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@TheWindel Where I'm from, 16 is technically legal, but if the other party is above 18 years old it's highly questionable. As in, all of your friends will take the piss out of you and call you a cradle-snatcher, but it's still legal.

A single day under 16 though and your ass is going straight to jail lmao
Moonpaw


WHAT? It’s sunrise already?!?”

Those words of distress could be heard from any cat unfortunate enough to be resting, or passing by the apprentice’s den at that moment. Minutes later, after a racket of scattering twigs and moss, Moonpaw’s messy bundle of grey-white fur burst into the clearing. Several pieces of his bedding still clung to his fur, but Moonstone's frantic shaking soon slipped them off.


“Thunderpaw didn’t even wake me, the stupid furball just snuck off like a mouse!"
Moonpaw blurted out hurriedly, but in a hushed tone."You too Robinpaw. Are you two conspiring against me? You know Greenstone will turn me into crow-food if he finds out I overslept again”

Moonpaw’s anxious eyes darted between the camp boundaries. “Quickly, you haven’t seen Grumpystone yet, have you?”

@ViolentViolet

*cringes* Oh god then I'm screwed.

I probably should mention I'm just going into high school, hence the reason it's hard for me to write decent paragraphs...


Even a middle schooler could do it! It's not so difficult, once you get over the mental block. You doubt your own abilities

What you want to do, is capitalise on your character's personality during the post. You want each sentence to tell the reader something new - either about your character, the environment, or the plot line. In fact, go for all three in one, that definitely going to nail you down a few paragraphs

(I could post now, but I'd rather wait for Jaggedstar's reply.)
Yea I'll start working on a reply now!

Also except my replies to not be as lengthy as everyone else's I'm not the best at long post.

EDIT: Something I just realized. Robinpaw doesn't have a mentor...


I've noticed that! I figured he'd be a good match up for Talonheart, but that's for corrosive to decide.
Awesome! Can't wait to read the novella we'll undoubtedly create
Greenstone


Greenstone was sat in his nest in the warriors den. His eyes, as always, were expressionless and guarded. When he sat like this, completely still in the dim light of dawn, he looked every bit like the stone in the Streams Cross that he was named after. Looking around him, he noted the soft rise and fall of the grey flanks of Gorsestorm, and the black outline of Talonheart. Two keystone cats for the events ahead, no doubt.

His ears told him that Jaggedstar was already awake. There wasn’t another cat in the clan who walked with such confidence and self-assurance as the Lightclan leader – and there was a good reason for it too. He’d practically fought his way to the top relying only on his teeth and claws, led the clan to victory against the rogues... and won the best mate Lightclan had to offer. Pushing thoughts of Moonflower aside, Greenstone slowly rose to his paws and made his way out into the clearing, as if each pawstep had a deliberate function.

“Not much sleep for you tonight either, Jaggedstar?” Greenstone said, bowing his head. As Jaggedstar turned to him, intense green eyes locked together in mutual understanding.
“There is nothing to concern yourself about. Cliffclan’s group of rogues and kittypets are nothing compared to our hardened warriors. Even 7 sunrises worth of no sleep and no prey would still make our cats an unparalleled army, compared to those kits.”

Greenstone walked past his leader, focusing his gaze on the waning moon above in the sky. Short wisps of a dark grey mist intermitted blocked it away from sight; and soon enough, it would disappear completely as it yielded to the Sun.
“It will rain again, around the time of the next Sunset. With the rain blocking out our scents, and Lightclan’s dark pelts, Cliffclan won’t even realise what’s hit them until we’re already on top of them. Of course, we could strike before then and terrorise them from the Crossing to the Pine Forests in the far East, but…” Greenstone’s tail twitched. “I’d hate for Ashclan to stick their paws in matters that don’t concern them.”
I've already posted semi-recently, but I'd vote ignore. I'd rather not kill a man begging for help lol (plus Macey asked him a question too)
How rude. You guys would condemn a poor man to death?


Well, he looks like he's on his way out anyway :D
So, I'll expect it will be up to the rper's of the cats of each clan to describe the landmarks and boundaries of their territories.

For now, what will be the main storyline, and how will the RP start?



Name Greenstone
Age 42 moons
Sex Male
Mate None
Clan Role
Deputy

Clan Lightclan

Apprentice Moonpaw

Skills
-A difficult cat to meet in battle – not for his strength, but because he seems to predict and intercept a cat’s move well in advance.
-An excellent hunter, he hasn’t missed a single prey catch in seasons.
-While not having any heightened senses, his perception and processing of the environment around him has reached the level where he can even predict the weather two sunrises in advance.

Scars/Birthmarks
His front right paw has no claws, after an accident that occurred when he was barely out of apprenticehood.

Relationships
TBA

Personality
A tactician of sorts, Greenstone’s stride comes from knowing as much information as he can about the land that he lives on, being as diplomatic as possible and keeping outsiders outside the clan borders. He believes that the success of the clan resides in diplomatic measures – that is, have as little to do with other clans as possible. He avoids conflict (and contact) with the clans as much as possible, except on the truce of the full moon, however his reluctance to initiate battle against the other clans angers many of his younger clanmates. The more senior warriors and elders however, remember just how coldly ruthless Greenstone can be when enraged.

Biography
Even as a fully fledged warrior, Greenstone used to be a very average, and ordinary sort of cat. He’d only wanted the simple life of a warrior, and followed in his older sister’s footsteps most days. That is, until his sister was murdered by a fox queen when she ventured to close to its den.
On that very night, Greenstone disappeared. Assuming that he had gone for his sister’s revenge against the fox, his clan thought he was dead for half a season. However, he returned during the last days of green-leaf – and promptly announced that he had eliminated the fox and her cubs, providing safety for the whole clan for many seasons to come.
Since his return, Greenstone lost his playful nature; instead replacing it with an inquisitive, strategic and tactical mind.

Extras
He has a favourite rock that he liked to perch on to take time out of his apprentice duties and think, before he became a warrior. It stands in the intersection between two streams, underneath a huge willow and covered in lichen and moss – it has since been nicknamed “the Green Stone”, and it became the inspiration for Greenstone’s name.




Name Moonpaw
Age 10 moons
Sex Male
Mate None

Clan Role
Apprentice

Mentor: Greenstone

Skills
-Ferocious fighter
-His fur is well oiled, and as soft as silk; many a time during practice fights, has an apprentice tried to hold Moonpaw by his fur – only for him to slip out of their teeth or claws like a wet fish
-He is showing the promise of being an excellent swimmer.

Scars/Birthmarks None

Relationships TBA

Personality
Much to the dismay of his mentor, Moonpaw doesn’t seem to care much for the territory wars the cats are all so familiar with; or Starclan, or anything else that goes for the warrior code – which is why his warrior name is taking so long to be granted to him. He is mostly the friendly giant sort, although he will not hesitate to use his claws to defend his own personal space (albeit, never at his full strength)

Biography

Thanks to the fierce territorial nature of his clan, Moonpaw has lived a fairly easy life so far. Of course, his apprentice days are full of fighting among other clan members, but he enjoys every minute of it. His current dream is to be the best battle warrior the clans have ever seen, both in the old and the current clans.

Extras
His diet is almost exclusive to fish – apparently, land-prey just isn’t as satisfying.
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