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Just a fish out of water, looking for his next drink.

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Nice post Bing, i especially like the trailing off at the end!
Why hello dog.
OldManWong, indeed we are accepting and looking for new members. PM me a CS if need be and we will work from there. Nice post Dreaming, can't wait to see what the rest of y'all do!
Awesome! I can't wait to read it, and everyone else's post as well. Happy belated birthday regardless, hope it was a blast! RL trumps all ;)
Yeah :) :( Was not my intention, the first draft was half that size if if i recall. I tend to have issues with dialogue. This post needed the dialogue, trying to explain my new character because I may not end up posting a CS nor race sheet for him until much later in the RP. So when interacting with him speculation on who he is and what he has done is kinda what im going for. In a book when a race appears after having never been seen in a couple hundred years, do the characters know who and what they are and do automatically? ;)
The reason it was long was because this one dictated it. I rarely like to post long posts so you should not expect it to continue. Let me say, as vague as i can, that this particular post will prove to be important for the first part of the story and it ended up much longer than I would have anticipated originally. In the future it will be much more short, sweet, and to the point. That much i can assure you all. It's not like i like writing massive blocks of text for no other reason than to hurt eyes and minds ;)
The post is up and good to go. I gave everyone freedom in their choices. Hopefully this was worth the wait for y'all. Let the wheels turn! EDIT: I will also be editing the OOC a lot now that coding is user friendly again. Also keep an eye out for for a lore section. I will be adding in some information, while not needed, will help paint a clearer picture of both the past and the present situation.
On the front-line
The tip of a Dark Creature's spear found it's way into the chest of a soldier nearby, quickly sprouting an torrent of red blood. The soldier screamed out in pain as blood began to trickle out of his mouth. The creature attempted to pull the spear back through, yet the hands of the dying man found itself wrapped around the shaft of the spear. With a look of pure spite on his face, he pulled backwards using his weight to rip the spear away from the dark creature. Another soldier grabbed the shield and pulled the creature back into his ranks. Other soldiers were quick to put their spears and swords into the dark creatures body. The creature roared a terrible scream, the soldiers kept stabbing their weapons into the creatures torso. It tried to lash out at the soldiers for a split second, but his voice went silent and his body fell limp. Across the lines of combat, the soldiers faced a similar situation. Often times needing to sacrifice five to ten soldiers for even one of the dark creatures killed. The Dark creatures never stopped in their advance, constantly pushing further and further down the road. The soldiers on the walls were quick to position troops on the stairs, preventing their positions from being overwhelmed.
Elsewhere in the battle
Ladders began to be put up on the walls from the outside, and a combination of Line-breaker's and the small creatures that make up the bulk of their armies began to climb .up the ladders. The small creatures would normally stand near five foot ten, but their backs were bent sideways halfway down. While it made climbing the ladders difficult, it made them awkward to fight. A simple swordsman however, could dispose of one with ease and with patience.
In the middle of the battle.
One of the dark creatures thrust his spear at the head of Fenris. Fenris blocked it with a swing of his sword, cracking the spear down it's shaft. The broken spear fell to the ground and in a quick motion the creature drew it's sword. Raising it's shield up, it thrust it's body forward shield first into the shielded form of Fenris. As the shields connected the sword of the Dark Creature slashed out above the shields. Fenris took the blow, slowly being pushed back as he cowered behind the shield to avoide the strikes. He lowered his body down and slashed his sword at the legs of the creatures, cutting through the rotting flesh with ease forcing the creature to his knee's. Fenris raised his body while lowering his shield, and raised his sword up high and was ready to strike the killing blow down on the creature. The sight of another spear flying in from the left side quickly forced his head down to the right. The razor sharp edge of the spear cut through a few strands of hair before the shaft rested on his shoulder for a split second before the creature began to pull it back. Fenris raised his shield and pushed the spear upwards, before thrusting his sword quickly through the neck of the creature causing it's dark blood to erupt outwards. Fenris quickly pulled the sword out of the second creatures neck and thrust it into the chest of the first one who was trying to ready his sword for another strike. Quickly causing the rotten flesh to give way to a torrent of dark black blood. Another spear was thrust, this time cutting a small gash across his forearm. He pulled his sword from the creature, allowing it to fall down, before he raised his shield up to cover his body from a second strike from the creature. His eyes fixated on the creature yet his eyes were mindful for any sign of attack from the other directions. A strong hand gripped his shoulder, alerting him that Lord Bali had some news from him. Fenris quickly stepped back from the front-line's, his spot was quickly filled by another soldier. Fenris quickly made his way back from the frontlines and he side stepped a rushing soldier, before looking at Lord Bali. He grabbed a cloth from his waist, eyes locked on the lord with a look of 'why did you drag me away' on his face, and began to tie the makeshift bandage on the wound. A few soldiers ran between the men, rushing towards the front-line with an ill advised look of confidence on their face. Lord Bali's hand remained rested on the hilt of his sword, his face like he had seen a ghost, and a somewhat exhausted look that had befallen his body. “Well speak Lord Bali!” Fenris demanded “Our situation here is bleak, we lose many men agianst this enemy. We can not sit idly by!” “There's a pair of Dôr Thuran.” He paused, and took a deep breath. “They just appeared out of the shadows.” Lord Bali said as he motioned for Fenris to follow. Fenris had adopted a similarly perplexed look, finishing up tying the cloth around the wound before he followed. "Our soldiers have them encircled but they ask for you to judge our old enemy's intentions," “A Dôr Thuran?” Fenris shot back “I thought none have been seen since the end of the Great Reckoning?” Fenris said as he quickened his pace. “What made them leave the bloody blocked pass?” He paused his tone as his head twisted quickly to battle behind "What brings them to us?" Lord Bali matched his pace and continued “Yeah, thats what's so fucked up about their appearance here!” Lord Bali paused as he pointed towards where the towering creature's stood. "We don't know, but we best find out quickly." Fenris had heard the stories of these massive beasts, yet he never believed them to be true. yet his eye's did not lie about what stood in-front of him. His eyes strained to grasp the enormous height of the two beasts, he could only guess that the two creatures stood well over several feet tall. His pace slowed as his eyes darted to the frame of the one that drew his attention the most. From his distance he could only make out the basic details of it, but he saw the creature's armor borrowed heavily from the forest, In lieu of steel plates on his chest and shoulder, the creature had what appeared to be thick yet well shaped plates of wood. As he looked even closer it seemed every last piece of his armor bore some heritage to the forest. A thick layer of a moss like substance blanketed his chest and arms, while a helmet made from the same wood as the chest armor covered his face; crowned with a couple circles of thorns. His eyes flowed down to his left arm, sharp wooden spikes erupted out from the back of his arm. His spear was mostly normal, save for the inscribed runes and an area just beneath the spear tip. Surrounding an emerald green colored gem were more wooden spikes erupting in an even circle around the gem. The spear tip was a solid, and appeared to be a very sharp to the Guardian's eyes. He began to move again as Lord Bali called him back to attention, his head darted back to the battle behind him noticing the front-line was being pushed back even more. His eyes darted back to the Dôr Thuran's and his eyes quickly fell upon the other one, and his eyes were greeted by the familiar site of steel plate's covering the body of the creature. Overlapping up and over the chest were solid plates of steel, surrounding a teal coloured gem. His eyes moved up and looked at the shoulder plates of the creature and marvelled at the design. His right shoulder had two additional overlapping plates of steel, with tassels coming down off the edge. His eyes darted to the right shoulder and noticed that only one plate covering it but three spikes of solid steel rose out of the armor. Up his neck rose two more plates of steel that curved outwards provided protection from any errant strikes. Beneath the spike covered helmet no eyes could be seen. Fenris slowly moved away from the rear ranks and his expression of suprise did nothing but grow with the unobstructed view of the creatures. His head quickly looked over to Lord Bali, before returning to the creatures in front of him. He slowly moved into the circle of soldiers, placing his hand on the shoulder of the first he came in contact with. "Easy soldier" He spoke in a hushed tone. "They're monsters sir!" The soldier spoke in an even more hushed tone, fear could be read off his young face. "They almost wiped mankind off the map two-" "I know" Fenris interrupted "keep your sword at the ready." Fenris commanded as he moved closer into the circle. Fenris moved halfway between his soldiers and the creatures, his sword raised up high and pointing towards the chest of the wood covered creature. "What are you doing here, Dôr Thuran?" "Dar lun tovash dorlun." Spoke the wood covered creature to Fenris in a very deep, yet ghostly tone. The soldiers and Fenris each braced themselves as the creature spoke. Each soldier looked between themselves with a nervous look, and strengthened their grips on their swords. "Tovas don tuli?" Fenris sword lowered as his free hand flew to his face, shaking it from side to side. His hand released his head and he stared into his open palm as he spoke "By the Goddess, they can't speak the common tongue!" He said as his sword pointed back and forth between the two. The steel clad creature moved his head towards the face of Fenris, the soldiers each moved backwards and raised their swords up in response. "I can speak for us, if you'd like human." His tone was not quite as deep, yet just as eerily ghostly as the first. Fenris's head quickly jolted to the form of the creature before speaking "If you could speak, why not answer my question?" He said as frustration bellowed from his face. The creature took a quick couple steps closer to Fenris, causing many of the soldiers behind Fenris to rush forward and thrust their swords at the creature, Fenris placed the tip of his sword on the teal jewel on the creatures chest. The creature slowly lowered his head down and looked straight down into the face of Fenris. "You did not ask me a question." His free hand slowly raised up before placing it's massive fingers on the edge of the blade. "We are your enemy no longer." He paused as his hand pushed the blade away from his chest. "Your enemy is out there." Raising his free hand and pointing out towards the battle with his index finger. Fenris looked around at the other soldiers, nodding at them each in turn before they backed away from the creatures. "How do we know we can trust you?" Fenris said as he pulled his sword back to his side, letting the tip sag to the ground. "How do we know your end game is the same as ours?" The creature lent out a soft laugh "You can't and it's not." He spoke with a matter of fact tone "But we will assist you none the less in this fools errand." His head darted over to his comrades, who was stuck staring at the walls. "Valen, Dorith?" A serious tone filled the air. "Galuin de na ni veylo fan!" He spoke as he pointed his spear towards a section on the wall, to the left of the gate. The second creature looked towards the section and nodded his head. "What is it, creature?" Questioned Fenris as he looked back, seeing nothing but the large battle behind him. "What does it see?" Fenris asked. "His name, commander, is Dorith." Came an aggressive tone from the creature. "What he sees is not good." Pausing as he pointed his finger towards the walls "The enemy is pushing up the stairs, trying to rid your walls of your archers." "Lord Bali, we must send some soldiers to reinforce that-" Fenris began to order. "Dorith will go." The creature spoke in a commanding tone. "He will need five soldiers with him." Fenris adopted an angry look as his head tilted "And who are you to order us? In our castle?" "You know my name very well commander." Spoke the creature in a near silent voice. "Thedas." Fenris adopted a look of shock, as did the Lord Bali. "You were responsible for starting the Great Reckoning!" Fenris spoke in a hushed voice. Thedas tilted his head up as he spoke in a quiet tone "History is written by the victors, commander." Thedas placed his hand on Dorith's shoulder and continued "Doh, Durith." Thedas turned his head back to Fenris as Dorith began to run out, ignoring the soldiers who stood in his way and began to make his way towards one of the stairways that led to the wall. Thedas looked back to Fenris and spoke again in a confident, commanding tone "You don't need to trust us, just help us help you." Fenris looked over towards Lord Bali then towards the soldiers who were nearby. "You soldiers." Pointing out several of them in the process "Go with the one called Dorith, assist them in my place." Lord Bali quickly moved over to Fenris and was about to speak but Fenris spoke first "Indeed I do not trust you, Thedas, but I welcome your help. The enemy of my enemy, correct?" Fenris said as he lent out his hand as a gesture of good will. "We are not your friend, commander." He spoke in a quick voice "But we shall be brothers in this war." Thedas spoke in a confident tone, and he extended his hand as out and grasped the hand of Fenris and shook. His head quickly darted up and his hand fell from Fenris's. "Speak of what you see." Spoke Fenris "They have created a breach in your lines on the wall, I fear that your flank is in danger." He replied. "I will go and get some soldiers." Fenris shouted as he turned some body to run back to the lines behind him but a firm hand on his shoulder stopped him. "I need a word with you yet, commander." Spoke Thedas "Alone." Removing his hand from the commanders shoulder as he montioned over to a side street that would lead to one of the stairs, before walking away. Lord Bali let a second pass, waiting until Thedas was out of earshot before speaking "I don't trust it." He said as his eyes followed Thedas moved. "I don't trust it around you while you just have a few soldiers." Fenris looked back towards the Lord Bali and spoke in an excited tone. "By the Goddess you are right my friend. That's why i ask you to return to the fight, and find me some true soldiers." He paused as he turned his body towards the Lord and continued "Templars, the Hillklag swordsmen, and any who have proven themselves in battle offer them the choice to fight by my side." He paused. "Send twenty of our swordsmen as well. Make no mention of Thedas or Dorith, let me do that for them but mention the dire state of the flanks." "All right." Sighed Lord Bali "All right, be careful in the meantime." He said as he shook his head and turned around and ran back towards the battle.
Fenris and Thedas
Fenris approached Thedas in a careful manner from behind. "What is so important that you must speak to me alone from my men?" "This battle is hopeless commander." He spoke "Even you must notice this." His voice was quick and blunt. "No battle is hopeless when the Goddess fights with us" Fenris preeched "Even so, what power is a Goddess against a god in flesh?" He countered "Your men can fight, but they will die." Thedas turned his body to face Fenris "The forces at play here are complicated, even I don't fully understand it." He paused as he pointed down the road towards the Sky Bridge and continued "Unless you and your soldiers make it across then I fear all might be lost." Fenris shook his head at the thought of a retreat. "We shall do no such thing. The general has ordered us to hold, even to the last man." Fenris spoke. "A bad order." He bluntly spoke. "And what grants you this foresight, Thedas?" Questioned Fenris. "As real as your Goddess is to you my god is to me." He said "Only my god doesn’t remain silent like yours." He paused as his head looked back to the rear of the army and continued "Your soldiers are coming, in good time even, we'll continue this conversation when we are across the bridge."
Lord Bali and the soldiers.
Lord Bali ran through the lines as chaos began to fall over the lines. The enemy was pushing hard, and the soldiers began to feel a cold chill fall over the air. Some murmured the change in temperature was a sign the dead god was near, but Lord Bali was not phased by this talk. He ran to each soldiers in turn; Roger Maltuits, Maro Heman, Malcer Greystorm, and others like them. Each was told the situation but the decision was up to them. They could pull back from the fight now and assist Fenris with their flanks, but leave the situation in the middle uncertain or they could stay on the lines, keeping the enemy at bay but leave a hole in their flank that could prove bad.
Thalius Hanadar, and Celine Branwenl and the failing walls.
As the flanks become more muddled with both the new dark creatures below, and the others coming over the walls, each find themselves in a different and dangerous situation. Thalius and Celine find their positions becoming ever more surrounded. With the Dark Creatures coming from below and Line-Breakers and the bulk of the dead god's army coming up from the walls. They can expect reinforcements soon, as Dorith and a small band of soldiers will attempt and break through to assist them but they are on their own for now. They can either find a more defensible position elsewhere, taking away support from their own soldiers below or they can hold their ground and tempt fate that Dorith arrives in time to help. Other archers and mages on the wall would not be so likely to receive this support at first, but many will find escape routes from the horde across the rooftops.
The cold truth about Illian
Illian's massive spell had caught the attention of the enemy and friends alike. His race meant that the human mages around him did not trust his intentions. While the Dark Creatures seemingly knew the extent of what the spell's power will cause to their forces. A couple spears flew through the air targeting the mage Illian, finding home in a couple other mages as well. He could continue to cast and release this spell while risking death or injury, or he could release it early and protect the other's mages. Either kill the enemy and be the target of his friends, or wound the enemy and have the trust of the other mages.
From being called into work on my days i planned for writing to my work being lost when i forgot to save; it has been busy and hectic. I worked hard yesterday and will work through tonight to finish this. I am sorry for the delay but i hope we're running a marathon versus a sprint.
Good news, bad news. Bad news, my original post was lost when my laptop lost power. Good news, almost finished with the new IC post. This time I took a much different approach from the previous one and loving where it's taking me. Much more personal this time. Hopefully this shall be worth the wait for y'all. Secondary bad news, it's 3am and I'm tired. I'm off to bed. Will finish tomorrow if time permits, I don't work till Thursday ;)
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