Nib

War of the Seven Suns (Sci Fi Naval RP)

If Commodore does not return, what are we to do about Task Force Rho?

The Prophecy

Oh. Alright. I'm intending for him to have magical abilities, but not a lot since his training was never completed.

The Prophecy

Thank you, Shien. I meant to say lever, not crank. The lever isn't attached to the crossbow, it's just used to pull the string back easier. AS for the dirk, I can change it to have a crystal hilt.

The Prophecy

I recently began work on this new character concept. I'd appreciate anyone willing to read over it and give me opinions. Not sure if I'll replace Salas with this new character yet or not.

Felgrin

Name: Felgrin Caldwell Age: Recently turned twenty. Race: Human Gender: Male Religion: Felgrin worships The Wanderer. Appearance: At first glance, Felgrin appears to be an unsuspecting young man, being on the scrawny side with a thin frame and long legs. His face is long and pointed, causing him to have a long and thin nose with wide nostrils and somewhat gaunt features with high cheekbones and a long chin covered with a small goatee. Wavy hair of a light auburn color hangs down to brush the tops of Felgrin’s shoulders. His eyes are a pale blue color. Felgrin has very few sets of clothing, all of which look almost identical; he was plain linen shirts with long sleeves varying in colors of a faded grey to a dull brown and two sets of trousers a dark brown color with patches sewn on here and there. He also usually wears thick leather gloves and tall boots with strong soles. For protection from attack, Felgrin wears a thick leather vest that hangs down past his waist a good bit and a gorget made of a light metal that covers the tops of his shoulders and part of his chest. To keep himself protected from the weather and to distort his form in the night, Felgrin also wears a cloak dyed slate grey on the outside and a deep crimson on the inside.

Armor

Weapon(s): Felgrin carries a dark wooden crossbow with a crank for faster reloads and a dirk with a blade made of blackened steel with various runes carved into it, measuring one and a half feet, and a black handle with a pommel decorated with a single citrine gem. Skills: Felgrin is a skilled pickpocket, being able to dip his hands into someone’s pocket with a touch as light as a bird landing on a branch or cut someone’s purse and slip back into the crowd unnoticed. He is also able to manipulate most locks to open. Not only does Felgrin have a light touch, but he is also able to step lightly enough to sneak by most people and blend into the shadows without notice. Years of training have honed his abilities with his crossbow and his dirk, enabling him to hit his target skillfully at a distance and hold his own in close ranged combat with his dirk. In close range combat, Felgrin is able to employ his agility and nimbleness to dodge around, parry, and counter enemy blows. Training from his maternal grandfather has also equipped Felgrin with skills in Arcane Magic, focusing mainly on the illusionary abilities of the branch of magic, but since his training was never complete Felgrin has to employ the use of the runes carved into his dirk for most of his magic; he continues to study the art form the journal left to him by his grandfather to increase his abilities. He uses what magical abilities he does have to aid him in combat.

Under the Red Sun

Heoron will be in Maceron.

War of the Seven Suns (Sci Fi Naval RP)

I'm still present.

Under the Red Sun

Maxx, I added to Heoron's weaknesses and made him just under six feet. Is that alright?

The Prophecy

I think for the time being I'll stick with Salas. I'm just at a loss as to what he can do right now.

Under the Red Sun

Heoron

Name: Heoron Age: 36 Gender: Male Species: Ogre Kingdom of Origin: Concordius Physical appearance: Heoron stands two inches over six feet with a trim frame thanks to his orc lineage. His skin is a slightly darker grey-blue color than what is average for his race. His sharp eyes stand out from his skin, blazing as a yellow-orange color with hints of black here and there. His silver-colored hair hangs down to barely brush the tops of his shoulders, and he will at times tie it back in a horsetail or braid it to make it more manageable. Heoron has very pointed and angular features with high cheekbones and a long, pointed chin. Attire: Heron’s outer robes are made of a thick yet soft silk-like material dyed a dark grey color with gold trim. Beneath his robes, he wears armor made from a light leather with thin and durable metal shoulder guards. His cloak is made of the same material of his robes and is dyed the same dark grey color; the cloak also has a face mask on the neck that Heron can put up to cover his face from the bridge of his nose down. Personality: On the surface, Heoron appears to be a calm and almost unemotional man. If one could see the inner workings of his mine, however, they would know his mind is a constant buzz, keeping his emotions in check so he can better call upon these emotions at a later time to utilize his magic more effectively. Because of this, Heoron also seems cold and distant to anyone around him. When he does speak to others, his words are laced with arrogance and condescension thick enough to slice with a knife. The ability to keep his emotions in check makes him an even-tempered person, leading to him being a calm and collected individual in most situations. Of course, this does not completely excuse him from the pull of emotions at times; it only means he is much better at controlling his emotions than most people. Hobbies/interests: Heoron’s main hobby is reading the journal left behind by his surrogate father and any other book he can get ahold of. He also spends his time studying the history of the different kingdoms and attempting to track down any information he can about his parents. It’s his thirst for any knowledge about his parents that drives him. Skills: Heoron has become skilled in Dark Magic, focusing more on the illusion aspects. Because of his magical abilities, Heoron is able to keep his emotions in check most of the time, separate and identify them and then draw upon them at a later date to power his magic, and in turn because of his ability to keep his emotions in check Heoron is able to remain calm in most situations others would panic during and think his way out if possible. He is also light footed and can walk with little to no noise, using his magic to mask his presence and blend into the shadows in combination with this skill in order to sneak his way through the world. Years of study have made Heoron into a knowledgeable historian and an expert on what is known about Cyclops culture and history. The obsession with his parents and hunting any lead he could find about them has made Heoron into a formidable tracker and detective of sorts; he is able to gather quite a bit of clues on someone and then track them down quickly based on what he gathers about them. This in turn has led to him taking many jobs as either a Bounty Hunter or an Assassin. Backstory: Heoron was born to a male elf named Artuous and a female orc named Gretsia, but Heoron remembers nothing about them as they died when he was barely two years old. When they died, Heoron was taken in by a human named Wilem; he raised Heoron as best as he could. When Heoron was eight, Wilem began teaching him Dark Magic. Wilem lived in a small cabin in the forest and chose to train his adopted son here to prevent him from causing any damage to others or the nearby village since he could not yet control his magic with his emotions being so erratic as such a young age. In the forests of his homeland, Heoron once came across the Will-o-Wisps one night. Being a child of barely eight, Heoron ran at the glowing orbs of blue fire, sending most of the orbs scattering into the night, but there was one that did not scatter at the sight of the boy. The Will-o-Wisp was strange, it spoke to the child and had a name. This strangeness in the magical being led to the two becoming friends and companions. Because he did not have a strong hold of his emotions at first, Heoron came very near to dying and losing his magic permanently when he lost control in a fit of rage, injuring Wilem in the process. This episode happened when he was ten, and after it occurred Heoron refused to use magic after he saw what he had done to Wilem when he lost control. The two were training on a cliffside, Wilem thinking the sight and sound of the ocean would keep the boy calm, but for some reason the child couldn’t shake the thought of his parents that day and flew into a fit of rage and sorrow at their passing, sending a violent torrent of energy all around, burning Wilem badly enough to scar and wound but not fatally. After a year of coaxing after the accident, Wilem finally convinced Heoron to take up learning magic again. The child, now age eleven, took to learning how to master his emotions with a new zeal, pouring over texts and hanging on to Wilem’s every word. Heoron trained under his surrogate father for twenty years after he began anew. In learning Dark Magic, Heoron was first taught how to control and identify his emotions to control his magic and then he began learning how to turn his emotions into magical energy. Throughout these twenty years, Wilem also taught Heoron how to fight with a short sword and a dagger. All the while through his training, Heoron couldn’t shake the nagging feeling at the back of his head to learn more about his parents, so when he was twenty-five, Wilem promised to help Heoron track down any information he could on his parents. Because of his promise, Wilem was forced to train Heoron on the move as the two tracked down any leads they could find about the couple. Six years of searching leads down, and the only thing Heoron found out about his parents was that the two used to be treasure hunters. Once his training was over, Heoron decided to undertake the search on his own. Four years into his own searching, Heoron managed to dig up the names of the treasure hunting group his parents were part of in an old manuscript for one of their hunts. Heoron went back to Wilem with the names and pleaded with him to help by searching out one of the names while Heoron searched for the other to expand their possibilities of finding something out. Heoron tracked down the name he took to Dorakis, but the person belonging to the name was long dead, having died a few years before his parents had. He managed to get ahold of the Dorak’s old journal and poured over it, decrypting it for about a year before he heard any news from Wilem. Unfortunately, Wilem had died in his pursuit of the name, but had managed to leave everything he had found to Heoron. After decrypting the Dorak’s journal, Heoron used them and Wilem’s own notes to learn anything he could about the Saurian that was the last living member of the treasure hunting team. His main goal now is to track down this Saurian in hopes of learning about his parents. Family:

• Wilem is the human who took Heoron in when his parents died.
• Artuous is Heoron’s elven father.
• Gretsia is Heoron’s orcish mother.

Relationships: |Name of person|one-word general impression | relationship to said person |Thoughts on the character| Weaponry:

• Staff: Heoron uses his wooden staff to channel his magic. The staff itself comes to Heron’s shoulder and is made of an old dark wood. The staff looks as though it is made of multiple thick branches twisting around one another, ending with the top sloping up in two places like small wooden waves; this opening is usually occupied by Ithenul, making the staff look like it has a blue orb floating between the two small wooden slopes.
• Magic: Heoron uses Dark Magic in combat, focusing more on the illusionary skills within this field of magic.
• Short sword: Heoron keeps a short sword made of steel strapped to his waist at all times.
• Dagger: Heoron also carries a serrated silver dagger hidden away in a sheath built into the back of his left boot.

Abilities: In a fight, Heoron is most skilled in close quarters, using his illusion magic to distract and confuse his enemies and then closing in to dispatch them. He is also skilled in the other aspects of Dark Magic. Despite his race’s natural slowness Heoron is able to dodge around and parry enemy blows, the former aided from his illusion magic. Heoron is also able to use his staff to block attacks. His main advantage comes from ambush attacks, using his magic to hide his presence and then getting the drop on his enemies. Weaknesses: Heron’s poor eyesight prevents him from engaging in any long range combat and forces him to get close to his enemies in a fight. In a straight fight, Heoron, while not completely useless, will not last too long before he needs to flee. Companion: Heoron’s sole companion is his familiar, a Will-o-Wisp called Ithenul. He also owns a dark chestnut-colored horse, but he does not count it as a companion since he cannot have conversations with the animal. Other: Polaris

Under the Red Sun

Heoron

Name: Heoron Age: 22 Gender: Male Species: Ogre Kingdom of Origin: Concordius Physical appearance: Heoron is on the short side for his race, standing just under six feet with a lanky yet trim and toned frame thanks to his orc lineage. His skin is a slightly darker grey-blue color than what is average for his race. His sharp eyes stand out from his skin, blazing as a yellow-orange color under his thin, arched eyebrows. Pointed ears, the left one being adorned with a small hoop-shaped brass earring halfway up the ear, inherited from his father can be seen poking through his silver-colored hair that hangs down to barely brush the tops of his shoulders, and he will at times tie it back in a horsetail or braid it to make it more manageable. Heoron has very pointed and angular features with high cheekbones and a long, pointed chin due to his father’s elven features being more dominant than his mother’s, though some of her orcish traits can be seen in her son, one such being the slightly elongated lower canine teeth. Attire: Heoron wears a light-colored linen shirt with long sleeves with a small v-neck opening held together with leather strings laced through small holes on either side of the opening, dark trousers with a few patches sewn on here and there, and tall boots stretching halfway up his shins. Over his clothes, Heoron wears thick robes made of a soft material dyed a faded black with a dark yellow trim; the neck of the robes can be pulled up to cover the lower half of his face. His cloak is dyed the same color as his robes with the same trim around the hood with a brass button to keep the cloak on.

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Personality: On the surface, Heoron appears to be a calm and almost unemotional man. If one could see the inner workings of his mine, however, they would know his mind is a constant buzz, keeping his emotions in check so he can better call upon these emotions at a later time to utilize his magic more effectively. Because of this, Heoron also seems cold and distant to anyone around him. The ability to keep his emotions in check makes him an even-tempered person, leading to him being a calm and collected individual in most situations. Of course, this does not completely excuse him from the pull of emotions at times; it only means he is much better at controlling his emotions than most people. Hobbies/interests: Heoron’s main hobby is reading the journal left behind by his surrogate father and any other book he can get ahold of. He also spends his time studying the history of the different kingdoms and attempting to track down any information he can about his parents. Skills: Heoron has become skilled in Dark Magic, focusing more on the illusion aspects. Because of his magical abilities, Heoron is able to keep his emotions in check most of the time, separate and identify them and then draw upon them at a later date to power his magic, and in turn because of his ability to keep his emotions in check Heoron is able to remain calm in most situations others would panic during and think his way out if possible. He is also light footed and can walk with little to no noise, using his magic to mask his presence and blend into the shadows in combination with this skill in order to sneak his way through the world. Years of study have made Heoron into a knowledgeable historian and an expert on what is known about Cyclops culture and history. The obsession with his parents and hunting any lead he could find about them has made Heoron into a formidable tracker and detective of sorts; he is able to gather quite a bit of clues on someone and then track them down quickly based on what he gathers about them. Backstory: Heoron was born to a male elf named Artuous and a female orc named Gretsia, but Heoron remembers nothing about them as they died when he was barely two years old. When they died, Heoron was taken in by a human named Wilem; he raised Heoron as best as he could. When Heoron was seven, Wilem began teaching him Dark Magic. Wilem lived in a small cabin in the forest and chose to train his adopted son here to prevent him from causing any damage to others or the nearby village since he could not yet control his magic with his emotions being so erratic as such a young age. In the forests of his homeland, Heoron once came across the Will-o-Wisps one night. Being a child of barely eight, Heoron ran at the glowing orbs of blue fire, sending most of the orbs scattering into the night, but there was one that did not scatter at the sight of the boy. The Will-o-Wisp was strange, it spoke to the child and had a name. This strangeness in the magical being led to the two becoming friends and companions. Because he did not have a strong hold of his emotions at first, Heoron came very near to dying and losing his magic permanently when he lost control in a fit of rage, injuring Wilem in the process. This episode happened when he was ten, and after it occurred Heoron refused to use magic after he saw what he had done to Wilem when he lost control. The two were training on a cliffside, Wilem thinking the sight and sound of the ocean would keep the boy calm, but for some reason the child couldn’t shake the thought of his parents that day and flew into a fit of rage and sorrow at their passing, sending a violent torrent of energy all around, burning Wilem badly enough to scar and wound but not fatally. After a year of coaxing after the accident, Wilem finally convinced Heoron to take up learning magic again. The child, now age eleven, took to learning how to master his emotions with a new zeal, pouring over texts and hanging on to Wilem’s every word. Heoron trained under his surrogate father for ten more years after he began anew. In learning Dark Magic, Heoron was first taught how to control and identify his emotions to control his magic and then he began learning how to turn his emotions into magical energy. Throughout these years of training, Wilem also taught Heoron how to fight with a dirk. All the while through his training, Heoron couldn’t shake the nagging feeling at the back of his head to learn more about his parents, so Wilem promised to help Heoron track down any information he could on his parents. After his training was complete, Heoron stayed with Wilem for a year until his adoptive father died of disease, which had been worsening steadily throughout Heoron’s training. In his death, Wilem left Heoron his journal with a list of names and few details on his parents. With his newly gained knowledge on his parents, Heoron has recently set out, now twenty-two to find the other members in the group of treasure hunters they belonged to. Family:

• Wilem is the human who took Heoron in when his parents died.
• Artuous is Heoron’s elven father.
• Gretsia is Heoron’s orcish mother.

Relationships: |Name of person|one-word general impression | relationship to said person |Thoughts on the character| Weaponry:

• Staff: Heoron uses his wooden staff to channel his magic. The staff itself comes to Heron’s shoulder and is made of an old dark wood. The staff looks as though it is made of multiple thick branches twisting around one another, ending with the top sloping up in two places like small wooden waves; this opening is usually occupied by Ithenul, making the staff look like it has a blue orb floating between the two small wooden slopes.
• Magic: Heoron is a practiced user of Dark Magic, focusing more on the illusionary skills within this field of magic.
• Dirk: Heoron keeps a dirk with a blade measuring one and a half feet strapped to his waist.
• Dagger: Heoron also carries a silver dagger hidden away in a sheath built into the back of his left boot.

Abilities: In a fight, Heoron is most skilled in close quarters combat, using his illusion magic to distract and confuse his enemies and then closing in to dispatch them. He is also skilled in the other aspects of Dark Magic. Despite his race’s natural slowness Heoron is able to dodge around and parry enemy blows, the former aided from his illusion magic. His main advantage comes from ambush attacks, using his magic to hide his presence and then getting the drop on his enemies. Weaknesses: Heoron’s poor eyesight prevents him from engaging in any long range combat and forces him to get close to his enemies in a fight. In a straight fight, Heoron, while not completely useless, will not last too long before he needs to flee. Of course being slow hinders his escape skills. Without his staff and his magical capabilities, Heoron is significantly hindered in his combat abilities, being much slower in blocking and parrying. Companion: Heoron’s sole companion is his familiar, a Will-o-Wisp called Ithenul. He also owns a dark chestnut-colored horse, but he does not count it as a companion since he cannot have conversations with the animal. Other: Polaris