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I just maked a doll and this rp is very interesting for me , thanks for making it

So improving the NS again
I maked a NS i wish it could be more complet so ,i want you to accept my NS or atleast give an advise to improve it
Nation Sheet.

Nation Name:The Confederation


Government Type:Republic
Capital System/World:
Andes-XX3Y

Inti "New Home"


Dominant Species:Human (Quechuas and Aymaras from Andine Line in Earth)
Other Species:



Humans :50%
Chautls:50%
Leadership:President Capalt Alaya
Persons of Importance:
-Representative of Humans Kalatert
-Representative of Chautls Puzkl´at
-Military Chief Guaman Kurquo
-Embassador in chief Tuhart



History:The Andine People of Earth decided to search a new home long ago , they wanted to maintain their ideals and manners in a planet for themself ."We will remember our Home planet our homes but now this planet its no more our home" Speech-2180 A.D , Cusco.The depart was difficult since they will have to have transport with them millions of people but it was possible and they thanks to the combined money of the people .They leaved in the 2180 A.D and started their travel.The fijated sistem was Andes-XX3Y , after 10 years of travel they get in Andes-XX3Y , and decided to colonize a planet which they renamed Inti "New Home",but something was there they didnt know what was waiting for them.

There was a sentient specie ,a new sentient specie that was waiting for them , when they was near of the planet , the radio receptors started catching strange sounds , and then the captain of the fleet see the satellites , artificial sattellites , they were not even similar to ours satellites , at first the leaders and captains didnt know what to do , the could enter the planet and change completely a Civilization , they decided their only option ,enter the planet for what they come for get a new planet .For the Chautls its was amazing for the humans strange , relations between them started , the colonist started making cities in the planet in designated zones by the representatives of the Chautls , The Chautls and the Humans started to be co-neighboors in the planet . Before it was strange to see a Chautls near a human city and viceversa, now is more than common because of the fusion of both cultures , this was arranged by the Chautls and Human leaders . Humans shared everything they got and answered all the questions , why the come , what maked them leave , etc .The Cautls did the same , it was a pacific colonization .Then Chautls-Human Science Projects started and began the production of space centers and ships mostly bassed in human desings.
This is how The Confederation Started

Other:
The roll depends of the traits too?
@Murtox
Your nation doesn't make total sense to me. I understand the whole 'Independant Colony' idea, but that requires a homeland to come from (Which you lack) and you mention your monarch allowing a republic to form. In what situation would a monarch ever give up their divine power for the people? Finally you describe your nation without any sort of flaw. You need to make major changes to your nation. I don't mind republics or countries in the new world however the actual nation itself has no real reason to be there.


Yep fail of mine ,i will revise it again and edit, it was late that day ,i will have more clear mind today
Thanks , but i guess the GM will do some kinda balance of colonies and lands .

PD:Making that sheet cost about me 3 hours e.e

I Recently started playing games of role so i want to have fun and role a lot
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