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SUN


His two hearts finally fell back to their normal pace. Thump-thump, thump thump...a double pounding sound that would normally be alarming for others, was very normal for him. But with the straining conditions of his telepathy, even his two hearts were being over worked. One would think that abilities of the mind only affect the brain, but in actuality, theres a complete connection throughout the entire body. Not only would his brain give out, but so would his body. Sun fanned his face with his hand, making the best effort to cool himself off as his body began relaxing, slowly regenerating the vitality he had used up when he was maintaining the mind-link with Shay. But quite honestly, the last priority on his mind was himself, it was Shay. His eyes glazed over her body as a look of worry plastered itself upon his face. His eyes were darting along her body nervously.

Oh no....it's happening again....I'm of no help...incompetent..., he thought to himself.

His eyes were glossy...watery even. Sun had a knack for doubting his abilities and capabilities, especially when he was around other capable indiviuals. He frowned briefly as his thoughts were uncertain and his heart heavy. But it wouldn't be for long. When Shay opened her eyes, so did Sun, brightly, as a stream of tears seemed to flow from his eyes almost instantaneously. "Oh Sun", Shay cried out to him. Sun was cheesing like a silly happy puppy, but before he even had time to react, Shay pulled him in, almost strangling him with her decievingly powerful arms. Sun didn't even care, he was just crying and elated, that not only was Shay awake, but that he had done something helpful. He was actually useful. And what perfect timing.
Sun tried brushing off the bit of grunge that had been on her body a la Red Waste, but it was to no avail so as long as she was hugging him. When Shay finally released her grip, she asked him how much longer, but was Sun slightly confused. It took a moment for him to realize, but eventhough the hallucinations had subsided, she was still in incredible pain. She was wincing, struggling to physically verbalize her thoughts to him because of the comparable discomfort. "Oh Shay....I'm so glad to see your okay...or at least better than you were doing...but...I'm not sure how much longer the pain is going to last....but if it hurts too much to talk....", he spoke aloud...and then paused for a moment and projected a sprite from his mind and into Shay's to continue his sentence...

"...we can always continue on like this...", his voice rang out telepathically in her head. He smiled gently, wiping the tears from his face and looking to Isam who had also come over and asked her how she was feeling. He had been silent for nearly the entire time...just watching, like a father looking over his children. He didn't do much, but Sun was lightly comforted that he came over as well.
ELIZA



What a breezy afternoon it was...Eliza's hair was flowing violently in all directions it seemed and she was frantically trying to contain the chaos going on on her head. She was in the garden, a small isolated section of Cypher's camp grounds that generally only she visited. It was filled with flowers galore, vibrant colours that layered the ground in this small, private area she called her own she needed to be....well....alone. Her voice carried along the wind as she vocalized a remembered melody, singing a soft tune she created for her mother after she died and left the earth....or at least...after her soul did. Her mother's body still roamed around as one of the mindless carnivorous Dead, unattached to the world on any plane other than the physical one. The decaying body remained...but... her mother no longer did.

Eliza Singing
"Spring comes...roses die...I dream of you...whisper me....a sweet lullaby....you used to sing...how many dawns and dusks...have gone by...enough to know what I found....deep sighs sadly ring out....in the universe....I lost...my way...but I remember....
The way you smile....the way you cry...just the way you are...the way you kiss me....the way you touch me....the way look into... my eyes and tell me...the way you call me....the way you surrond me....the way you breathe...when I look up to the sky..only you...just only you...now I can see the way to you...so I'll return...to....where...I...belong..."


"I remember...."

Her voice was so angelic even the songbirds would cower in shame. Her voice faded gently...slowly losing power until it came to a complete stillness. Her hair was still flying about, which she quickly tried dealing with by brushing it behind her ears, but with little success. Her eyes marbled like a sphere of clear water. She looked down...plucked a small daisy from its roots and held it curled in her hands. She made a sighing gesture, closed her eyes, and brought her cupped hands to her chest and began to pray. She wasn't sure who she was praying to, but for some reason, relinquishing her feelings and worries to an unknown Almighty Power made her feel better. At least...that's what her father did before he lost his way.

"You doing okay sis?", a stern, yet loving voice called out from behind her. She dropped the flower and almost jumped out of her skin, quickly swiveling her body around to see her brother Geoffrey, who had been watching her intently as he lazily rested his body against a nearby tree and had his arms folded. She put her hand to her chest and took a deep breath, before frowning to him coyly. She lifted herself off the ground and ran her fingers through her hair agitatedly..."Sheesh Geo...you don't have to sneak up on me like that. I was fine....as you can see...", she said to him in a snide like manner. "Who was sneaking? I've been here the whole time...just watching over you is all. Hell, you should be grateful..", he responded blantantly, smiling to her warmly afterwards.

She rolled her eyes and chuckled lightly, walking over to him and poking him in the arm with her pointer finger. She was still wearing her mother's flower shaped ring, never taking it off for anything. "Well..you know I'm grateful. It's just...I hate being underestimated and treated like the weaker sex...", she began in a somewhat serious tone. "Hell...", she continued..."You could be the one in need of protection."

Geoffrey grinned and laughed out loud..."Naturally...", he retorted teasingly, uncrossing his strong arms and wrapping them affectionately around his sister, pulling her in and resting his head on hers. "You know I'm just looking out for you...", he spoke in a low, almost whisper-like tone. Eliza wrapped her own thin arms around his waist and had her head rested against his chest. "I know, I know...", she responded simply. Geoffrey lifted his head from off hers and lightly kissed her forehead, "Good! Now lets get goin then snail! Our favorite crazed cult leader is calling for a camp gathering. All heads have gotta be accounted for. I mean...come on. How can you resist that gorgeous face of his...", he playfully said to her in a teasing manner, letting go of her body and placing the back of his palm to her forehead to check her temperature.

She quickly swiped his hand from her head and snarled at him..."Give it a rest will you? Yes....he is a bit...eccentric, but...he's likeable...I guess. Besides, he practically saved us. I merely suggest we give him a chance..", she responded kinda carelessly, shrugging her shoulders as she walked past her brother and made her way towards the meeting area. Geoffrey quickly followed suit..."Whatever...I still don't trust the guy.", he quickly retorted. "Paranoid much?", she mumbled under her breath.

A few minutes later they arrived in the nick of time, opting to stand in the back. They were relatively new to the Cypher's camp and didn't want to feel as though they were intruding. Cypher stood in front of the crowd, bold, commanding, and quite frankly...almost intimidating. When he spoke, his voice roared and carried like a fighter jet shooting acorss the sky. He was immensely charismatic, and it seemed as if he knew exactly what to say. He mentioned some things about a Jacob Powers, a Paradise Land, Revenge-esque type material. "What is he talking about?", Eliza asked her brother in a confused tone. He shrugged and let out a quick, "No clue", still keeping his eyes focused and trained on Cypher, analyzing his every movement, posture, mannerisms. Geoffrey was soaking it in like a sponge. When Geoffrey had a bad feeling about someone, it was almost impossible to shake. Eliza could see the uncertainity on her brother's face, but she turned back her attention to the handsome Cypher.

Cypher was coming to his vocal climax it seemed, causing the camp folks to roar and chant in unison with him. As the roaring continued, Cypher seemed to be content with himself. Eliza looked around at the cheering crowd, her eyes a bit glazed and befuddled. She nonchalantly clasped her hands around her back and sighed, not really sure what to make of his speech or why everyone was so elated by it. She really had no clue what he was talking about. Geoffrey on the other hand had his eyebrows furrowed and his eyes leered at Cypher's misleadingly peaceful countenance.

He wasn't impressed. And in his mind...he wasn't fooled either.
Uuugghhh....I can't help but hate and love Cypher. Awesome character but seriously....he's like a cult leader. Hahahaha I don't think Eliza and Geoffrey are going to really like him all that much. LOL

Anwyays, its so amazing how far this story has gone and where it will go. You are right Kaiden. its so spectacular because the level of detail and emotion that people put into their wiritng is outstanding. It really does feel like a book, reading page by page, uncovering more of the mystery, background, characters, plots, connections, lore....its got a different character for everyone, so anyone reading it will like at least one of the characters. Not to mention the story progression is smooth and on point, making it interesting and enthralling. This could easily be adapted into a novel, or anime, t.v., movie. It's solid storytelling, with solid characters, solid story progression, solid settings. There are many characters, but it isn't a jumbled mess like one would think. This is definitely the best RP I have ever been in on this site and definitely the longest I've been committed too. Most seem to fizzle....but not this one. Eventhough we are technically in casual RP, our amount of writing and level of detail is more advanced for sure. Its structured and grounded, but relatively open for people to add in new things to give the story new twist.

And to be honest, its nice to see that Cypher's group is finally coming into play, where as before, he appeared here and there sporatically, but now...I can definitely see his role is going to be much greater. Main antagonist maybe?
First time hearing about it, but it seems cool. It will be useful for character interactions, especially in Cypher's group.
Blox, ur always very good at conveying emotion for Shay. Love it! Btw, Awesome new character. An animal communicator. I think Eliza and Kaiden will probably get along really well. Hahahaha
Changed Eliza's ability. Just a heads up.
Shane?.... Who is Shane? Sun thought to himself when Shay called out the name under her breath.

Nonetheless, Sun maintained the telepathic connection between himself and Shay, breaking a gentle smile of affection when he noticed that his mental reverbation with her caused a slight and somewhat awkward smile across her face. He traced his fingertips lightly along her ear, and over her forehead, brushing some of her hair from her face. He looked back to her eyes and focused more intently. The stream of sprites were still flowing from his mind into hers and he was now at this point, feeling the strain as he began to sweat and his body was feeling heavy and fatigued. Shay's body trembled violently, causing Sun to startle and rest his hand on her arm and then gently gliding his hand along her arm until it rested in her own hand. He slid his fingers between hers until their hands were clasped together.

Sun, what's going on? What's happening to me? What...what do you mean it's not real? I saw them take everyone...kill them...it's not real?, Shay finally spoke out to him telepathically.
Sun gleamed in glee that he was finally able to get her to focus her mind on his voice. His mental voice spoke so softly, it was almost like a mother was comforting her child who just had a nightmare. It was so unusal though. Shay was always the one protecting Sun and comforting him, and now, he was the one doing it to her. He was being the mother...so to speak.

Don't worry Shay...you'll be fine. You were injured in the battle against the Dead. Tobias...the doctor...he had to give you some kind of antidote...but....it caused u to see illusions. No one was taken anywhere, we are all here....we are all here for you...just come back to us. Follow my voice into the light of the sun....and....if you find your way to me...I promise to fly you high into the clouds....I know how much you've wanted to fly....now come back to us.... Sun spoke to her telepathically, quickly breaking the telepathic connection between the two of them as the strain on his mind had become too intense for him to handle. This sprites stopped flowing between their minds and they dissipated into thin air. Keeping up a telepathic link was difficult for Sun. He didn't have much experience with his telepathy and using it for short periods of time was all his mind could take before it gave out.

Sun was breathing deeply, heaving almost. Even with two hearts pumping in his heart, using his telepathy wore out his mind and his body. He held his hand to his chest and took deep breaths, trying to get his breathing in check. As he did so, he stared into Shay's face...hoping madly that she would break from her mental captivity.
Yep, i saw it bud. nicely done. So glad u told me cause i really forgot reading it. So much has happened, im losing track of everything.
New Summary (P.S. Guys please help me if I've left anything out. so much has happened and my mind is a bit fuzzy)

Note: Eliza needs to be added to front page list. Maybe a second list for characters in Cypher's group can be created.

Plot, Discoveries, Story
-Russian man bleeding from back via unknown weapon. Who could have done this?
-Some find Libby and Copper a little...suspicious.
-Marcus hasn't done anything in 2 days. Smh
-Women who was being held captive and tortured by Cypher, now known to as Crystal, has been killed.
-Horde of zombies have finally arrived at the wall.
-First flashback story, Clo's background revealed.
-We have finally had a little taste of the group who sent in the "Trojan Horse" and the horde of Dead.
-Several suporting characters in Cypher's group have made introductions or been mentioned. Brand, Skylar, Shea, and Cliff. (More info needed)
-Michael has been relatively absent since he was dropped off at home by Sun.
-Details have been revealed about the relative look and setup of Cypher's group. Primiarly made of tents, with his being in the center. Surronded by mountains?
-New main character, Eliza, joins Cypher's Group.
-New supporting character, Geoffrey, Eliza's older brother, joins Cypher's group.
-The Man by the River now known as the Russian.
-Background about Cypher and his group revealed and its connection to Jacob. This may not turn out pretty between them.

Main Characters
Eliza(New character)- Eliza enters the story as the girl with the green thumb who joies Cypher's group out of necessity. However, she has a secret that only she and her brother know.
Ravenia- At the med center aiding Tobias with the bleeding wounds of the Russian.
Marcus- Currently posted at the wall as the incoming horde comes forth. Has been inactive for two days. Maybe he can bust out the metal and finally get dirty.
Anora- Currently posted at the wall with her sister Ramera, fending off the incoming horde.
Ramera- Currently posted at the wall with her sister Anora, fending off the incoming horde.
Clo- Flashback story revealed when she first met Anora and Ramera. Currently sleeping in the med center. I think?
Fen- Has been naked longer than we realized. Finding a pair of clothes to put on at the med center.
Jacob- Currently posted at the wall, fending off the incoming horde.
Tobias- At the med center mending up the Russian with Ravenia's aid.
Sun- In the med center helping Shay overcome her mental illusions via his telepathic sprites.
Shay- Recovering from injury in the med center and with the help of Sun's telepathic intervention, is overcoming the mental illusions.
Cypher- More has been revealed about this character and his connection to Jacob.
Isam- In the med center aiding Shay as best as he can.
Michael- Has been inactive since being dropped off at home by Sun.

Supporting Characters
Libby and Copper- Currently being taken care of by a nurse in a room two doors down from the room Shay and the Russian are in. Many are becoming suspicious of them.
Geoffrey(New character)- Older brother of Eliza with adrenaline boosted mega strength and overprotective tendencies. Currently residing in Cypher's group along with his sister.
Brand, Skylar, Shae, Cliff(New characters)- Revealed to be members of Cypher's group. Have a past connection with Jacob and not a pretty one.
Unknown sender of the Trojan Horse and Dead horde- Little is known of this menance, accept that he wants to take over the Paradise Lands.

P.S. Again, let me know if anything was left out. lol
Also, I think marcus should be able to turn his skin and bones and muscles into metal so he can wreck havok. Also, a contraption should be made so everyone can open the gate if marcus isnt there.
pyroman said
Awesome, Cheshire, but uh... Could someone give Marcus something to do? It's been two days since I last posted and nobody has really talked to or done anything with Marcus. If his character was different, I'd post as soon as I can to make him do something, but I can't.


Yes! I've been wanting Marcus to do something for a long time. Marcus can probably fly by riding on a large piece of metal right? Maybe Marcus and one of the harpies can fly across the Red Waste in search of where the horde originated or where the Russian or Children might have come from? The journey might uncover important clues to the whole thing. Just a thought. lol
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