude but what idiot would hold something as heavy as lith would be parallel to the ground with one arm without holding it at it's center of balance? that would put excess strain on his arm and leave him vulnerable to the types of attack he's expecting. the best positioning for what he has would be;
kneeling down with lith in his right arm, using lith's guard to protect his arm, the head on the ground in on his left and in front of him. holding geth in his right, armored arm to protect his right. like this he can move lith to defend most of his body from above, the left and the front with minor protection on his right which is supplemented by his right arm. but due to me not thinking clearly when posting i didn't include all that and at any rate lith would be placed with the tip in the ground to reduce strain on the fighter.

second, while size wise lith isn't that large the surface area of it is roughly twice what it appears due to the 'petal' blades (which i keep calling petals due to each being about the same size as a standard rose petal) that cover the entire surface and overlap, also counting the small gaps between the rings that allow them to spin. giving the entire thing as a whole a very large surface area.

this one i have to call into question. looking at your sheet you only mention that he discharges the electricity, not that he can control the path it takes meaning that really his attacks shouldn't be able to arc in the manner you mentioned. with how you put his ability it can only be interpenetrated as he can launch bolts of electricity but he can only fire it in a direct path. meaning that while it doesn't follow a straight line is you were to you could draw a straight line through the path it took like a graph. you made no mention of being able to control electricity, only generate it, so really as soon as it has left your body it would be nothing more than an aimed lightning bolt and therefor unable to pull off the precise hit you're saying he's using.

another note about his lightning, both his ability to charge it fully while still fighting normally, and it's base power that you stated is "capable of outright killing a human, leaving burn marks and smoke rising from their remains" mixed with your fighters ability to use it as an essentially unblockable/undodgable attack comes across as op in my opinion. as seen when you one hit killed the only opponent you actually killed. your charge has little to no effect on your character where a normal charge attack has some kind of drawback while it is charging, despite this you have displayed him being able to use even advanced moves such as the sword without and drawback while charging your bolt. the only noted drawback being that he can't use the hand he's charging with which can be avoided since he doesn't have to use a hand to charge.

this one is covered in the first bit, since he knew he was against an electric enemy he covered as much as he could, expecting an attack coming from just his opponents general direction.

and sorry for this one, but it's my interpretation of the power you're using. with that said the power you've described comes across as something that you're not going to let me come away from alive if i do take any of the damage from it. after all this was the description you used for an attack against another character, that has less charge than this one.
" A white-hot bolt of lightning thundered from his palm straight at the grenadier's face, potent enough to burn a hole clean through a modern tank, along with setting the entire crew ablaze from sheer electrical current. The sound and light alone were twice that of a flash-bang grenade"
with that kind of power and you saying that i should be taking more than a little of the force. when, with the kind of power you've described 'a little' damage would be the loss of the arm holding lith and severe internal scaring and damage leaving my fighter crippled and basically dead.

all it sounds like you're arguing is that i take the drawn out version of you saying 'nope you're dead cos i fired in your general direction'
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