Mortarion

Beyond Civilisation's Grasp... - A Rogue Trader (WH40K) RP [Seeking Desperate Souls for Adventure!]

@Sarpedon Ah, right, sorry, forgot that oyu took the Explorator spot. Hmmm, well, will have to see what spots are yet to be filled and prepare to tkae one of those jsut in case

Beyond Civilisation's Grasp... - A Rogue Trader (WH40K) RP [Seeking Desperate Souls for Adventure!]

Hmmm, I think I might try and join this one as well. WOuld itb e ok if I made a member of the AdMech?

Mass Effect: Borealis

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Glad you managed to get a post up! Content wise, looks good, but a bit more proof reading couldn't hurt. Regardless, I'm glad to see you hoping in on your own initiative. :)

@Dervish

Ah, oops, will try to give it some proofread now. Sorry, this kind of htings always slip by me, even when I look on my psot backwards htey are painfully obvious, so thanks for bringing it up (and sorry for hte double psot)

EDIT: Alright, edited hte psot to correct some of those pesky gramamr mistakes. Ocne again, thanks for bringign this to my attention Dervs

Mass Effect: Borealis

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Cool, and YAY! ^-^

@Fallenreaper

Hope the psot is good, sorry it took so long to get it posted

@Mortarion

Good job getting Khosin in the fray. Hopefully for the next time you post it'll be easier for you to start~

@DearTrickster

Thanks, and yeah, hopefuly it will be easier the next tiem for me to get a post up

Mass Effect: Borealis

Khosin looked as the assembled crew of the Borealis distributed themselves into small teams in the span of a few minutes "Well, at the very least we aren't bickering at our enemy's doorstep." Thought the Batarian as he took out his mattock assault rifle, carefully holding it in his hands as he waited while the recon team fed the rest of them information on the structure they were to assault, along with the position of some of the enemy contacts.

They didn't have to wait long for the combat to start, for after a few more minutes the comms of the squad came to life as Haze announced that he had been compromised and that he would set one of the vehicles to explode so as to create a distraction for the rest of them. Taking cover, Khosin began to give suppression fire to the rest of the squad. However, it wouldn't be long before he heard someone speaking on the comms again.

“I got Three Eyed Zallak. He’s down in the warehouse - he’s gonna need medi-gel and restraints in an hour or two or he’ll die, so don’t say I didn’t warn you. Bosh’tet kicks hard, so watch out if you plan to wake him up at all.”

Kasyra's news stopped Khosin for a few seconds as he considered his options "Kasyra, I'm grabbing a pack of medi-gel now, heading to your location ASAP." He said through the comms before he ducked into cover under a hail of gunfire from the slavers. Activating his tech-armor before moving, Khosin headed to the truck and picked a pack of medi-gel before dashing madly towards the location where Kasyra was, hoping that the rest of the team would draw some fire away from him. After a few tense minutes, he arrived where Kasyra, his tech-armor having succumbed under the barrage of gunfire from the slavers, with his shields depleted to a 35% percent of their capability.

Handing the medi-gel to the quarian, he scanned the area and noticed that while the Asari and Quarian where present, the Turian wasn't. Activating his comms unit he tried to hail the Turian "Hello, Vellios wasn't it? Can you hear me?" He asked through the comms "If you do, send me your coordinates and I'll rendezvous with you." He said into the comms channel, waiting for the Turian to reply to him before he set off towards his location.

Mass Effect: Borealis

Since Morty was unable to get a post up today, and seems like he won't tonight, I'm going to have a Vellios one up by tonight latest.

@Fallenreaper

Actually, I am woreking on a psot now Fallen, it should be up shortly.

EDIT: Post is up, Khosin delivered a pack of medi-gel to Kasyra and is hailing Vellios in the comms while heading towards him (once he is given Vellio's location ofc). If there's anythign that needs to be changed, do please tell me so.

Mass Effect: Borealis

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No problem hun and that's all anyone needs from you is your best effort. ^-^

@Fallenreaper

Once again, thanks Fallen :)

Mass Effect: Borealis

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Ummm. Alright, my suggestion is work from when they arrived and they started to break off. Summarize it as it likely took only a few minutes at most, despite the text walls we're cranking out, the timing in rp is much faster as is the thought process. At least that's how I've usually understood it. In addition, I would suggest you focus on what your Batarian might've noticed or important to him, rather than try to include everything. Just because it's not mentioned, doesn't mean it didn't happen. Just means your PC, not you, didn't consider it important. Also, if you have to, make a small, short paragraph post to start off? I merely need your PC's intro on approaching Vellios and I can build on that from there. We're all about quality, not amount here. Even a small, 1 paragraph reply is worth much more than a mile page of fluff and rambling. Does that help some?

@Fallenreaper

Thanks for the help Fallen, will try to get the post up today.

Mass Effect: Borealis

@Fallenreaper Still here, and yeah, I do am havign a bit of troubles getting my post started. SOrry for keepign yu waiting for so long Fallen

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

I haven't done a collab with Peik yet as far as I remember

EDIT: I'm at pad 2