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I decided to have Mana go "Spy mode" and fail.

Lets see if anyone will notice this.
She was finally back at her room. It was a rather long day, with most of her classes being about different strategies and how to successfully excecute them and how to react to different responses from the enemies. Mana felt like most of the emphasis was put on how to use their powers against the enemy, which slightly annoyed her, because she felt like some powers could also be used to enhance the regular people weapons and armours. But she didn't feel like speaking up in any of her classes, not wanting to attract attention to herself because she felt like she knew what most of the responses would be.

Moving to her bed, she allowed herself to crash on it and then letting out a fake snore. She felt a bit tired, but she knew that going to sleep at this hour meant she would wake up in the middle of the night, which wasn't quite something she wanted to do. Pushing herself from the bed and moving to sit on it with her legs crossed, Mana pondered on what she should do. She needed to check her social group to see if there were any new topics, eat dinner, choose clothes for tomorrow, make sure she doesn't need to do the laundry yet, shower and only then she could go to sleep.

Deciding to check her social group while eating to save herself a bit of time, Mana grabbed her tablet before placing it in her sidebag and then leaving the room, locking it once she was out. Sighing to herself, she already knew that to reach the cafeteria she needed to take the train. She slightly disliked trains because they didn't feel too stable for her, but she never felt a single rumble that suggested the train in the Academy was not stable, which reassured her a bit.
While on the train, Mana placed an earpiece in her ear and then pressed it, beginning to listen to any recorded message people might've left for her. She had a couple from her parents, letting her know that they wanted to hear more from her, and not just once a week. Another message was from one of the managers from the social group, informing her that she was once again nominated to become a co-manager due to her expertise and knowledge in different technologies, and that they required her acceptance to proceed with giving this to the other managers.

Upon hearing the last message that was left for her, Mana smiled. It was one from a friend she had from highschool, letting her know that she just recieved a scholarship and will begin studying in a university in a bit, and in the subject she had wanted. Putting a finger on the earpiece, she would change the setting to call and try to get in touch with her parents. Neither of them had answered, so she assumed that they were working and left a voice message. Then she left a message to the social group manager, letting him know that this time she accepts, feeling she is ready.

She chose not to call her friend just then, and removed the earpiece from her ear and placed it back in the bag. The train had just stopped at her station and Mana got off with a quick step, before going to the cafeteria. She had seen a few faces she had known from her class, but none she would want to say 'hey' to. So instead she quickly made her way to the cafeteria, going inside and getting herself some beef, a salad and a glass of water, not wanting to over do it with food.

Sitting down at a table and taking out her tablet, she begun skimming through the new topics and replies in the social network before noticing something on the other side of the room. A few other people stood up and two of them appeared to be having a conversation that could very easily lead to a fight. Putting the tablet back in her bag, she begun eating her food while watching from the distance at what was going on. She had no intention of suddenly stepping up and getting involved with people she didn't quite know, so she eventually decided to keep on eating and pay them less attention.

After finishing her food, she noticed that three of the people had already left the cafeteria, with the last person leaving just as she rose her sight. Drinking her glass of water, she then let out a sigh of satisfaction. Now all she had left to do was to go, take a shower, catch her friend with a call and then crash on her bed again. Standing up, she begun to walk casually towards the exit, knowing that the train back to her dorm should be arriving in a few minutes, and she didn't want to accidently miss it.
A couple of minutes later she was about halfway to the train station when she overheard a conversation going on a conversation going on about mundane guns using special bullets, and how one person prefered using bullets that burn things and don't freeze them. With her curiousity raising, Mana moved to walk a few steps behind the two girls, being extremely curious as to how the conversation will keep on going and wanting to hear more. Obviously she knew that some shifters could create special ammo, but she hadn't seen any example of this thus far.

Not exactly watching where she is going, Mana stumbled and fell head first to the floor. Letting out a grunt of pain, she moved to sit on the floor and see that she was lucky and the only thing that happened to her was a scratch on her forehead. Her knees hurt a bit, but no actual injury was shown, so she figured she was fine, before moving to stand up slowly.
Yoshikuni Sadako


Hearing Eiji call out to them, Kuni would instantly move to drag Ryuu in the direction of his voice until they faced him. Upon seeing Sachi in Eiji's arms, she stuck out her tongue at the young infant, knowing what her response would be, before moving to pay more attention to what Eiji was saying "It's fine. The moment Ryuu said that you had to go look for someone I understood. I hope Sache didn't give you a hard time." She said and made a silly face towards Sachi.

After a moment, Kuni stopped and looked at Eiji with the regular smile on her face "I'm fine, don't worry. After the match I went and spent a bit of time with Reyna. She is really nice and a bit shy, so I decided to show her around and then walk with her until she had to get back to the hotel. She has a really strict bird looking after her." She said, and then took a bit of a breath before looking in the direction of the arena for a moment.

"I saw Reyna used lightning around her body to deflect my Earth hand technique, so I decided to try and push her into the swampy water, where I thought her lightning techniques would spread out thoughout the water and also hit her, but she also had a summon so my attempts to push her back didn't work. After that I decided to bring the water to her. That also didn't work, because I didn't think all the way through about how much water would be sent to her by using explosive tags within the water. After doing that, I started feeling a bit dizzy, and I realised that if I kept on going then I would most likely start seeing blurry as well and I didn't want to reach that point, because then it would be hard for me to counter anything she might've had. So I chose to resign from the match by claiming that I am retreating, and hopefully the people who were watching would think that I chose to do so to think about a new strategy against her and as well to recover a bit of chakra."

Kuni finished her explanation and looked at her sensei, hoping to get his approval for her way of thinking. She had no idea if that is what people would see, and she figured that they could also see it as a failed assassination or a poor choice, but that was what she chose to do.
Condor, its sad to hear to hear that, but I understand.

I've got 2 things I have to say about it though.

1: Fire Emblem: Awakening is awesome.
2. Date A Live III is coming out summer of 2015, according to the last Date A Live light novel that came out. Theres also the second OVA coming out next month and a movie with an original plot that's supposed to be released sometime this year, according to the light novel.
Yippe :D

Now how to join the Siesta... I mean, I read that everyone just left the Cafeteria, so I should probably write something in that area. Hmm...

Edit: Might need a suggestion, because I've come to dislike bumping into other characters and walking by or such makes me keep thinking that Mana wouldn't just approach people who nearly went at it...

Unless.... I might come up with something in a few hours. Hopefully. If not then during tomorrow.
Well, I've added a reason. Its related to her fear of unstable places :P

In an odd way.
Alright. Removed the first bit, changed the second one to only have a possibility of feeling a bit of static if someone hits her physically, and removed the last bit.

As for the reason, I've added it in the same part where it states she doesn't like it, as well as a small addition to her personality.

Besides, not everyone has to like the same thing. Just because most people would jump at the chance of flying with their own power doesn't mean everyone would do so. Some would prefet having solid ground beneath their feet. :P
Chou isnt Origami! Chou doesn't want any special attention or sticks too much... Well, she is supposed to stick too much to people when she talks to them casually, but it doesn't quite seem like that happened yet. Heh.
Love how Suichi completely ignored Chou telling them to get out xD

Such is the life of Chou... Being ignored in her regular life and being ignored in her AST life...

I cannot help but think that if someone paid attention to her then the world would break.
I wrote the Intellegence part because in the several places I have checked about the Thunderbird, it was always described as an intellegent being, but if thats a problem I have no problem changing it.

As for her being underpowered, you could say that because it is lightning I didn't really want to risk things, as any other abilities I could think of would start to connect to the Thunderbirds ability to manipulate the weather. And I didn't intend on making it seem like a single lightning or two will make her exauhsted, I meant that if she puts a lot of focus into it and makes it into a single lightning bolt that would chain between many different people (Who those people would still be uncontrollable except for the first one, after all, lightning), but I suppose I can go and change her powers descriptions.

Her shifter appearance... I didn't quite want to have her start growing wings which is why I put focus on the lightning. And if someone were to look at her while she hovering down then they would see her as a Lightning bird of sorts, but I guess I understand what you mean. Will work on the changes immediatly.

Edit: I have made changes, both to her powers and to her shifter appearance. Hope its 100% acceptable now :D
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